The Dark Swan Draft

by JMichellex

Its been seven months since the battle but around 3 months since he broke his promise. Why did our knight break his promise? What's going to happen to our duck? Why is Drosselmeyer back? What evil tricks does he have up his sleeve? flames accepted.

14. More Drama, Romance, Suspense & Details

Hey everyone! Especially you AhiruxFakir Fans! I'm thinking of rewriting this story with more details and romantic moments between the two, more 'proper' grammar, double the suspense and longer the chapters! MUAHAHAHAHAHA So please tell your honest opinion about it and compare it..the new version which I will post in a bit and this one! This shall be known as The Dark Swan(Draft) and the new one will be The Dark Swan (rewrite)