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Chapter 3: Coolsville high tour, hospital narrator and the first three villains
The Bus jerked and sent Daphne flying as they parked. Peter's spider sense alerted him that there was trouble. Daphne was nearly to the floor when Peter quickly grabs her head and picks her up.
Daphne said to peter "Thanks Peter let me give you a quick tour of the school with my friends."
Peter was first in shock from the request that Daphne offered him.
He responded slowly "Thanks Daphne it would help me get around the building and not run into any trouble."
Trouble always finds Peter with bullies pestering him about being a nerd. Daphne called over Fred, Velma, Shaggy and the only mystery-solving dog Scooby Doo. Peter nervously walked into Coolsville High following Daphne and friends.
Daphne was very agile as she showed Peter the school. She was one of the few students who knew everything about Coolsville High. She would occasionally glance back afraid that she was alone and had lost track of her friends and Peter. She had not but she still had a weird feeling about Peter. She rarely felt this way about anyone except for Fred and Spiderman. Peter eyes kept on wondering around the school searching for something.
Peter was somewhat happy when he first entered Coolsville High because it was not as big as it looked. Peter was always looking around to keep track of where they were.
Velma broke the silence saying "Peter where are you working in Coolsville?"
Peter knew the answer to that question and answered it swiftly "The Daily Photographing." The Daily photographing company was a small industry run by J. Jonah Jameson's cousin. His cousin was D. John Jameson.
Daphne was happy to know something new about Peter. She felt a little bit better. She pointed where the science lab was which happened to be Peter's and mystery Incorporated first class.
Shaggy told Scooby "Scooby I will see you outside at lunchtime."
Scooby sadly said "Rokay Raggy" and left the gang behind. The bell rang and the first class was in session.
Peter was especially happy that his fist class was science lab. Science was his all-time favorite class and obviously Velma's favorite class. It happened to be Daphne least favorite class and her worst class. She dreaded going to science class or lab. The teacher paired up the class, which made Shaggy and Velma lab panthers, Fred with someone else and Daphne and Peter were lab panthers.
Daphne was happy to be lab panthers with Peter. She would be able to get to know him better.
Daphne asked Peter "What did the teacher say to do with these chemicals."
Peter told her that the teacher said, "She told us to mix the chemicals in the beaker and not to mix them in the test tubes because it was highly dangerous to do and cause you a huge explosion."
Daphne was glad to know what to do and to not get hurt which would just prove her danger prone Daphne act.
Peter was happy to know in friends in Mystery Incorporated. He still had the slight problem of Scooby knowing his secret but it was not too much to worry. He realized it was different. Peter felt the day rushed by as class after class flew by leaving him to wonder and daydream. Peter had already gone early yesterday to the Daily Photography so he knew that they wanted pictures of Mystery Incorporated defeating a monster and saving the town of Coolsville.
Daphne felt the day go by in a blur as class after lass flew by leaving her with a lot of time to wonder where they would wind up today when they solved mystery. She scanned her brain for how many times she was captured by the ghosts, monsters and ghouls. Mystery Incorporated always found about the real person behind the mask. Daphne was already somewhat excited to spend some more time with Peter, as he would help them solve their mysteries and it made Daphne feel better to know that he was there but first she would have to complete her homework.
Peter was excited to finally help Mystery Incorporated and earn some money to help his Aunt May to pay their bills because Uncle Ben had died due to Peter as Spiderman not stopping a robber who killed his uncle. It stayed with Peter along with the death of his parents. He already had his camera packed and he just stood there waiting for the Mystery Machine. Peter was not used to waiting because the villains always were then when Spiderman was. Peter could have sworn he was being watched but he was very wrong.
Daphne was having a hard time trying to find something to wear for this first mystery solving with Peter helping them. She finally found a purple dress and a pair of purple high heels. She thought about instead of the purple high heels to wear purple sneakers but decided to put them in her beautiful green purse along with extra socks. The Mystery Machine was already outside her house with just Fred driving it. She boarded the van ready to go pick peter and the rest of the gang. Daphne felt the breeze as they drove to go and get Peter at his house.
Peter was dressed in a dark black shirt and a pair of jeans, which were comfortable in its own weird way. Peter saw the van he would be riding in with Daphne and the rest of mystery incorporated. He took note that it had two different flowers, a back entrance and a three-way seat in the front.
Daphne called peter "Peter come and sit in the front with me." Peter gladly sat in the front and watched as he saw them arrive at Velma's house.
Velma's house was small compared to Daphne's house but only a little bigger than Peter's house. Velma was already standing outside waiting for Fred and the rest of the gang and Peter. She saw the van arrived with Fred, Daphne and Peter sitting in the front and she guessed that she would be the back with Shaggy and Scooby. She did not mind it right now but it would certainly be awkward because Shaggy kind of loved Velma and got star struck by her smarts.
Scooby was eating a triple decker sandwich as he saw the Mystery Machine arrive.
He called Shaggy "Raggy rhe Rystery Rachine ris rere."
Shaggy went downstairs and told Scooby "Scoob we got to go so finish eating your triple decker sandwich." Shaggy and Scooby exited their house and went into the Mystery Machine.
The image started to blur and I was at a different scene that took place in New York City Mental Asylum. It showed the Green Goblin being transferred to Coolsville Mental Home. He was getting too much for the guards in New York. He was being transferred on the bus with another villain from the New York jail cells.
That image blurred again and showed a New York jail cell. The jail cell showed Electro, another one of Spiderman's past villains. He had on superpower cufflinks, which held his power. He was being held in the same truck as the Green Goblin.
The image blurred as my body took a giant painful turn on the hospital bed and heads back to Scooby and the gang. My mind was starting to lose control of my powerful powers. They were starting to burn me out since my last use when I helped Mystery Incorporated. They blew up in my face literally and wound me in this hospital. I had to focus and I start to repoint the moving Mystery Machine a few minutes later.
When the narrator vision was flickering, Peter was wondering who would be the first ghost he helped Mystery incorporated solve. Fred was heading to the Local Coolsville jewelry store.
Peter took note of that as Fred parked the van and told the gang "Let's go investigate this new mystery at the Coolsville jewelry store."
Daphne was in the store waiting as Fred asked the owner if he could see the video feeds from last night.
The owner nervously answered "Sure here they are and there is a television behind you." Fred inserted the tape and saw the video feed.
The first to react was Velma and said, "That's the ghost of the creeper who we locked up years ago and we still have that costume. Someone must have remade one to rob this jewelry store." The room went quiet as everyone pondered who could have remade this costume.
Peter wondered how many monsters Daphne and her friends encountered. He knew from the look on everyone's face that somehow this past villain had been remade.
Peter finally decided to speak up and asked, "So now do we look for clues in this jewelry shop."
Fred replied, "We should look for this creeper impersonator in the alleyway behind the Jewelry shop."
Shaggy and Scooby replied with a bunch of no and Shaggy said, "We'll go investigate the pizza parlor across the street.
Daphne follows Fred and Peter into the alleyway while Velma questioned the jewelry storeowner about what jewels were missing. Daphne looked at the alleyway and all the dust that collected on her clothes and sneakers. She tripped over the gang first clue, which was filled with dirt, and dead autumn leaves.
Daphne said, "I think I just found our first clue."
Shaggy and Scooby were eating a giant pizza pie. They were very hungry and at it very fast and swiftly. They then started to head back to the jewelry store to find out what scary place they would be venturing into this time.
Velma finally found out that three priceless rubies and sapphires and emeralds were stolen from the shop.
She told Shaggy and he responded "Velma maybe the villain a big Pokémon fan. Get it Scooby?"
Scooby laughed and said "Ro Raggy Ri Ron't Ret Rit."
Daphne was about to turn the alleyway to check the back entrance of the jewelry store, a mugger grabbed her. She screamed for help and yet no one came for her at first. She was being dragged out of the other alleyway but Peter was there.
Peter tackled the mugger and pinned him to the ground. His spider sense told him Daphne was in trouble. He ran to go to save Daphne and he did.
Daphne watched in shock as he tackled the man who grabbed her and she thought, "He's so brave for saving me."
My vision started to reblur and show me the truck that held the two villains from Spiderman's past.
Green goblin told Electro "When we reach Coolsville we will break free from the truck and destroy Spiderman." My vision blurred and I lost conscience.
Please comment, favorite and review if you want the narrator to live and don't worry mcknight93 suggestion 2 will be used in chapter 4.