Jess: WOW that is one long review, but thanks! xD Okay, first things first, can I make your story a different Stefan/Damon story? Because I don't want to ruin it with the sequel I have planned up! Annddd it may be possible for me to update both stories at once, so you get double updates xD OMG your idea is actually really good! xD I think I'll put that story under the Vampire Diaries Tv Show section - because of the originals :) I will definitely begin work on it! Btw, is it possible you could make an account? Because I don't know how else to discuss your ideas with you! :)
So here's a preview of my sequel (I haven't thought of a name for it yet) :P
When I have uploaded the new story, would you like me to notify you with a notice on here?
Preview:
Extract from Chapter 1:
Stefan lay on is back, staring at the familiar woodwork on the ceiling of his room at the Salvatore Boarding House with tired eyes.
He thought of the summer honeymoon he'd had with Elena - his wife! He still relished that word which strengthened Elena's bond to him, even though they'd been married for 5 months already.
Rolling over, he realised that Elena's side was empty.
Sitting up, he looked at the time. 3:00am.
Where would she be at this time of the morning?
That's when he saw the shadow flit across the hallway through his door that was ajar.
He tried to call Elena's name, but no sound came out.
What was wrong with him? He probably just needed some water.
Getting up, he walked out of his room and was about to go downstairs when he heard muffled laughter coming from Damon's room.
Stefan shook his head, smiling. His brother really had connected with Bonnie over the summer, hadn't he?
But then the girl laughed again, and Stefan realised with dread that it wasn't Bonnie's voice.
Maybe he should just leave Damon to do whatever he wanted?
But then again, Bonnie was a good friend, and he didn't want his brother to hurt her by sleeping with another woman!
Starting towards Damon's room, Stefan found the door open.
Without hesitating, he knocked quietly on the door and tried to speak, but found that his voice still wouldn't work.
So he walked past the door and round the corner...and stopped short, eyes widening with shock.
Damon's head whipped up, stopping his act of smothering a girl with kisses on his bed, the two lying in a somewhat passionate manner.
The girl's head also twisted round to see the intruder, a smile still playing across her lips.
Suitably, she gasped.
Elena.
Soooo, has this got you all geared up/anticipating the sequel? :D
- By the way, I realise I put a LOT of Twilight references in the past story, I won't put them in the next story lol :P
