i got tired of waiting for a fifth review so i went ahead and put up chapter two...im sry but it might take me awhile to get chapter three up...but its called The Next Step... so yea i got four out of the five reviews so i decided i might as well go ahead and post the next chapter.. hope u enjoy o and in the last chapter done in the bottom i put u have horrible spelling abilities yea its a typo i meant to put I have horrid spelling abilities so sry if it offended neone it was just a typo..
Ch.2. Kisame?! Kiss?!
"Tsunade! Lady Tsunade! I know who the traitor is.", yelled Sasuke as he burst through the door. He found Tsunade wrapping Tenten's foot. "I'll take you home." said Neji as he ignored Sasuke. "Damn it. Do you people not care about the traitor?!" yelled Sasuke. Tsunade sighed, "Ok Sasuke, who is it?" "The traitor is…" Sasuke paused because he didn't want to admit it. "Well?" asked an irritated Tsunade. "Sakura." replied Sasuke calmly. "What?" asked a shocked Tsunade. "SAKURA! SAKURA IS THE TRAITOR!" yelled a mentally unstable Sasuke. "And she's cheating on me with my brother." Everyone stopped and stared. "Ok Sasuke. Calm down and explain it again." said Tsunade. "My girlfriend is not only cheating on me," he paused, "she is the traitor. Sakura the one I loved betrayed me." Sasuke was pissed now. Not only did Itachi kill the clan, he stole his girlfriend to…"IiiiTAaaaaCHI!!!!" yelled a pissed off Sasuke as he ran out the door. "Sasuke wait!" yelled Tsunade. No reply, Sasuke was already gone. Tsunade sighed. "That fag." said Neji, "Come on Tenten, I'll take you home." "Thanx Neji.", replied Tenten. So Neji took Tenten back to her place.
Tenten's House
"Where are your parents Tenten?" asked Neji. Tenten winced and Neji noticed. He was about to say something when Tenten replied coolly, "Dead." Neji pulled a Naruto move and spoke without thinking, "How?" "Mission.", was all Tenten said. Neji mentally slapped himself and sat down on the couch next to Tenten without saying anymore. Tenten turned on the TV, "Hey Tenten?" said Neji. "Yeah?" asked Tenten as she turned to look at Neji. Then out of no where Neji took Tenten's face in his hands and kissed her slowly moving his hands to behind her head to pull her deeper into the kiss.
Itachi's House
Sasuke ran through the house, looking in every room, but couldn't find either of them. "Where did they go?!" yelled Sasuke in frustration. Then Sasuke heard chuckling so he spun around to see a shark-like man. "Who are you?" asked Sasuke. "I'm Kisame…Your brother's partner." replied the shark man. When Sasuke heard this he snapped. "Where are they? Where did they go?" Kisame chuckled again and replied, "They ran away together. Toward the Akatsuki mansion. I can take you there if you want." "Ok.", said Sasuke. Kisame smirked. 'Man this kid is dense.' Sasuke, being as dense as he is, didn't know it was all a trap. So Sasuke and Kisame left Itachi's house and headed to Akatsuki.
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