I got my homework done early for once and updated as soon as I could.
miyame-chan: I took your advice and put POVs.
Read and comment!
THE PAVILION
HALF-MOON THEATER
FRIDAY, OCTOBER 17
8: 12 AM
Dingo's POV
Dingo Brazille walked past a clump of girls surrounding Jess Rabate. Even though he was one of the only boys on the island, they didn't so much as give him a second glance.
He walked around the side of the huge Half-Moon Theater, coming to a stop beside a metal door with the words: No Entry. The shadow of the immense amphitheater cast over him as he sent his brother a text.
The door swung open and Taz came out, tucking his phone back in his jeans pocket. "Thanks, D," he said to his twin.
"No prob. Only…" Dingo hesitated. "I've seen you break the hearts of lots of models and actresses and know you did lots more. But what's so special about her?"
"About h—? I don't know. There's something different about her."
"You say that for more than a couple people."
"This time I mean it. What's with all the questions?"
What was withallthequestions? Dingo wondered. He thought back to the night at the pool, his hand on her arm.
Sensing his brother's suspicious gaze, Dingo dropped it. "Here," he sad, handing over hi s phone and his jacket, swapping them for his brother's.
"There's an empty dressing room backstage," Taz offered, and they went back in the door, disregarding the No Entry sign. Moments later, a boy who looked very much like Dingo exited the room and composed a quick text. After he had left backstage, another boy walked out, carrying Taz's phone. That one greatly resembled Taz Brazille.
It hadn't been hard, getting them to look like each other. They already did, in fact. But the hardest part wasn't over.
What do you think? Is it too predictable or just right? Comment, please!
-MuseGoddess