Thank you for the criticism mcknight93 I am going to take it to heart and use it.
Chapter 2: Part confession and Daphne meets Peter Parker
Remember in the last chapter that I mentioned myself; well I was not exactly on the bus yet I was, confusing I know. To clarify I am still the narrator but there are times where I do make mistakes. I do not know everything so I could only assume things. I will appear later in third person in the background but not now. Speaking of that I just blabbed away a whole paragraph on a slight annoying white lie I told.
Daphne was getting ready for school. She was nearly done applying her makeup and she knew the bus was coming in less than 15 minutes. She was halfway down the stairs when she trip over one of Fred's trap rope they used to catch ghosts.
Fred was outside waiting for Daphne as she was yelling, "Help".
She certainly lived up to the name Danger-prone Daphne. This was the fourth time she stumbled over Fred's trap this week.
Daphne yelling dragged to outside of the Blake's mansion where Fred was standing. Fred saw that the door was ajar and saw Daphne was trapped in his trap for the fourth time this week. If you have not followed, today is Thursday and Daphne was starting to get annoyed by Fred's trap that she was stuck in yet again. She watched as Fred cut the rope of the net. She nearly landed hard on her floor if Fred did not catch her.
Daphne asked Fred "Can you please put me down?"
Fred said "Sure, Daphne."
Daphne was glad to be on the ground to a certain degree. She glanced at her phone, which said it was only three minutes until the school bus arrived. Daphne knew that it would take five minutes to get to the bus stop so she called Fred and told him that they were going to be late if they did not hurry.
Daphne was running to catch the bus and she barely made it on to the bus with Fred arriving five seconds later. She walked and saw her booth was empty and she allowed Fred to sit in first. She sat after she called to Velma and said thank you and noticed the new boy sitting next to Velma.
Daphne first noticed the boy was nerdy but cute with brown wavy hair. He was the new boy that the teachers kept mentioning. Daphne was scanning her memory when she suddenly remembers his name was Peter Parker. The thing that made her move to ask him a question was the fact that he was the only boy who captured pictures of Spiderman but before she could make it there, the bus jerked and was parked in front of Coolsville high school fifteen minutes before class.
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