Finding Family chapter 11

Ncalkins doesn't own Harry Potter or Percy Jackson; ooc; might be au; thanks beta DarkLadyIreth

Harry ran like a hell hound was on his trail, he couldn't believe Apollo said those things to him! As Harry ran he headed for the woods, he felt a godly presence behind him.

'Thanatos?' Harry thought as he unwillingly slowed down, he felt weak as if there was something inside of him pulling away all of his energy.

Harry stopped and turned to face Thanatos, "Thanatos I feel strange…Almost sluggish."

Thanatos stopped right in front of Harry, looking into his green eyes. Thanatos felt a stab of fear, his beautiful love was going to die.

"You're dieing." Thanatos said bluntly, "Harry I love you, I always will. Apollo-"

He was cut off by Harry, "Apollo is good for nothing! Thanatos how long do I have to live?"

"A couple of minutes at the most." Answered Thanatos darkly. " The potion seems to be affecting you as well as your magic."

Harry nodded and walked off, "Where are you going?" Shouted Thanatos

"To Aphrodite I want to stop this before I die!" Shouted Harry as he broke into a run toward the before mentioned Goddess's cabin.

"Damn it." Muttered Thanatos as he chased after Harry. They appeared in front of the Aphrodite cabin in a matter of seconds turns out they were really close to it. Harry barged in ignoring the sequel of changing girls, he marched right up to Aphrodite and hissed, "What's the antidote!"

Aphrodite tried to look innocent, "What antidote?"

Harry snarled as he grabbed the front of her shirt, "Don't toy with me! I'm about to die and I want the antidote NOW!"

Aphrodite felt a sliver of fear what would the big three do to her if he died. "There is no antidote." She said, "Accept you fate or die. Really the answer is clear, you already love them. Just give in."

"That's not the point." Shouted Harry forgetting Thanatos was behind him and he heard everything Aphrodite said, but she didn't miss the look of pure joy on his face. "I'm sick of everyone trying to control my life!"

Harry stopped his heart throbbed and he gasped letting go of Aphrodite. "Besides," He rasped out, "Apollo has rejected me."

With that said Harry fell to that cabin floor, screams all around him as blood spurted from his nose, ears and eyes. The last thing he heard was Thanatos screaming his name.

Review

Sorry it's crap! I feel restless, and this chapter sounds like a bad soap opera. You know something's bothering me. Have you guys ever noticed that when you read a story the man guy character falls in love instantly with the main girl or a girl character. But she see him as a brother/friend/nothing and she acts like a bitch toward him. Then she finds out his part of a big thing or he's really powerful or he saves her life and out of nowhere she fall in love with him?

And I have another problem there are a lot of good Percy Jackson stories out there, but there Perbeth. I don't really like that pairing, because if you read the beginning of the series and maybe the other books Annabeth is really unfair to Percy. In the Lighting Thief read from when he first meets her to when he ask if they can work together. It's not just Annabeth though it's Chiron too, he ask sensible questions and they treat him like an idiot! He just lost his mother so he could be I don't know in shock?

But anyway I have quit stories that seemed really good more then once because of Perbeth. My stomach actually rolls at it and I skip Annabeth's pov. a lot So I need help. Explain to me the appeal of Percy and Annabeth paring.

Help me stomach that paring so I can read good stories! But don't start going on about how they will be together forever, cause dose anyone really see that? You can say that but I don't see it maybe a week, month possibly a year? Other wise I know a song that fits perfectly for them when they break up if they do, sung by Percy. It's called, "Hate (I really don't like you)" By the plain white-T

Here's the lyrics sorry for my rant just think of what I said and maybe help me out. I got this from you tube I Own nothing! Please don't flame me! Warning: This rant may appear on my other stories.

Love love love love love loveYou were everything I wantedYou were everything a girl could beThen you left me brokenheartedNow you don't mean a thing to meAll I wanted was yourLove love love love love loveHate is a strong wordBut I really, really, really don't like youNow that it's overI don't even know what I liked about youBrought you around and you just brought me downHate is a strong wordBut I really, really, really don't like youI really don't like youThought that everything was perfect (perfect)Isn't that how it's supposed to be?Thought you thought that I was worth itNow I think a little differentlyAll I wanted was yourLove love love love love loveHate is a strong wordBut I really, really, really don't like you (I really don't like you)Now that it's overI don't even know what I liked about you (liked about you)Brought you around and you just br ought me downHate is a strong wordBut I really, really, really don't like youNow that it's over you can't hurt meNow that it's over you can't bring me downOh oh oh oh oh ohOh oh oh oh oh ohAll I wanted was yourLove love love love love love(Hate) Hate is a strong wordBut I really, really, really don't like you (I really don't like you)Now that it's overI don't even know what I liked about you (liked about you)Brought you around and you just brought me down(Hate) Hate is a strong wordBut I really, really, really don't like you(Oh oh oh oh oh oh)I really don't like you(Oh oh oh oh oh oh)I really don't like you(Oh oh oh oh oh oh)I really don't like you(Oh oh oh oh oh oh)