Chapter 4: Jeepers it is the creeper the remix and Mary Jane

I felt a rush as Doctor Mcknight93 brought me back to conscience. The room went dead silent as my vision started to swirl again. It showed the jewelry store where Shaggy and Scooby had reunited with Velma. Let us get back on this story track and hope the gang finds some suspects.

Peter Parker was helping Daphne getting up from the floor, which the mugger who hit her pushed her down.

Peter asked her "Are you okay?"

Daphne replied with a meek okay and they headed back to the jewelry store. Fred was already in the store and was happy that Peter found Daphne and was now ready to start to solve this mystery.

Velma was ready for Fred to say, "Let's spilt up and looks for clues" and he did just that in a matter of three seconds.

Fred said, "Daphne, Peter and I will check out the town's alleyways for clues and Velma, Shaggy and Scooby go to check the town cemetery.

Shaggy said, "No way are we going check out the cemetery again just to find the new creeper to chase us again we'll check the town's farm and forest land.

Fred replied to Shaggy "Sure Shaggy and we will check out the alleyways and the employee's cars for clues. Velma dragged to the two chickens to the town's forest to search for clues.

Peter hurried to follow Fred and Daphne to go to check the town's back alleyways. The alleyways were empty of clues and even of the old Creeper himself. Fred checked all the employees car except the manger's which he didn't have the key to check and was found nowhere within all of Coolsville. Daphne led them through the final alleyway where she just upped and vanished to Fred and Peter and they checked everywhere to find her but she was nowhere to be found. She vanished in the final alleyway and Freed and Peter went into the forest to find the rest of the gang.

Shaggy hated any place spooky, which would include forests, cemeteries, and old mansions and any place that was deserted due to the fact they held ghosts. Shaggy knew that he would wind finding the Creeper along with Scooby. Velma was right in front of them for the whole time except for when they arrived in the road intersections. Velma stepped into it first and went right and she just vanished straight into the rock wall. She had actually fallen and stumbled across something that was important to this whole mystery. Shaggy decided to go straight leaving Scooby utterly alone.

Scooby was scared when he saw shaggy go north and followed him but just liked Daphne and Velma, Shaggy had just vanished so Scooby went to the left and wound up at an old abandoned farm, which had a few baby chicks' eggs left by the previous owners, and so they hatched and six of them called Scooby "Momma".

Scooby said "Roh ro rot rgain" Scooby already played momma to another chick the last time the gang encountered the Creeper. Scooby leaned against the hen house wall and the six chicks followed and fell in too to follow their new Momma.

Fred and Peter were almost at the forest but they reached the three way cross path and had to choose which to go so Fred went right and the same way Velma went but he found a short pathway which lead him to dead alleyway which he leaned against and fell into same as everyone else.

Peter stumbled across the farm; that Scooby vanished on. On the farm, there stood a blond woman who peter loved. Yes, it is Mary Jane his first love and Shaggy's second love. First, let me explain something when Shaggy was on Spooky Island he met a down to earth named Mary Jane who he grew to love. She was on high school break and was possessed by one of the evil monsters and this was that same Mary Jane who Peter loved. It is really a small world after all.

Mary Jane had come to Coolsville to find Shaggy and not Peter. She was very surprised to see him. She expected Peter to be with someone from Mystery incorporated but there was no one behind him.

Mary Jane asked, "Have you seen anyone from Mystery incorporated."

Peter replied calmly "I was with Fred and Daphne except Daphne just vanished into an alleyway and Fred disappeared too because I found him in no direction and I have yet to find Velma, Shaggy or Scooby."

They both heard a thud, which were Scooby and the baby chicks entering the vanishing point. Mary Jane and Peter rushed to the hen house to find the baby chicks jumping into the vanishing point, which

Peter pressed against the wall, it opened, and there stood Scooby and six eager chicks calling Scooby "Momma." The remaining four that hatched referred to Mary Jane as their momma.

Remember when Daphne first vanished in the alleyway Here is what happened form her perspective .Daphne reached a dead end in that alleyway and leaned against the wall to change into her sneakers. The passageway opened and she entered it. She shrieked as it closed behind her and left no one to see her so she continued to follow the passageway.

Remember when Velma vanished trying to find her glasses. You guessed she wound up in the same secret passageway as Daphne. Here is what happened to her. She dropped her glasses, found them, and leaned against a wall and she walked into the passageway, which closed behind her. She tried to push it open but it would not budge so she started to head north in the passageway.

Remember when Shaggy disappeared into a mysterious place He just upped and vanished. Yes, he also found the secret passageway. Here's his perspective of what happened. Shaggy headed north and reached a dead end. He was scared, ran into the wall, and fell into the secret passageway. He was terrified as the secret passageway closed behind him and he ran and just kept running hoping he could find something.

Remember when Fred disappeared into the mysterious and very random secret road. Here is what happened from his perspective. Fred had found a secret pathway and decided to follow it. It led him to a dead end wall. He leaned against the wall and it flipped him into the secret passageway. He immediately went north. Hmm everyone is going north; I guess that meant they would eventually run into each other.

Peter stared at the secret passageway hoping that he could see the end. He was not happy to be stuck with Scooby and Mary Jane even though they were well acquainted. Mary Jane gave Scooby some Scooby snacks so he would not be afraid to go north. It did not bug me to be with either of these two people except for the fact they both knew I was Spiderman. I excepted a handful of questions but none left either their mouths. The only things around me were the ten baby chicks that thought Scooby and Mary Jane were their momma. The passageway felt like it has gone on forever but I saw a light where Fred nearly came ramming into us.

Fred said, "I found you guys, I was starting to wonder if I was the only one in this passageway. Scooby pointed his paws to the six little chicks.

Fred replied to that "Is this another batch who thinks that you're their momma. Scooby replied with a yes.

Daphne was tired of walking alone. She walked for what felt like miles through this small passageway. She was utterly alone and felt sad. Her mind was too exploded form boredom until she collided with Velma.

Velma said "Ouch, Daphne I found you and I thought I was the only one in this passageway."

Daphne replied with "Same here"

Velma said, "Let's continue walking and maybe we'll find somebody".

Daphne replied "Okay Velma."

Shaggy was starving from the lack of food in his void of a stomach. He was tired of walking through this passageway. Shaggy was going to die of starvation before he got out of this passageway. Shaggy collided with Scooby, Peter, Fred and his second love Mary Jane?

Mary Jane asked Shaggy "Are you hungry Shaggy?"

Shaggy replied with an in love "No". Shaggy was not hungry when he was around Mary Jane. He never was and never would be. Shaggy continued to stare into Mary Jane's eyes.

Mary Jane told Shaggy "Let's go find Velma and Daphne."

Shaggy replied with a "Sure thing anything for you Mary Jane."

Velma and Daphne kept walking north for the longest. Daphne's feet were starting to hurt until she bumped into someone. It was Peter. He was with Fred, Scooby, Mary Jane from Spooky Island and ten eager baby chicks screaming momma to Scooby and Mary Jane. Daphne felt somewhat bad for Scooby seeing that it happened to him for the third time.

Daphne exclaimed, "Now everyone's together we could see where this passage ends up." Velma made an interesting point "There's seems to be an exit point twenty paces ahead of them. They all sprinted toward it just to get out of this secret passageway.

The secret passageway was the jewelry store that was being robbed of it sapphires, emeralds and rubies. It was not surprising to anyone not even Mary Jane that they wind up in the starting point of the whole mystery. What they did not except to see was the creeper knowing the lock combination to the glass jewelry case. Scooby baby chicks were chirping momma to Scooby, which gave the rest of mystery incorporated away. The creeper turned around and Peter did get some shots of him. The creeper let out a zombielike roar, which sends everyone scattering into the passageway. The creeper followed into the secret passageway.

The gang ran through the secret passageway at lighting quick speed. They ran into a dead end wall in which Scooby and the baby chicks entered into. There was no way out, the creeper was starting to get closer, and they looked screwed. They all leaned against the wall and much to everyone's shock it flipped over.

Fred said his famous line "Let's set a trap."

Scooby and Shaggy "We are not being bait no matter how many Scooby snacks you bribe us with,

Mary Jane asked, "Would you do for my new spooky snacks taco pie?

Scooby and Shaggy replied with a yes and Fred said, "Not until after we catch the villain."

Shaggy said, "Here we go again."

Shaggy and Scooby entered the secret passageway. They were going to lure the villain into a Fred made trap. It was one of his early designs so it would be foolproof. Shaggy called

"We're here zombie head so come and get us."

The creeper was now literally behind them and let screaming into their ears, which would make your ears bleed and should never be seen on television. The creeper was chasing them through the open farmhouse door. He was being leaded into the trap and passed right over it. He let a scream, which caused everyone to scatter into the barn house.

They ran up the stairs and jumped into the hay-mixing machine except for Mary Jane, peter and Scooby. Scooby asked the chicks and Mary Jane "Rhould re ruen ri ro ret rhem rout?

Mary Jane said "Yes."

Everyone was put into the own haystack which spat out Fred, Daphne, Velma and Shaggy and finally the creeper. Scooby unmasked the creeper to show it was the jewelry storeowner who said is named was Julius Carson. Velma explained to the police that his motive was revenge on mystery incorporated. She said that the only clue was that he was the only one who knew the jewelry shop combination.

His last words were "I would have gotten away it to if it wasn't for you meddling kids and your pesky dog.

My vision again started to blur. I saw the Green goblin and Electro three thousand miles from Coolsville. I fainted yet again.

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