I have decided I shall reply to my reviewers.
Sparrowclaw of Thunderclan: Thank you for reading my story! I might decide to write a sequel about Moonblaze's cubs though it's too early in the story for me to decide
SpaceSword16:Thank you for reading my story, trust me the story will get even more interesting
Sashafyr1: There will be a twist though, for one character will return and I'll try to make it longer
This chapter is also a little bit gory and for those of you that don't like it then I advise you skip it and for those who read it, tell me how you think I did!
Disclaimer-I only own Sunblaze, Moonblaze, Moku, and Night
Moonblaze-Gorgeous golden lioness with striking ocean blue eyes, on Simba's side
Moku-Large golden male lion with a black tail tip and mane, he has murky brown eyes, on Simba's side
Sherise-A golden brown lioness with a lighter(like Nala's) muzzle, throat, paws, belly, inner thighs, eyeshades, mild brown tail tuff, and midnight blue eyes, raised as Simba's adopted sister, Simba's side
Jabari-Golden furred male lion, brown muzzle, throat, paws, belly, inner thighs, eyeshades, mild brown, tail tuff, and mane, and blue eyes, on Simba's side
Hatari-handsome golden orange male lion(slightly older than Moonblaze), handsome face any lioness would simply DIE for, he has a scar on his left eye which he got from his perfect little brother, his eyes are red, but everyone wants him for his looks, on Simba's side
Night-black lioness with neon blue eyes, two cubs named, Solomon's mate, on Simba's side
Sunblaze-handsome male lion that looks like Simba with green eyes, on Simba's side
Solomon-golden brown male lion with dark mane and tail tuft, paler muzzle, throat, chest, underbelly, paws, brown eyes, and pale brown markings on face and tail, Night's mate, Simba's side
Chapter 4: After the Battle
Moonblaze's POV
It has been at least two weeks since the battle, Kiara has become quite a handful- or should I say pawful of energy. Any lions that liked Scar were banished including the cubs. "Moonblaze, come here," a voice called behind me. Turning around I saw Rafiki surrounded by the other tigers, "Come Moonblaze, it's a ceremony."
Two weeks later
Moon POV
The ceremony that we had, turned us into lions. I noticed that Simba and Hatari would usually drool over me, but the problem for me was that I could decide who I loved more, a sweet hearted lion who everyone but me loved him for his looks or a magnificent lion whom I had cared for for years that if I chose would make me a queen. Thinking about it made me sigh which brought two lions two my side asking what was wrong and if they could do anything for me. Getting up I went for a walk with Timon and Pumba following me, "I need some advice, what do you do when two lions love you and you love both of them back?" "Young love, easy, you find some rocks and throw it at them," Timon laughed while I just stared like he had grown to heads or something but was interrupted by some roar and shrieks, "I'm just kidding, you-" We took off for Pride Rock and I saw blood pooling around the grass and the body of a hyena and in the distance you could see a bunch of hyena's climbing up Pride Rock.
Soon we were surrounded by hyenas and I swatted at the nearest one sending it reeling away but it didn't get back up but two more took its place. "Cover your nose Moonblaze!" Timon shouted and I got down low and covered my nose with my paw knowing what would happen next. When I got back up, I saw that all the hyena's had disappeared and I looked into the distance and saw a bunch of hyena's running away and we ran up Pride Rock and were met with two problems, one, the Pride Rock had at least a hundred hyenas on it, and two, about twenty were backing me up into the corner. One bit onto my shoulder and wouldn't give up, two jumped onto my back another one grabbed a hold of my left shoulder, and soon I was covered with a hyenas with only a small bit of light left in front of me which was soon replaced with another hyena. Then I did the unexpected and brought my paw up waved it around until it fell off and slashed the other one of my shoulder and other leg and I reared up and sliced one across the nose sending it running away but I felt a sharp pain and I blacked out.
When I opened my eyes again I found myself in a cave and Simba and Hatari were talking to Rafiki and I tried to get up but I fell down when a sharp pain pierced my neck alerting everyone that I was awake. "Your awake at last Moonblaze, it's been two months and they wouldn't keep you out of eyesight once," Rafiki pointed his stick at Simba and Hatari and left. "You almost died, if the hyena had bit any closer than you would have died," Simba told me. Then Kiara came running into the cave, two times bigger than she was when I last saw her, "Mother, your awake!" Did I mention that I was her foster mother? "Where's Night?" Kiara asked Simba. "Oh she's talking with Solomon" Simba laughed. "Let's see, what else is there, Oh yeah! Solomon and Night are now mates and she is expecting cubs, and now Sherise is Sunblaze's mate."
Two months later
"Push, Night, push!" Rafiki put a blue hand on her side. "What do you think I'm trying to do?" Night growled at the baboon. Solomon tried licking her head but she swiped at him but stopped and let out a cry of pain. He then held her paw, and she dug her claws into it as twin cubs came out and she lay there panting. I leaned forward and licked one of the twin cubs fur the wrong way to warm it up quicker and nudged it towards Night's belly where the other two cubs were suckling. I looked at Solomon and saw him nuzzling his mate proudly. "I think the male should be named Malachi," Solomon suggested for the larger of the two cubs. "It's perfect, how about Dahlia for the female cub," Night told him. "It's a beautiful name for a beautiful cub," Solomon licked the top of her head and I left the cave.
Three weeks later
Warning Gory Scenes
My neck was feeling better, and Simba and I were walking to a watering hole when we heard laughing, not just any laughing, hyena laughing. I looked around and I saw a group of twenty, coming straight for us. Before I knew it I was covered with hyenas, one snapped at my tail while others snapped at my legs. I looked at Simba and saw him thrashing around with a bunch of hyena's snapping at him. A hyena jumped on my back and another one hung on to me and dragged me down, I shook them off and knocked two of their heads together knocking them out. Then I sunk my claws into the head of one and was satisfied to her the crack of their skull beneath my paw. Then I turned around and slashed another one open and saw its insides fall onto the dirt and splash it with blood. I heard the cry of a vulture and knew they were preparing for a feast. I swung my paw around and caught a hyena in the neck and heard flesh ripping, blood splashing, claws slicing through fur, and the thud of its head hit the ground, and enjoyed the sounds, the excitement, the feeling of power it gave me knowing I can take the life of someone with the flick of my paw.
Was this really me? Was this the really the person that Simba and Hatari loved? For all this time I could kill someone with the flick of my paw. I had feelings about this new power. I liked it. No, I didn't like it, I loved it. I loved the feeling of blood flowing over my claws and splashing my fur. Of how I held the decision between life and death. How I controlled it, how I could rule everything and no one would reject. I would be another Scar, a Scar worse than the original one. The tyrant (creative word isn't it) that Scar never was, and I kept the thought at the back of my mind.
I turned to my next victim and clamped my mouth around his head and squeezed my mouth shut and heard the bones cracking and blood rushed my mouth, I spit out the hyena's mangled head and moved onto the last one. I picked it up by its back and shook it around like a doll and tossed its body into a tree and was satisfied to hear its bones snap and break. Five more hyenas joined the fight and I crushed the windpipe of one then I turned around smacked a hyena leaving three long scratches on its cheek. I dug my claws into its side and was satisfied to hear the crunch of bones beneath my claws and I then slashed its neck and heard the faint gurgling of blood in its throat before it died. I felt something jump on my back and I rolled over and heard its back break. I got off and saw it trying to crawl away; I slashed its side and clawed its eyes until it went blind. I flipped the bloody body over and slowly applied pressure while slowly digging my claws into its neck and before it died it said, "What are you?" "I'm your worst nightmare, I am the Blazing Moon," I snapped its neck.
Gory parts are over
I then turned around and threw them off of Simba; they saw their friends behind me and bolted. We started limping back to Pride Rock and I noticed how late it was. Simba was breathing heavily and his flank was heaving with effort. He started to lean on me but was putting too much on me so I fell over, I looked at his eyes that were starting to droop, and he murmured something that I couldn't hear and I roared for help. I turned to lap at some water from a nearby pond and noticed blood red ringing my eyes. I looked up and I saw something in the distance and they started to get a little bit blurry and so blurry I couldn't even recognize their fur color, I looked at Simba and my eyes started to close. I started pacing around to keep myself awake but that didn't help, I heard someone yelling to hang on but I laid down next to Simba and licked the blood of his fur as much as I could in my blurry and weakened state. The edges of my vision started to blacken and I saw visions flash before my eyes, Simba fighting, Sunblaze and Sherise eating together, me finding Sunblaze starved in a cave. Then I saw a younger Simba (the Simba with the weird hairdo from Lion King 1 1/2) and me laughing together while Hatari sat in the background glaring at Simba, Simba sulking in the corner of the cave Hatari and I found, Night falling under the waterfall and coming out of it soaked, Simba and Hatari glaring at each other, Hatari finding us. More visions flashed and one caught my eye, my mom in her wedding dress standing next to a man in a tuxedo with golden hair and ocean blue eyes. One word came to mind Dad, and then my vision went completely black as four shapes appeared in front of me.
Remember LIONS ONLY
Did the hero and possible serial killer die!
What will happen next?
Am I eating?
A) Spaghetti
B) Baked Potato's
C) Hot Dogs
D) Actual people
If you guess right than you will win *drum roll* It's a surprise!
I'm looking for some ideas because I need ideas SO REVIEW!
I can make origami frogs now! Yayz!
OK, the first person to hit the twenty, thirty, forty, ect. ect. Reviews get to write half the story with me
Spottedfire-Now what do we say children
Moonblaze-Review and you get a cookie!
Simba-WRONG!
Spottedfire-Then what's the answer
Simba-Um...uh... Look behind you! *runs away*
Moonblaze-Who wouldn't want to write half the story with you *mutters*
Spottedfire-I heard that!
Moonblaze-You heard that you have a sick and twisted mind and now your turning me into a serial killer
Spottedfire-Nope, but you just told me
Moonblaze-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
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WARNING- I AM NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR ANY DEATHS IN WHICH YOU THINK DIDN'T NEED TO HAPPEN OR ANYTHING LIKE THIS
WARNING- I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN IF YOU DON'T REVIEW
R- Ripping you apart, piece by piece
E- Elephants sitting on your face
V- Vultures pecking at your bloody remains
I- Ice cream man driving over you
E- Everyone you know, stabbing you
W- Warrior cats, attacking you
WARNING- ALL OF THIS WILL HAPPEN TO YOU IF YOU DON'T REVIEW
WARNING- THEIR MIGHT BE A SimbaXMoonblaze PAIRING LATER ON AFTER NALA DIES I WOULD TELL YOU HOW BUT I'M GIVING TO MUCH AWAY