Oh jeez, I've got to keep updated with this one. It's becoming a habit updating only once a week, hmm…maybe I should do the same updates with Love Triangle, I'll think about it. ;)

I hope this story's much better now, they're 16 (turning 17 VERY soon), parents being overshadowed by free will ghosts (ancient ghosts that defeated the Ghost King) and Danny and Sam will be getting married at the age of 18 or 19? I remember hearing a few chapters ago from someone called Anon who had told me that the story was WAY out of character but I hope it's a little better now.

And I know that no one does this nowadays but, I wouldn't mind a critique on this story and how should I end it? Any suggestions?

Danny Phantom © Butch Hartman

Maddie looked over at what Sam was wearing; she looked dazzled at the torn black dress.

"Sam, why are you wearing that?" She asked while blasting another dark shadow.

"Long story Mrs. Fenton, I'll explain later when this whole mess is over."

Jazz managed to destroy another dark shadow that had overshadowed Sam's Uncle Craig, Sam's uncle fell unconscious and then Jazz's eyes returned to their normal colour.

"Huh? What? How did I get here?"

Jazz screamed as she saw Sam, Danny and Maddie fighting a large group of dark ghosts with beady red eyes. Her worried expression turned to rage as she grabbed a ghost weapon and joined the team in order to defeat the dark shadows.

"Where did these ghosts come from?" Jazz demanded to Danny.

"I'll explain everything later I promise." Danny replied blasting another dark shadow.

Then suddenly, Sam got hit by the leader of the dark shadows. Danny screamed in fear and worry as he saw her collapse onto the ground in unbearable pain.

"Sam!" Danny screamed, he later turned his head towards the leader of the dark shadows. His expression immediately turned to rage and fury. "YOU BASTARD, I'LL KILL YOU!"

Danny flew up to him and punching him up towards the ceiling where the leader caused a large crack in the ceiling, a few pieces of the ceiling fell onto Sam and the others.

"Remember ghost hybrid. If you kill me, you kill your father."

"Jack?" Maddie asked confusingly looking at the dark shadow leader.

"Dad?" Jazz wondered.

"Your husband will die because of your son's anger Madeline."

Maddie gasped. "No one calls me that except Jack!"

The leader smirked and laughed. "I am Jack."

Maddie's feelings turned to anger; she immediately aimed her wrist weapon towards the leader and zapped him. The leader screamed in pain while Danny was preparing for his ghostly wail again.

"Let's see if it works this time."

Danny took a deep, deep breath then a large roar was heard from his small mouth. This time, all the dark shadows had been blown against one of the walls of the confined lab. You could hear the sound of screaming and thumping coming from the dark shadows banging against the wall.

It finally had worked, all the dark shadows including the leader left the bodies they had possessed and weakly left into the ghost zone while the bodies they had overshadowed fell unconscious.

Sam gasped at the sight of her cousin and uncle; she got up and dashed to them to comfort them.

"Nisha! Are you okay? Answer me!" she demanded.

Nisha moaned them moved a little but didn't open her eyes, Sam looked over at her uncle Craig, he was still unconscious.

Meanwhile, Maddie ran over to a weak and dizzy husband while Jazz ran over to one of her cousins Harry.

"Harry, are you okay? Can you hear me?"

Danny looked all around the room to see sad faces on all of them; he looked down in regret then left the room to fly somewhere quiet.

Sam looked up to see that Danny had disappeared. "Danny? Where did he go?"

Maddie and Jazz looked up as well.

"Where is Danny? He was here a second ago." Maddie wondered.

Jazz sniffled as he gently picked up one of her younger cousins named Jeffery. "I just hope our families wake up."

"I hope so to Jazz. I love Jack more than anything."

"And I love Danny, and we need to find him."

"Sam, do you realise the situation right now?"

"Yeah, we don't even have a clue what's going on."

Sam sighed as if she was tired then leant on a counter to explain to them what had happened earlier.

"Look, it's like this right? Two years ago, Danny proposed to me."

"What!? That's way too early to get engaged! You two were only 15!"

"I know, can I continue? Anyway, after you figured out Danny's secret."

"He has ghost powers right?" Maddie wondered

"Yes, when we accidently told you guys that we were getting married, you all went cheery for us. You started to hug Danny while my parents were saying that they were planning on having Danny as my husband, I didn't believe this at first. I thought it was a joke, but it seemed too convincing. Not long later, you had planned out the engagement party and had told me and Danny to go out with you guys to get something good to wear. I went out with you and Danny went out with his Dad. "

"And, I got that dress for you?"

"Well, not exactly. I actually chose it out but you said it was beautiful."

"Is that all that happened?"

"Well, then my mum was boasting about my wedding dress. We had a fight then we went to the engagement party."

"So what I'm hearing is that we all agreed on this and that you guys were probably thinking that this was a huge mistake?" Jazz suggested.

"Yeah I guess. I was having a weird feeling deep down that this was all too weird to be true and I was right when I saw all your eyes flash red."

Maddie gasped. "Oh my gosh, I'm sorry Sam. Did I hurt you?"

"You attempted to, but Danny and I managed to get the dark shadows out of you." Sam smiled weakly.

"Well I'm still sorry for you."

"Did I hurt anyone?" Jazz asked sounding worried and concerned.

"Like with your mum, you attempted to but you didn't actually hurt anyone. Although you both did get blasted by Danny a few times, but that was just because of the dark shadows."

"I see. This is all strange to me; I never thought you two would be engaged this early in life. What about college and graduation? Can you two at least do them first before you start a commitment?"

"Well sure, I was going to ask my mum about that but she kept on butting in about my wedding dress and having it white." She pouted.

"Sam, tell Danny this when you find him. You two are not getting engaged at this age."

Sam smiled. "Of course I will."

About an hour or later, Sam was at her house explaining what had happened to her parents. They were shocked at how they acted about Sam and Danny being engaged, they demanded that Danny and Sam stay boyfriend and girlfriend until they were both 18.

Sam was happy about this, it felt much more right. She would figure everything else out after she had told Danny about what their parents had demanded.

Sam was lying on her bed with her hands behind her head; she was gazing at the ceiling and wondering about the future. She was thinking about what would happen after she had turned 18 and graduated. Could Danny propose the or just surprise her? She thought either way was just as good.

And suddenly, it got a little chilly. The bare skin of hers started to prickle up and form into goose bumps. She smiled briefly then sat up to see Danny sitting beside her.

"Sam, I'm sorry I left earlier. I was just so upset and furious at what had happened to our families."

"I was too, I would have run too. But your mother wanted to know the truth."

"I knew she would, did the rest of my family make a recovery?"

"After half an hour they did, as well as mine. They're all back at home where they belong. I explained to each and every one of them about what had happened to them and about our marriage."

"What happened after you told my mum?" Danny asked sounding worried as he looked down in guilt.

"She told me to tell you to call off this whole commitment."
"I wouldn't have guessed." Danny smiled.

"You're not angry or anything are you?"

"No of course not."

"My mum said that you can propose to me either when I turn 18 or graduate."

"I'll surprise you." Danny smirked.

"Of course you will."

"Like what I'm about to do now."

Sam was wide-eyed as Danny rubbed his lips against her soft lilac lips, the pleasure ran through her veins as Danny pushed her onto the bed into another intimate kiss. Danny cupped her cheeks then ran his gloved hands through her long, soft black hair.

They broke apart after a few minutes.

"Let's just stay like this for a couple more years hm?" Danny suggested.

"Of course Danny, that's what I was hoping you would say."

Phew, it's all back to normal. And after Danny and Sam turn 18, that's when they'll decide to tie the knot-whoops…I just gave you a spoiler *face palm*

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