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Chapter 2
Cole's POV
Everybody was eating Zane's cooking when I hear something in the distance.
"Hey guys, be quiet for a minute," I commanded. Everyone was listening for something.
Faint voices were heard saying "…Yay…their back…"
"We're home," Jay exclaimed. Everybody got up and ran out to the deck. Jay's parents, Dareth, and my dad were at the front of the crowd.
All of us were so excited to be home in Ninjago. We planned on spending a day just relaxing and not fighting. Tomorrow will be the start of our next journey; looking for the other three ninja.
Nya landed the ship and we all jumped off to see everybody.
"Oh, Jay, we missed you so much," Jay's mom said. "We're glad your home safe son," his dad finished. Jay went over and hugged his parents. "I missed you, too," Jay replied.
I went over to see my dad who looked very pleased at me. I never expected him to be so accepting of this ninja stuff. He always wanted me to be a dancer and a singer, but I wasn't good at that. I'm great at being a ninja. He learned to accept me as a ninja when I danced/fought at the Ninjago talent show to get the blade cup.
"I am so proud of you son. You defeated the Over Lord with your team and saved Ninjago," my dad spoke. He had that genuine look in his eyes that every son wishes to see in his father's eyes.
"Thanks dad," we hugged out our greeting while everybody else in our group came over.
"Now don't forget about the Honorary Brown Ninja, I did do most of the work," Dareth stated while he struck a pose. He did control the stone army.
"Now how could we forget you," Kai replied and patted him on the back in a joking manner. We all laughed and started toward Ninjgo City. I felt like nothing could ruin this moment.
Just as we were entering the city, we heard a shriek from out of nowhere. Instinctively, Jay, Kai, Zane, and I ran to where the scream came from. It wasn't hard to find because many people were running from a building like wild geese.
"What could be going off inside that building?" Jay questioned. We all stared at the building because there wasn't a way to get in. Too many people were running out of the building to get in. The building was an apartment building, so we knew there would be a crowd of people.
Before anybody could even answer, a wolf jumped from the tow story window. "Wolves don't usually live around Ninjago," Zane spoke what was going through my mind.
This wolf wasn't an average wolf. It had really dark, almost black, blue fur. I knew something was up because wolves don't have blue fur. Also, it looked at us with its eyes in a maniacal manner. Now this wasn't a usual angry look a dog or wolf would give, but one saying that he was your enemy and that he was better than you were.
We stared at it suspiciously for a few seconds before black aura engulfed the animal. Then the form started to shift. We could see the shape of a tall, built male standing in front of him. His hair was the same color as his fur, and he looked like he could fight.
"So… you are the great ninja's from Ninjago," the suspicious male remarked. He crossed his arms and was studying us intently. His eyes were a dark blue and didn't let anybody see how he was feeling deep inside.
"Yeah… why do you want to know?" Kai questioned. No one knew who this guy was or what he wanted.
"Just… wondering," he replied while turning around. When his back was turned to us, a black oval shot up out of the ground and swallowed him.
"Where did he go?" Zane asked. Everyone was staring in the direction that the strange guy was, but didn't know what to look at.
"I have absolutely no clue," I said. I was still looking at the area around where he was standing. Maybe there was a clue on how he vanished from sight.
"Well, now. He must have thought that we were too strong for him and scurried off," Jay snorted. He stuck out his chest like he won a battle
"That's not what happened at all, Jay," Kai shot down. "He came here to see who we are. He's an enemy and wanted to know who protects Ninjago and how strong we are." Kai crossed his arms in frustration.
The rest of the gang came running up. "What was that all about?" my dad questioned the scene that just played out.
I finally recovered and replied, "I don't know, but we're going to have to be careful. Keep on your guard. He is not one to mess with." Everybody nodded at my command.
The rest of the day was left to hang out with our families. Who knows when we are going to be able to see them again?
So, there you have it folks. Also, I need ideas for the new ninja. I could make them up as I go, but I think that you guys could come up with some awesome ideas.
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