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Hey everyone, it's your favourite author (I hope I am) back with another totally awesome, totally epic and completely mind blowing chapter of Naruto: Force Unleashed! I hope you guys enjoyed my first chapter for this fanfic; I am trying my best to make the chapters as long as possible! Don't expect Naruto to jump into god mode straight from the first few chapters, he will progress with the help of Kyuubi, Revan and Galen!
This fiction contains a slightly dark Naruto that will not be as forgiving or as moronic, he will eventually be godlike but not so soon. Contains bashing of civilian council (obviously every fanfic has it), Sakura, Sasuke and little Konoha bashing. May or may not stop bashing in future. Harem voting still open go check my profile, hope you enjoy this next chapter of Naruto: Force Unleashed!
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I can't believe this story was so well received, with this many reviews just for the first chapter only! Thanks a lot to everyone who reviewed and I am sorry that I don't reply to your reviews. Most asked topics will be answered here. Harem choices will depend on the poll okay? I may or may not add others though lava213's idea for a I might keep in mind. Sorry -Namikaze but the fans are the ones deciding and they want Kushina. Thanks you everyone else who reviewed and I hope you enjoy this next chapter.
P.S I know I said there won't be any star wars characters in this fanfic but I meant it in the context of fighting against or with Naruto, Revan and Galen are just spirits in his head that are there to guide him.
Harem votes so far:
Kushina is ahead with 25 votes (Ye go incest!)
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Anko fourth with 12 votes
Rest have votes that are below 10, harem poll will remain open.
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Chapter 1: Training begins!
Last time on Naruto: Force Unleashed,
"The first thing about controlling your force power is…" Revan paused for dramatic tension as Naruto looked on with an excited expression. "…meditating!"
Revan and Galen couldn't help but burst out laughing at Naruto since his face had went from excited to eating dirt at the mention of meditation. Naruto jumped back to his feet as he glared at the laughing pair.
"I hate you…"
Present time: 5 hours after Naruto started training with Revan and Galen
Naruto could be seen sitting cross-legged on a smooth grey rock in the middle of the stream in a meditative position, Revan and Galen simply observed from the side. Naruto tried to do as Revan had told him, he slowed down his breathing as he spread out his newfound awareness of the life around him.
'Steady my breathing and heartbeat, don't let anything distract me but at the same time remain aware of my surroundings. Stretch out with my awareness and try to sense the force flowing in and around all living things.' Naruto chanted in his head as the rocks and pebbles in the stream suddenly started to levitate due to an unknown force. Revan looked on amazed while Galen was gobsmacked; he had taken a week to get that down while normal padawans took a month of training but Naruto had done it in FIVE hours.
"Naruto you may open your eyes now." Revan stated simply and as soon as Naruto opened his eyes, the levitating objects fell back into the stream with soft plops. He sensed Revan's good mood and had seen Galen's shocked face so he assumed that he had done it correctly.
"Revan-sensei what do I have to accomplish next?" Naruto asked calmly. Revan noted this may be a side effect of the meditation, as Naruto seemed to be less brash and more composed.
"That's it for now Naruto since it's about time for you to awake. Since you were meditating, your body had experienced the similar effects of a good night's sleep so you don't have to worry about that." Galen replied instead as the young boy nodded before disappearing from the rock. "I can sense greatness in that one Revan…"
"So do I but as you know, power corrupts and we can only hope that Naruto does not succumb to the temptations of the dark side of the force…" Revan sighed as he seemed to relive memories of his life long past.
Naruto's home
Naruto yawned loudly as he stretched and rubbed the sleep from his eyes before hopping off his bed and into the shower for a quick bath. Making his way out of the bathroom just five minutes later, he then realised that there was someone in his kitchen. Stealthily making his way to the kitchen, he was relieved that it only turned out to be the Sandaime Hokage, Sarutobi Hiruzen.
"Ohayo Naruto-kun, am I right in assuming that you have yet to eat your breakfast?" He said in a grandfatherly tone.
"Ohayo Jiji! Nope I just woke up and was going to grab a quick bite before heading to the academy!" Naruto grinned but inwardly sighed as the Hokage didn't seem to see through the act.
"How about I treat you to some Ichiraku's ramen for breakfast Naruto-kun, what do you say?"
"Yatta! Free ramen for breakfast, thanks jiji! You're the best!" Naruto shouted but inwardly groaned. 'Dear kami! Acting this obnoxious is seriously getting on my nerves!'
The Hokage and Naruto made their way to the ramen stand before sitting down and telling the chef their respective orders, Naruto saw from the corner of his eye that the Hokage was about to say something.
"Naruto-kun, where were you last night?"
"Well jiji, I was on the way home when those mean people started to chase me around the village again so I ran away from them. I ran for half an hour before I turned into a dead end and the people started to hurt me before I fainted when a burning sensation spread across my skin." Naruto recalled with tear filled eyes and a quivering lower lip to add to the effect. 'Damn I'm good! The best actor award goes to Namikaze-Uzumaki Naruto!'
"It's going to be alright Naruto-kun, I promise once you become a ninja that all these things will stop." Hiruzen comforted the child while his mind raced through the possibilities. 'It seemed young Naruto really didn't know what happened… the only logical reason is that the Kyuubi took over as a failsafe to protect him.'
"You promise jiji? Then I'm going to be the best ninja ever! Dattebayo! And when I'm strong enough, I will take that hat from you jiji! Just watch me, I am going to be the best Hokage ever dattebayo!" Naruto boasted as he pumped a fist into the air. 'I feel like killing myself now but I understand what Revan-sensei meant by hiding my skills.'
"I'm sure you will Naruto-kun, now run along. I'm sure Iruka is already starting to look for you since classes started fifteen minutes ago." Hiruzen said as Naruto nodded his head enthusiastically before slurping down the remainder of his ramen and leapt off the stool in the direction of the academy.
Iruka's class
"Class, who can tell me what the-" Iruka's question was interrupted by the slamming open of a door; standing in the doorway was a panting and grinning Naruto.
"Sorry Iruka-sensei! The Hokage wanted to talk to me about something over breakfast but forgot about the time!" Naruto managed to get out between breaths.
"That's alright Naruto; just take a seat while I continue on with my lesson." Iruka sighed as Naruto thanked him before taking a seat between two of his classmates. (OC's since Naruto failed the academy three times this is his classmates during his first year attempt)
"Before I was interrupted, who can tell me what the bloodline of the Shodaime Hokage was and what it could do?" Iruka asked but Naruto tuned it out and focused on his force meditation instead.
'Wow it's like I can sense where everybody is by their force presence, it seems like everyone has their own 'feel' in the force. It's almost like seeing with your eyes closed.' Naruto thought as he suddenly sensed an incoming object through his force awareness before reaching out a hand to catch the incoming duster with his eyes still closed.
"How…who…what…when…" Iruka stumbled over his own words as his jaw along with everyone else's was hanging off the hinges at the amazing feat. "Naruto; how did you manage to catch that without looking?"
"That's simple…I'm just that awesome!" Naruto exclaimed loudly causing ninety per cent of the class to facefault while the remainder sweat-dropped at the retarded answer.
"Never mind that now, just tell me what the Shodaime's bloodline was and what it could do." Iruka asked after he had recovered causing Naruto to scratch his head sheepishly.
"Umm… it was something to do with plants or trees right? He could make them appear from nowhere like magic, he was awesome!" Naruto replied with his dobe mask in place.
"Close but not really correct. The Shodaime's bloodline was the Mokuton (Wood release) and it allowed him to grow wood or vines from the ground or even turn parts of his body into wood to attack the enemy." Iruka corrected with a sigh as he continued with the lesson, which Naruto tuned out again but this time meditated with his eyes open.
'Ohayo kit.' A voice suddenly said which almost caused Naruto to jump out of his sit before realising that only one person called him that.
'Ohayo Kyuu-chan!' Naruto greeted in return which caused said demoness to blush at the additional suffix before mentally grinning.
'Oh Kyuu-chan now is it? What ever happened to Kyuubi-sensei?' Kyuubi asked with a pout evident in her tone.
'During training I will refer to you as such but since we aren't training I don't have to call you that.' Naruto replied with a smirk before he remembered something. 'Hey Kyuu-chan! Last night I had a strange dream after leaving the mindscape.'
'Well kit, did it have to do with us performing lewd acts together?' Kyuubi asked as she snickered when Naruto's face turned so red it started to look like an apple.
'NO! I was in a forest and met up with these two cloaked figures and they introduced themselves as Darth Revan and Galen Marek-' Naruto was interrupted by sharp gasp from his tenant. 'Do you know them Kyuu-chan?'
'Yes I do kit, both of them were once the strongest warriors in the universe. Legend claimed that Galen Marek also known as 'Starkiller' was so strong in the force that he managed to drag down a space ship the size of Konoha. (Am I right in the proportion?) While Darth Revan was the strongest Sith Lord in his time, his control over the force was unmatched by anyone.'
Naruto was speechless after hearing that, he had a teacher that could levitate the entire village with his control over the force. It was then that Naruto made a promise to himself that he would train diligently so he could make his masters proud as well as be a force to be reckoned with.
'So what did they want with you kit?' Kyuubi suddenly asked.
'They said I was the only force sensitive individual on this planet and they were going to train me to be a continuation of their legacies.' Naruto took the stunned silence as shock so he continued. 'Revan-sensei and Galen-sensei taught me how to tap into the force by meditating and I succeeded after five hours of continuous practice, it would have been sooner if I used the Kage Bushin no Jutsu but Revan-sensei told me that there was no shortcuts to real power.'
Kyuubi damn near fainted when she heard that Naruto completed the meditation exercise just five hours after starting and without the aid of his shadow clones. She pondered this new revelation for a moment before she came up with a great plan.
'Since I am not very adept at using the force and you have two legends teaching you about it, I have a plan to maximise your training potential.' Kyuubi said as Naruto perked up instantly at the word 'training'. 'When you are awake you will train in chakra control exercise as well as taijutsu since your hand to hand is almost non-existent. When you are asleep, you will spend the first four hours with me learning about ninjutsu, genjutsu as well as some other ninja and demon skills. The next four will be spent with Revan and Galen in controlling the force.'
'Sounds like a great plan Kyuu-chan but how am I going to cover up my growth as well as my skills?'
'Well kit, why don't you just send a reinforced Kage Bushin to take your place at the academy every day so you can maximise the time for training that you have. Have the Kage Bushin act like the old you as well as have the skills you had before.' Kyuubi suggested which caused Naruto to almost facefault at the simplicity of the answer.
Once class had ended, Naruto bolted right out the door of the classroom so he could begin his training as soon as possible. Naruto ran until he found an empty training ground that looked like it has hardly been used by anyone. After a few laps around the training ground to warm up, Naruto asked Kyuubi what he should start on first.
'Well kit, since you have an enormous pool of chakra at your disposal, this would make your chakra control pretty much fucked up so I would recommend you start on chakra control exercises first.' Kyuubi replied as she thought about it some more. 'The first exercise is tree walking, you have to channel the correct amount of chakra into your foot so you will stick to the surface of the tree. Too much and you will blast off but too little and your foot will slide off, so it's all a matter of finding the correct amount.'
'Alright Kyuubi-sensei, I'm going to begin training now.' Naruto thought as he formed the familiar cross-shaped handseal and shouted out.
"Kage Bushin no Jutsu!"
Several hundred poofs resonated around the training ground as three hundred Naruto's appeared around him, Naruto looked slightly winded but was otherwise fine.
"Alright troops, I want 200 of you to work on the tree climbing exercise and when one of you manages to make it at least halfway up I want you to dispel. The other 100 I want to spar with one another…with your eyes CLOSED so we can get the hang of listening to our force senses. Now get to it!" Naruto ordered as his clones snapped off a 'Hai boss!' before setting off to their respective tasks while Naruto himself started with his physical training to build up his muscles.
He spent the entire afternoon doing physical exercises from running laps around the training grounds to sit-ups, push-ups and chin-ups. Eventually the sun started to set and Naruto was completely exhausted, you could see the laboured breathing of the young boy as he lay flat down in the middle of the field. With a mental command, Naruto carefully dismissed his clones in groups of twenty-five's every twenty five seconds so he wouldn't suffer any backlash.
Gathering up his remaining energy, Naruto placed one foot on the trunk of a nearby tree before taking another step up and then another which was followed by another. Before he knew it, he was at the top of the tree overlooking the entire training ground. Naruto gave a small smile at his accomplishment before carefully navigating his way down the tree and trudged back to his apartment for his nightly training.
Mindscape
"Good job today kit, you completely mastered the tree walking exercise in one day. That's something you can be proud off, now it's time for ninjutsu theory." Kyuubi praised him before getting down to business. "Tell me what are the five main chakra natures that your chakra can have an affinity to."
"Well sensei, I have seen a bunch of ninjutsu techniques before so I would say there would be fire, earth and water. I'm not sure what the other two natures are though." Naruto said in a depressed tone thinking he had failed his sensei.
"No need to be sad kit, I don't expect you to know all this things yet. Now you were right for those three elements, the other two would be wind and lightning." Kyuubi smiled at Naruto, who was listening attentively. "Fire is an offensive element; earth is mainly defensive but can be offensive as well. Water is a balanced element with both offensive and defensive techniques while wind and lightning are primarily offensive as well though wind can be used as a defence in certain situations."
"I understand sensei but what element is my chakra aligned with?" Naruto asked after listening to Kyuubi's explanation.
"From what I have observed from your chakra, you seem to have a godly affinity towards wind but too make sure I suggest you steal some chakra paper from your Hokage tomorrow. Chakra paper is a special type of paper that channels your chakra and tells you what element you have an affinity to. If it is fire, it will burn. Water and it will turn soggy. Wind causes it to split in half, earth causes it to turn to dust while lightning causes it to crumple up."
"So what are we going to be doing now Kyuubi-sensei?"
"Well kit since we don't know your chakra affinity yet, I guess I will be teaching you how to use killing intent (KI) to aid you in your battles. Killing intent can do anything from causing your enemy to hesitate for a second to causing total fear induced paralysis, right now you won't be able to summon much due to your age but will be able to do so when you are older." Kyuubi explained as she flicked his forehead causing him to pout cutely. "You can summon your KI just by thinking about something that makes you very angry and direct it at your opponent via your eyes or you can release it over a wide area. Now I want you to try."
Naruto had no trouble doing so as he remembered all the harsh words, the angry glares and being kicked out of almost every shop. Kyuubi nodded in approval as she sensed a small dose of KI leaking out from Naruto.
"That's good enough kit, you can stop now." She told him but Naruto seemed unresponsive.
'Every birthday they come together to chase me and when they catch me they start to beat me, why do they do that? Why doesn't anyone stop it! No more…Never again! Next time it happens…I WILL CRUSH THEM!' Naruto roared in his mind as a huge blast of KI shot out from him in multiple waves; it was so strong it even caused Kyuubi to stumble a bit.
"Kit stop! Kit! NARUTO! There's no one here that is going to hurt you!" Kyuubi shouted as she hugged the young boy to herself and calmly stroking his hair. "Calm down Naruto, nobody is going to hurt you anymore. I promise I will protect you okay, I will never leave you…"
This seemed to work as the killing intent seemed to disappear as Naruto cried into her shoulder as she continued whispering comforting words into his ears until he stopped crying.
"Arigatou Kyuu-chan, sorry I let it get out of hand like that." Naruto apologized as he wiped away his remaining tears causing Kyuubi to give a small smile.
"It wasn't your fault kit; I shouldn't have let you relive those bad memories. I'll spend the rest of the time here teaching you about your mother and father, come and sit here." Kyuubi motioned for him to sit beside her and Naruto complied as she began to tell him about his parents.
Four hours later
"Remember kit, if you have any questions regarding your parents just ask me and I will answer as best as I can. Now go meet up with your other two teachers, I believe they are expecting you." Kyuubi told him as he nodded and faded away.
Naruto appeared in the familiar campsite where the two force users were already sitting there waiting for him, he walked over to them and sat down.
"Masters what training do you have for me now?"
"Today's exercise is for you to consciously levitate this rock with your force powers only, just remember that the force flows through and around everything including yourself. Learn to harmonize with it and you will be able to bend it to your will, imagine the rock floating and it will do so." Revan demonstrated as he motioned with just one finger and a tree trunk the size of Naruto shot off into the forest.
"You will need to use your whole hand at first, with training comes experience and then you will be able to perform it like Revan or I can." Galen said as he too levitated a rock the size of an average human with two fingers before opening his other palm to show a rock the size of a snail. "You will be using this for now."
Naruto took the offered rock and sat down in his usual cross-legged position with the rock in his palm, he stared at the rock intently as he tried to imagine the force around it. Half an hour later we find Naruto still in the same position with the rock in his palm.
"Master this is impossible! I concentrated like you said but the damn thing won't budge!" Naruto exclaimed in frustration causing Revan to smirk under his mask.
'So much like me when I was learning to harness the force as well.' He thought before speaking.
"Nothing is impossible before the force young Naruto, be patient and you will have the result you desire. Do not think that this is something that can be done in a snap of your fingers, it takes hard work to get it done."
"Hai I understand master." Naruto said as he went back to the task at hand. 'Okay imagine the force flowing in and around you like a strong river flow, get the feel of it and learn to move with it. The force is my ally so I must flow along with it instead of pushing against the current.'
Two hours later of repeating the mantra in his head, the rock in his palm seemed to wobble a bit to the left and then to the right before slowly lifting off his palm and into the air. Naruto smiled as both his teachers clapped at his accomplishment.
"Very good Naruto, this is the first step for you to become a master of the force. Now I want you to do the same thing you did with the rock to this." Revan gestured to significantly larger rock the size of Naruto himself. "Remember how you felt and that size does not matter in the presence of the force."
Naruto licked his lips as he once again submerged his entire self into the flow of the force as he felt it move around his body, he then directed it around the rock as he lifted his arm up slowly. The large rock shifted to the side slowly before hovering at least half a metre of the ground, Naruto panted as he let it drift back down slowly before slumping over from exhaustion.
Revan and Galen smiled as Naruto gave them a thumbs up before he fainted, Revan turned towards Galen.
"He truly is one of a kind, don't you agree Galen?" He asked the younger looking of the two, who simply nodded his head. They sat there in silence as they observed the sleeping child on the ground in front of them.
Another chapter of Naruto: Force Unleashed done and uploaded, so how was it? Let me know what you think by posting a review or dropping me a PM alright? Poll for 'Home is where you are' is closed, looks like the majority wanted a harem for Naruto! (No surprise there.) So I have begun on the next chapter of it already, which will hopefully be up by tonight! (12 hours from now.) Remember that harem poll is still open so vote for your favourite pairing now! Kurenai and Samui are not in the poll because they have their own pairings alright? So stop asking about them! Ja ne and may the force be with you!
*Disappears in a torrent of water*