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Here it is! I know all my chapters have been short but here's a treat! And omg! Max and the flock are in Hawaii! (0.0)
This story is full of clichés that I never meant to be used. I apologize if you see familiar patterns in this story. But never fear! This story does not have all rooms conveniently taken leaving Max and Fang to room together. It does not have that.

Freaked out, dropped my phone in the pool again
Checked out of my room hit the ATM

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Disclaimer: I do not own maximum ride or Maui. I wish I lived in Maui though (-_-)

Wednesday still, Hawaii is three hours behind. 9:00ish

Fang POV.

Naturally, I couldn't sleep the rest of the plane ride. So when the flight attendant said we were in Maui, instead of excitement, I felt tired. And weary. But seeing the overjoyed faces of everyone else raised my spirits and I cheered along with the rest of the passengers.

Fast forward the getting our luggage and stuff, soon we were cruising in our rented van to our hotel.

But anyways, we were driving the loooooong way to our hotel in Kihei. Angel, Gazzy and Ella were sleeping in the back. The moms were taking turns driving and were talking to each other in hushed voices. Yes, our van fit all of us.

I avoided eye contact with Max as we drove silently to our destination. The stupid GPS lady couldn't pronounce any of the Hawaiian names, making roads called Allekehee, (allay-ka-hey,) into Allakahey, (alley-kee-hee.) Yeah, she's obviously not Hawaiian.

It was about one am when we arrived at the hotel. Or more like motel, but it had a cozy feeling to it. It had a great looking pool in the back. I made a mental note to swim in it tomorrow. There was about six floors and the whole place was very open. There was no enclosed space, huge empty windows were all around the motel.

There were three units rented, each with two bedrooms, two bathrooms, a small kitchen and a living room, as well as a nice balcony that overlooked the pool.

The boys had one unit, the girls another and the moms the third.

Since each room had two rooms, one with a king size bed and the the other with two beds, Iggy got one bed, me the other and Gazzy got the king size. We did Rock Paper Scissors for it and Gazzy won to my despair.

Nudge later told me Max had the king, Lissa and Ella had one and Nudge and Angel shared the other. I'm guessing Max scared everyone into letting her get the king size, but whatever, they didn't seem bothered by it. I can only wonder who of the moms got the king size.

I didn't even unpack; Iggy, Gazzy and I just dumped our suitcases on the ground and fell asleep on the beds.

Max POV

So, the girls and I didn't even unpack our stuff, all we did was throw ourselves onto the bed and sleep. And I got the king size bed, I didn't even have to scare them they were so tired!

Thursday
The next morning, I was awoken to the smell of pancakes. I bolted out of bed and changed into shorts and a purple tank top. I padded out of the room and saw Lissa at the stove in the kitchen, flipping pancakes. Everyone else was eating.

"What time is it?" I asked.

"Ten am. We wanted to let you sleep" Angel smiled, her mouth full of pancake.

I smiled and helped myself to a stack of yummy pancakes.

"Where we going first?" I wanted to go to the beach. I noticed our motel was about a two minute walk to the beach.

"Shopping." Everyone said together.

"What? No!" I panicked.

"Come on Max. We want to look like the locals. Or the opposite I guess, just like tourists." Lissa grinned.

"Yeah! We wanna buy Hawaiian dresses and those cool fake plumeria flowers that clip intoyour hair! Oooh! And I saw a 24 hour open Denny's! We should go there for lunch!" Nudge rambled.

"Um, sure. But beach tomorrow!" I pointed my fork at them. "Got it?"

"Yes." They all rolled their eyes.

Everyone piled into the van and Alice drive us to a nearby strip that actually had beautiful dresses and jewelry. I bought four dresses, surprising I know! They're all halter tops. Ones purple, another is creamy with red plumeria flowers on it, another is pink and has turtles on it and the last is an uneven cut around my thighs. It's my favourite because all it is white and pink and yellow flowers.

After we spent about four hours shopping, mostly due to Nudge's pleads, we headed back to our motel to change into swimwear.

"Max, we need to talk." Fang said quietly in the elevator up to our floor, floor 4.

"About what?" I asked coolly. "You're embarrassment?"

"No! I didn't mean that!"

I glanced around our crowded elevator. The moms were too busy chatting, as well as everyone else. "Then what did you mean?"

"I meant-"

"Soooooooo, guys! Whatcha doing?" Iggy slid over to us and put his hands over our shoulders.

"Nothing." I said in a cold voice. The door dinged opened and I got out of there as fat as I could.

"Ella Lynn Martinez! Where the h e double toothpick are my swimsuits?!" I screamed.

"Back home. I bought you new ones."

"Why? I liked mine!"

"Max. They aren't even skimpy. Just because its two pieces does not mean its skimpy." Ella told me. She was decked out in a baby blue bikini with turtles on it. I had to admit, she looked great.

"But-but I paid for those!" I wailed.

"No you didn't, I did." Lissa poked her head out of the washroom. "Do you like my swim suit?"

It was a hot pink string bikini and yes, it looked good.

"Just wear it Max." Nudge sighed. She was wearing a dark red two piece. It had a little black bow in the middle of the top.

"But-"

"Max. Wear it or else I'll force it on you." Lissa threatened.

"You know what? I love the outfit." I smiled sweetly and hurriedly shut the door separating the living room to my separate room.

We all walked from our hotel to the beach. Except the moms, they said all the shopping wore them out. So it was up to me, Fang, Lissa and Iggy to keep the kids in line. Which wasn't that hard, they weren't brats or anything. Or young.

Us girls had shorts and a t-shirt over top of our swim suits, since you don't see bikini clad girls walking around back where we live. But as I looked around, girls had really short shorts, the gorgeous dresses or swimsuits on. Just swim suits. It was hot enough I guess. About thirty degrees.

When we got there, the sign said, "Kamaole Beach. Please watch out for glass and keep your dogs on leashes."

"That's a nice name. I wonder if there's a lot of glass on the beach. Oh, I wanna see a cute dog!" Nudge and Angel rambled in unison as they read each rule. Creepy.

All the girls took off their outerwear. Except me of course, because I'm so unique.

"Aren't you going to take off your shorts?" Angel asked me.

"Um, I'm cold sweetie. I might take it off later." I lied.

"Max? It's thirty two degrees." Iggy pointed out.

They were all staring at me so I yelled, "you win! Fine!" And I took off my shorts and t-shirt.

This isn't one of those cliche stories where Fang and Iggy gawk or anything. I admit I looked a-MA-zing in my purple bikini with dark purple swirls, but all I got was a muttered, "finally." From Lissa and a clap from Angel who gushed about how cute I looked.

And okay, so Fang might have looked a second too long, but that was probably Ella's plan all along.

We spent a least two hours there. The beach was beautiful. It looked like paradise, The sand was white and the perfect texture. No rock hard, or half wet half dry sand, It was warm and grainy.

"Omigosh! The water is like in all those commercials! It's like, so clear and so blue! I love blue! There's a cute guy in my class named Carson with blue eyes and-"

I cut Nudge off. "It is pretty Nudge. Why don't we go swim in it?"

Everyone nodded or in Gazzy's case, a huge, "YES!"

The water was just the right temperature. Not freezing, yet not so warm we'd suspect someone peed in it. It was sun warmed and body temperature. We lazily swam around or pretended to "jump" over waves.

We get back to our hotel and took showers in our respectful rooms. After my shower, I put on my purple dress and put a yellow fake plumeria flower clip in my hair.

Lissa left in blue ripped jean shorts and a t-shirt that said aloha. Nudge left in a red tank top and black shorts, while Angel donned some knee length shorts and an Aeropostale shirt.

We walked to the moms' room where the boys were waiting.

Gazzy was telling all the moms about our little adventure, when he stopped and said shyly, "I like your dress Max."

"Thanks Gaz."I smiled. Fang walked up to me and lazily said, "I like the dress, but you look good too."

I blushed. "Th-thanks."

He was just about to say something when Iggy ran up to us. "Hey guys! I was telling everyone about this great shave ice place I saw! We're going now."

"Thanks Iggy." I was a little disgruntled by his timing, it seemed Fang was too since he frowned.

"Come one everyone!" Anne was already walking out the door. "It's too hot in here, I need shave ice."

"Okay, so these are the flavors." Nudge looked at the menu. "Pineapple, cotton candy, orangesicle, banana, cherry, raspberry, peach, blue raspberry and blue vanilla." Nudge took a deep breath.

"I'll have peach and raspberry." Fang said.

"Mmm, blue raspberry and cotton candy for me." I said.

"That's going to stain your lips and teeth." Mom warned.

"Meh, it ain't permanent."

After I had that, I was addicted. It was soooo good and I really wanted another, but the moms said too much sugar would rot my teeth. They did get me a chocolate muffin though, since the place sold food too.

"Max, it looks like you kissed a smurf." Iggy said. Lissa giggled.

"Whatever." I stuck my tongue out and grinned.

"It looks like you ate one too judging by the colour of your teeth."

So there! The first full day in Hawaii! Shave ice was huge for me in Hawaii and its very delicious. I couldn't put how much I loved it into this chapter, unless I did a whole chapter of yum's and mmmmm's.

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