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Brittany's POV
We went back into the gym, we were surprised to see Simon on stage with a guitar.
"This one's for Jeanette."
He started playing his guitar...
Simon's POV few minutes ago
I watched as my older brother took her girlfriend's wrist, jumped off the fountain rim, and led her outside. I had no idea what they were up too, maybe their going to- ahh never mind.
Me and Jeanette continued dancing around with the music, I placed my paws on her waist, her arms wrapped around my neck. We swayed back and forth with the music. We looked at each other's eyes while dancing, my sight meeting those shiny amethyst spheres. I couldn't describe how beautiful she was in her dress.
As the music went slow, we moved closer to each other, Jeanette laid her face on my shoulder. I pulled her into a gently, soothing hug.
"Simon?" He called me.
"Yes?" I answered.
"I feel so warm tonight, I'm so happy that I'm with you." She said, making me lay my chin on her shoulder.
"Me too, I'm happy that I'm with you. It's just that I love you, Jeanette." I said.
"I love you too, Simon. That's why I chose you, you're smart, caring, independent, charming." She said, making me blush. "Why did you choose me, Simon? Of all my sisters, why'd you chose me." She asked, I smiled.
"I like you for the way you are, Jeanette." I said.
"But why me? I'm not as beautiful as Brittany, or as sweet as Eleanor." She said, insecurely. "Maybe you deserve someone else." She said. I frowned. What is she thinking? All I want is her. What she said isn't true. She's the most beautiful girl I've ever met. I pulled out of the embrace and said to her.
"Jeanette, that's not true. I don't deserve someone else, all I want is you. You don't have to be more beautiful than Brittany, or as sweet as Eleanor. You're intelligent, shy, timid, that's what I like about you. You don't have to be like your sisters for you to deserve me, we deserve each other."
She didn't say anything. She hung her head, looking at the ground and sighed.
"Maybe you don't need to be that insecure, Jeanette. You're beautiful, sweet, and smart. You have your own personality that I like."
Still, she didn't say anything.
"Maybe a simple talk won't do it." I said as I walked away from her.
Jeanette's POV
Why did he like me that much, do I really deserve someone like him? Does he deserve someone like me? An clumsy and insecure chipmunk. Someone who's such a klutz that she manages to stumble down on anything or bump on anyone.
"Maybe you don't need to be that insecure, Jeanette. You're beautiful, sweet, and smart. You have your own personality that I like." He said. But I didn't listen. I didn't believe. I think he's just saying that to make me feel better. But he sounds so sincere.
"Maybe a simple talk won't do it." He said, walking away from me. I watched him getting farther. Maybe I was a little too insecure.
"Wait, Simon!" I called, pleaded him not to leave. But it was too late, I lost him in the crowd. I didn't dare to go after him, I just jumped off the fountain, sat on the nearest bench.
Tears started to stream down my cheeks. It's my fault, he left me. I was too insecure for him, maybe he doesn't deserve me, after all.
"Hey, Jeanette, what's wrong?" I was approached by my little sister with her boyfriend, Theodore.
I hid my face, hiding my fur, dampened from tears.
"Come on, Jeanette, what happened? Where's Simon?" Theodore asked.
"He doesn't like me, he walked out on me." I said, sniffing at the last word with clear disappointment in my voice.
"What? Simon would never do anything like that, Jeanette." Theodore told me. Something boiled inside me
"WELL IN CASE YOU HAVEN'T LISTENED, THEODORE, HE JUST DID! HE JUST WALKED OUT ON ME LIKE A MINUTE AGO!" I yelled, frustrated, heart broken.
"JEANETTE!" Eleanor scolded me. I snapped back to my senses with a sigh.
"Sorry, Theodore, it's just tha-" Before I could say anything else, a voice came from the stage.
"Hi, everyone." Wait, that sounded like... I looked up on the stage, and just as I thought, Simon. What's he going to do now?
"I'd like to sing a song for a very lovely chipette." I stood up from the bench and gasped. "Jeanette, you're beautiful and you just don't know it. You're insecurity gets the best of you and is keeping you from accepting who you really are. You're beautiful, kind, shy, and intelligent. Now, here's a song I would like to describe you with, and to tell you how much you brighten my world up." He said, my heart melted. So he didn't walk out on me? The students started cheering and hooting.
He strummed his guitar for the intro and started singing the first verse.
You're insecure
Don't know what for
You're turning heads when you walk through the door
Don't need make up
To cover up
Being the way that you are is enough
Everyone else in the room can see it
Everyone else but you
Baby you light up my world like nobody else
The way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed
But when you smile at the ground it aint hard to tell
You don't know
Oh Oh
You don't know you're beautiful
This song really describes me?
If only you saw what I can see
You'll understand why I want you so desperately
Right now I'm looking at you and I can't believe
You don't know
Oh oh
You don't know you're beautiful
Oh oh
That what makes you beautiful
So c-come on
You got it wrong
To prove I'm right I put it in a song
I don't know why
You're being shy
And turn away when I look into your eyes
Everyone else in the room can see it
Everyone else but you
Baby you light up my world like nobody else
The way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed
But when you smile at the ground it aint hard to tell
You don't know
Oh oh
You don't know you're beautiful
If only you saw what I can see
You'll understand why I want you so desperately
Right now I'm looking at you and I can't believe
You don't know
Oh oh
You don't know you're beautiful
Oh oh
That's what makes you beautiful
After the song, and one last strum, he said "Jeanette, whoever you think you are, whatever you wish to become, whatever you think of yourself, by being just the way you are, I love you. Don't think of yourself as an inferior, because to me, you're the most beautiful creature that ever stepped foot into this planet."
My tears of sadness quickly turned into tears of joy. He climbed down the stage, I waited for him to approach me. After a couple of seconds, he finally emerged from the crowd. As soon as I saw him, tears of joy streamed down on my cheeks as I ran quickly and gave him a hug.
"Simon, thank you!" I laid my eyes on his shoulder, wiping the tears.
He wrapped his arms on my back. "Always remember, Jeanette, whatever you think you are, you'll always be beautiful through my eyes." He said, making me blush deeply.
"I love you, Simon, I really do. I mean it." I said, burying my face deeper into his shoulder.
"I love you too, Jeanette." He said.
"Prove it, scream it to the world." I said.
He leaned in closer to my ear and whispered. "I love you, Jeanette."
"Simon, why'd you whisper?" I said, pulling away from the hug.
"Because you are my world, Jeanette." He said.
I cried harder in happiness. "I love you, Simon." I said, wiping my tear - dampened fur on his shoulder.
I got my face up from his shoulder and looked at him. I looked deep into his eyes, the most beautiful blue beryl gem in the whole world. The owner of it raised a finger on my face and wiped the remaining tears I had. As if time was in slow motion, I inched in closer to his face, he did the same. We moved closer, my heart racing in each passing moment. I closed my eyes as we continued inching in closer towards each other's face. I could feel my snout already made contact with his, we moved it aside and went closer until I finally met his lips. I pressed up against his lips hard. I knew I had to make the first move, so I opened my mouth and slowly pushed my tongue inside his mouth. I moaned passionately as I continued my exploration inside his mouth, our tongues met each other's touch, making me sigh. My tail raised up in surprise and my heart continued beating faster. This was just like my dream. He grabbed me by waist and pulled me closer to his. I too, wrapped paws around his neck, pulling him into a deeper kiss.
"Hey, guys, break it up. You're making quite a scene here." The romantic moment was interrupted by a high pitched voice, possibly belonging to Simon's older brother.
We broke away from the kiss. We looked around and saw our siblings staring at us, along with most of the students. I looked at Simon who was scratching the back of his head in embarrassment, while I blushed deeply under my fur.
As soon as every dispersed, we both sighed in relief. I looked at Simon, he too, was looking at me.
"Simon, that was amazing. That was our first kiss. That was so passionate and love - filled." I commented.
"Am I really that good of a kisser?" He asked shyly.
I leaned in forward and gave him another kiss. "Does that answer your question?" I said. "You know, I'm really glad that I have you. You make the most romantic night, you're the most roma-" I was interrupted his lips pressed up against mine.
"Are you telling me to shut up, Simon?" I asked with a grin on my face.
He chuckled. "I just wanted to kiss you, and hopefully to stop you from making me blush." He said. "You know, I really love you. You're just the most beautiful chipmunk I've ever seen. I mean you've go-" I didn't let him finish. I cut him off by pulling him into another passionate kiss.
Once I pulled out, he looked at me with a smile. "Hey, you stole that from me." He said.
"I just wanted to kiss you, and hopefully to stop you from making me blush." I took his sentence and used it against him.
"You took that from me too." He said.
I giggled as I moved in closer to him, placing a paw on his chest, a finger from my other paw raised his chin up.
"Stop talking." I said, seductively as I pulled him to another passionate kiss.
I gave him a hug after we pulled out. It was quarter to 8, so we're going to have to leave in at least 30 minutes.
I don't care, this prom ended with a blast, my most romantic night yet, thanks to Simon.
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I'm still thinking of a new title for the next sequel. So far, I'm still sticking to "The First dates".
12:30AM 6/3/12
Good afternoon, yanks, and see you tomorrow. Or at least in my language, Ma-ayung hapun sa inyu, manga Amer'kano hantud ugma!