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Chapter 25! I just want to thank everyone who's reviewed or favourited or followed, thank you so much! As my science teacher would say, "you're beautiful I love you!" Yeah, my science teacher is cool that way. Oh yeah! A certain Iggys-pyro-tribute-in-the-dark gave me a wonderful idea. Read it in the comments. (And don't be afraid to lead a comment yourself!) it's not exactly your idea I-P-T-i-n-D, buts that's because I don't believe in totally using others ideas.

This is uploaded today and not on the weekend because I wrote a bunch of one shots I want to post tomorrow

I'm fifteen, for a moment
Caught in between ten and twenty and I'm, just dreaming.

My new favourite song, review or pm me the artist and the song name if you know

Disclaimer I no own. I wish I own.


Friday at 3:15 am

Max POV.

I know what you're thinking. Why is Max up at 3:15? Blame my mom. She came here when she was eighteen and went to Haleakala Crater to see the sunrise. The ride is two hours long so we'd get there just in time.

We packed chips and juice boxes and trudged or in Ella's case, actually had Iggy carry her to the van, she was just so tired. I was tempted to crawl, but would have fallen asleep on the road. And that would not be good. I didn't want to be turned into a Max pancake.

Last night was probably the best sleep I had ever gotten. I could hear the waves crashing against rocks and the wind through the palm trees. It was soothing and I had quickly fallen asleep.

We all climbed into the car in zombie like states. We stopped in at mcdonalds to get some hashbrowns and hot cakes. Nudge almost had a melt down because there was apparently no such thing as peach smoothies in maui's mcdonalds. of course, she was too tired to scream so she settled for an apple juice.

About one hour in, at 4:15, Fang leaned over from the middle row, I was in the back, he whispered, "Want a chocolate cookie?"

"Duh! Gimme!" I was awake now.

"I don't have any, I just needed you awake." He smirked.

"Gee thanks, pick on the tired one."

"We're all tired." Nudge said from the middle row.

"Whatever. What did you want to talk to me about?" I yawned.

"The moms are getting really sleepy. They've all taken turns driving and well, we have our licenses."

I let his words enter my brain. Then panic set in. "Woah! I'm not drivin up Haleakala! There's no guard rails and its like, hundreds of feet up! I'm going to kill us all!"

"Ssssh!" Fang looked worriedly at Angel and Gazzy, but they were sound asleep.

"Sorry. I can drive down the crater. There's no way I'm driving up the crater that created Maui, which has no rails, in the pitch blackness."

"There's always the headlights." Fang pointed out helpfully.

"Still. You can offer to drive up."

"Fine. Valencia?" He called softly. Mom was currently driving.

"Yes Fang?" She replied sleepily.

"I was wondering if you wanted to switch places. You seem really tired."

"Gosh, thanks. There's a little restroom and parking lot right before we start to go up. We can switch there."

"Great. Max is driving back down." He took a chip out of the bag.

"Thank you, you two. I appreciate it." She yawned.

When we got to the little pit stop place, everyone got out and slumped to the restrooms. My legs were asleep and cramped so I stretched them out. Fang switched with mom and when everyone got back to the car, he started to drive up.

I have to hand it to Fang, he didn't look freaked out. Even when we were very close to the top and actually above the clouds, he still looked calm.

When we got to the top, everyone scrambled to get out. The sun was already coming out, so we ran to a bunch of large rocks and stood on them to get a better view.

I don't know if this happened all the time, but someone started to sing. It was a sweet melody that filled the area. It spoke of the explosion that created Maui and a bunch of stuff I didn't understand. Seconds later the sun slowly came out from below. It was hard to explain, yet it was beautiful. I could actually see the sun rising and getting brighter. I looked over at Iggy and giggled as he pretended to be blinded by it.

The crater had tons of people watching the sun. There was applause and someone yelled, "that's it, shows over."

"Is that it?" Gazzy asked, pouting.

"Yup!" Ella hopped off her rock and headed towards the car. "Let's go hack to the hotel and sleep."

"Max, you're driving." Mom said.

"But-but" I sighed as she glared at me. "Fine." I crawled into the driver's seat and started to drive. I looked nervously over the end, all I could see was the clouds and very very far below, the ground. I gulped in fear and started to descend down the crater.

To say I almost killed us was an understatement. What really happened? I can't explain, it's too terrifying to think of.

... Just kidding. I'm a phenomenal driver and so not that dramatic. I easily drove back down and the car ride was filled with Iggy's snores and Nudge's soft chatter.

"Max." Fang was next to me in the passengers seat.

"What Fang?" I didn't take my eyes of the road.

"I have a confession." He said in a low voice. Glanced at him and saw his dark eyes were focused intently on my face.

"Tell me after, I have to concentrate." I honestly didn't, but I didn't feel like talking right now. His eyes were all I could see before I snapped my eyes back to the road. He was quiet the rest of the ride.


When we got to the bottom, I gratefully switched seats with Fang. We drove in silence until we heard a Lissa squeal, "OMIGOSH! Lahaina! I heard it has great shops. Can we please go there?"

"Sure Lissa." Anne said. She tapped Fang's chair. "Turn right Fang." I looked over at a large sign and yup, it said to turn right to go to Lahaina.

He pulled a sharp right turn and everyone started talking about the shops or the restaurants. Iggy mentioned a place called Bubba Gump.

"Isnt that a show?" Ella asked him.

"I don't know! But I hear it has great pop corn shrimp."

We arrived in Lahaina about half an hour later. Everyone ran out of the car to stretch their legs.

"Guys? Lets go eat first." Mom directed us toward a large restaurant that had a sign that clearly stated Bubba Gump. "Table for um, one, six, nine," she counted. "ten! Table for ten please." She told the waitress, who smiled and took us to a large table. I couldn't help but notice her flirtatious smiles towards Fang. I frowned and all out growled at him when he smirked at me.

When we ordered, I saw the waitress, who had red hair, purposely drop her pen and bend down to get it. I smirked at how Fang didn't even glance down. Her shirt was quite low. Iggy was another story and Ella smacked his arm, from which he muttered an apology.

I got the popcorn shrimp, as well as Angel, Gazzy, Iggy, Ella and Lissa. The moms and Fang got different burgers and I put up with the waitress's lingering gaze on Fang's arms and abs. Oh gosh he has abs, I can see them through his shirt. Don't ask why, I just can. She ripped out a piece of paper and scribbled on it. Then she gave it to Fang and made the universal call me sign. I almost saw red.

After she left I abruptly said, "washroom." And hurriedly walked away.

I heard footsteps behind me and assumed it was Fang's. "what do you want Fang?" I asked in a huff.

"Fang? I am not Fang. The name is Ryan." I turned around and was greeted to the sight of a cute ish boy. He had a splatter of freckles over his nose and light blue eyes. I noticed his brown hair kept getting in the way of his eyes and he kept pushing them back. He looked my age.

"Max." I looked past him and saw Fang watching. Hmm... I wonder if I could-

"I noticed you from my table. I love your shorts." He smirked. I blushed. My shorts were a gift from Lissa, they were really short and white.

"Um, thanks."

"Your shirt is quite nice too." I almost socked him in the face when I realized no, it was not my shirt he was looking at. But I really wanted to see what Fang would do, so I just smiled.

"Thanks. It's quite hot though here." I fanned myself.

"I'm guessing you're a tourist?" He put an arm on the wall. Which was right by my ear. So basically I was leaning on a wall with some cute guy's arm on one side of my head. I wonder what Fang would do if he put both arms on either side of my head. I smirked as I saw Fang's hands clench.

"Tourist. You local?" I grinned.

"Yeah. Maybe I could give you a tour around the island one day?"

"Sorry. She's busy." I craned my neck past Ryan and voila! Fang was there.

"Oh, um, who's this?" He took his arm back.

"My fri-"

"Her boyfriend." Fang growled. Ryan threw me a disgusted look before hurrying off somewhere.

"Boyfriend? Come on Fang! I was having fun! Now you know how I felt when that red headed wai-oh!" I gasped as His lips softly pressed onto mine.


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