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What's up everyone! Its here again with the next chapter of Naruto: Force Unleashed! Man I've been getting reviews left, right and centre! I can't believe the amount of visitors and hits I have received for this story as well, a thousand plus of each so far! Thanks everyone for your kind words and support, it really makes me write more often when I read your reviews.
Well the harem is officially closed! I didn't give a warning since I wanted to catch you guys off guard when I did it so there wouldn't be any last minute voting hehehe! Now for the final results of the harem! Drumroll please!
*Drum rolls past my position*
Me: …okay.
Harem results:
Kushina = 39 votes, 22%. (In)
Mei = 28 votes, 16%. (In)
Mikoto = 21 votes, 12%. (In)
Yugito = 19 votes, 10%. (In)
So harem for Naruto will be consisting of the following girls: , Kushina, Mei, Mikoto and Yugito. I am not sure if I can handle any more in the harem and still make it balanced so this will be the final decision for now, may or may not add more.
Review responses:
Mq: While I am glad you aren't flaming me, I would prefer it if you don't flame the readers as well. Everyone has their own personal opinion of it, my opinion is love can come from anyone and I don't give a shit if she is related to me or from a different race. Hey, as long as the couple find happiness together then I say everyone else can F.U.C.K O.F.F! Apparently the majority wants harem with Kushina in it so I shall comply with their request plus if Kushina was my mom, I'd bang her too but that's MY opinion. I'll understand if you stop reading the story and won't blame you for it but you can always pretend that it is another hot, sexy red-haired woman by the name of Kushina that Naruto is banging.
Arya19: Naruto himself is not even going to take the exam; his reinforced shadow clone is going to be the one that fails the exam. To find out the rest you just have to read ne? And I had stated that Naruto is going to be semi godlike in this story already but Kage Bushin at his age is pretty believable since at 12 years old he is already spamming thousands of clones without any side effects.
Coyote86401: Well I'm glad you enjoyed reading my story as I do my best to keep it as interesting as possible. Thanks for the review!
Namikaze09: Thanks man it means a lot that an experienced writer like you thinks so highly of my story! I'm also a fan of some of the stories you wrote but I am wondering why you don't update them? Some of the stories you wrote have plenty of potential but they are all dropped off at some point in time. And to answer your question regarding Naruto's lightsabers, he will have two of them but I won't reveal the colours yet. Thanks for reviewing!
Red: Thanks man that really cleared it up for me! The OC's in his class will remain as so since he only met the rookie nine on his third attempt so this doesn't change the story much. Still thanks for pointing that out!
Genobeast: Well I'm sorry but I would sooner watch hard-core yaoi porn than write another NaruHina fanfic that this site is already overflowing with. Just go put Naruto and Hinata into the filter and BAM! Almost every other new story is either a NaruHina or NaruSasu and some NaruSaku. It is just too common for my tastes and in my opinion; I don't see what's so great about Hinata. That's just my opinion like I said before, everyone is entitled to one. Hinata will be paired with a real character!
Everyone else who reviewed, I thank you as well! To express my heartfelt thanks, here is chapter two of Naruto: Force Unleashed.
Chapter 2: Revan Reincarnated
Naruto licked his lips as he once again submerged his entire self into the flow of the force as he felt it move around his body, he then directed it around the rock as he lifted his arm up slowly. The large rock shifted to the side slowly before hovering at least half a metre of the ground, Naruto panted as he let it drift back down slowly before slumping over from exhaustion.
Revan and Galen smiled as Naruto gave them a thumbs up before he fainted, Revan turned towards Galen.
"He truly is one of a kind, don't you agree Galen?" He asked the younger looking of the two, who simply nodded his head. They sat there in silence as they observed the sleeping child on the ground in front of them.
Three years later:
"Hahaha! You'll never catch me suckers!" An orange clad young boy shouted back at the team of masked ANBU members chasing him.
"Boy by the orders of the Lord Hokage we were ordered to bring you to him for painting the entire Hyuuga estate neon pink in colour!" A bear mask ANBU shouted back while snickers could be heard coming from the rest of the squad as they thought it was hilarious that someone managed to prank the 'All seeing eyes' of the Hyuuga clan.
"Hey they had it coming for a long time! Now leave me alone so I can go and get some ramen to eat!" Naruto waved at them merrily as he seemed to speed up before colliding with a loud 'oof' with somebody in front of him. After rubbing his head, Naruto looked up into the frowning visage of one Umino Iruka. "Hey Iruka-sensei! I was just…ugh…on my way to class! That's it, I was just on my way there when they started chasing me!"
"Naruto you aren't fooling anybody so drop the charade and come along." Iruka chastised the boy as he dragged him away to class as the rest of the ANBU squad disappeared to inform the Hokage. None of them saw a shadow observing their every movement during the chase; the shadow moved and revealed the face of a grinning Naruto.
"You say that Iruka-san but you don't even notice that isn't the real me, has standards for ninjas always been this low?" He chuckled slightly as he threw a hood over his head to obscure his face from the public.
'Naru-kun you should know that not everyone has such advanced senses as yours and only you have force powers.' Kyuubi's voice echoed through his head.
'I know Kyuu-chan but I thought an ex-ANBU such as Iruka-san would at least be better than this.' Naruto retorted lightly as he stealthily made his way to the training grounds he had been using for the past three years. He ran through a series of handseals before slamming both his palms onto the ground.
"Ninpou: Otofugen Shouheki no Jutsu!" (Ninja art: Sound Silencing Barrier Technique)
'Alright Naru-kun, now that nobody can hear you…I want to see what you have learnt so far over the past three years. Start off with ninja techniques before moving on to force techniques.' Kyuubi told him.
"Whatever you say Kyuu-chan!" Naruto cracked his neck before walking on top of the water of a nearby stream whilst balancing a kunai on each fingertip and rotating them in a clockwise direction. After a minute or so of doing that, he suddenly flung all the kunai into the air and quickly drew out ten shuriken and flinging them all at once. Ten sparks appeared in the air signifying that all ten shuriken had hit the ten aerial kunai causing them to alter their cause in mid-air and head towards Naruto. He just smirked as the kunai headed towards his body but suddenly veered off course when they came within half a metre of him.
"Futon: Fuujin no Yoroi." (Wind release: Armour of the Wind God) Naruto whispered with a grin as the previously invisible wind armour fazed into existence. The armour made it look like there was a mini hurricane over each of Naruto's limbs while numerous wind blades swirled around his form in a repetitive cycle. Naruto shivered slightly as he remembered just how many times he had injured himself when creating this particular jutsu.
"Kage Bushin no Jutsu!" He shouted as a thousand clouds of smoke appeared around the training grounds and drifted away revealing a thousand grinning Naruto's. The clones charged at the original in groups of twos to threes as the original took on a strange taijutsu stance as he started to engage the oncoming clones. Naruto weaved in and around his opponents attack as he used the force to sense incoming attacks which he avoided with his ninja reflexes.
Naruto started to counterattack with a barrage of punches and kicks made all the more deadly by the presence of the Fuujin no Yoroi. A huge group of clones started to charge in from the east, Naruto sensed them easily and ran through several handseals before taking a deep breath.
"Futon: Daitoppa! (Wind release: Great Breakthrough)" He shot out a huge burst of air that slammed into the rushing clones and dispelled them instantly. The clones started attacking in larger groups as they tried to overwhelm their creator; Naruto sensed all of the remaining clones rushing towards him in a last bid effort to disable him. "Time to say goodbye clones…"
Naruto tapped into the force as he felt it flow around him like a calm river, he started pulling all the force in the surrounding area towards him. This resulted in causing the charging clones to get yanked into a gravitational orbit around Naruto as he clenched his fists tightly before throwing his arms outward.
"Gekitai sa Seru! (Force Repulse)" The stored up force energy immediately blasted outward in a huge wave and blew back all the clones in a massive explosion of force energy. Naruto panted slightly from the sudden expenditure of the force, he grinned despite himself and stumbled back onto his ass.
"How's that for going all out?" Naruto asked aloud knowing Kyuubi would still be able to hear him.
'Very impressive Naru-kun, now I believe it is lunchtime and you should take a break after that spar.' Kyuubi replied in a proud tone as Naruto nodded in agreement. He sprang back onto his feet and steadied himself for a few seconds before walking towards his home so he could cook himself something to eat. Naruto had realised that he could not live off ramen so he decided to take up cooking as a pastime and he found out that he was apparently very good at it.
After a quite lunch of rice and fish, Naruto sat down on the floor as he meditated to enter the Force Forest as he had started to call it.
Within the Force Forest
"Hello there young Naruto, I have been waiting for you." Revan smiled behind his mask at the confused look on the boy's face.
"Why were you waiting for me Revan-sensei? And where is Galen-sensei?" Naruto asked puzzled.
"Galen is …preoccupied with something. Naruto…during the past three years we have trained you in all we know and as a reward for all your hard work and diligence, we both have something for you." Revan replied causing Naruto's eyes to widen since he never received any form of present from his masters before.
"Ah I sense that Galen is back with your gift, I on the other hand have three gifts for you." Revan announced as Galen walked into the campsite with something held behind his back. "Would you like to go first Galen?"
"Alright. I believe that you have earned this Naruto for giving your all in training, Happy Birthday!" Galen said as he handed Naruto a cylindrical object with an engraved hilt. Naruto felt his eyes widen for two reasons, the first one being that he had forgotten today was his birthday. Second being that the object handed to him by his master was a lightsaber; he never thought he would own such a legendary weapon.
"A-arigatou Galen-sensei!" Naruto stammered out as he accepted the weapon into his hands, Galen gave him a nod to activate it and he did so with a 'snap hiss' of the blade. Naruto marvelled at the pearl white blade that emitted from the nozzle of the cylinder, the blade itself was white as snow with a black glow around it. "It's beautiful master Galen, I will cherish it always."
"Come here Naruto, it's time for my gifts." Revan beckoned him over with a gloved hand. Naruto obediently moved over as Revan too handed him a lightsaber, Naruto took it into his hands and ignited it with another 'snap hiss'. The blade this time was black as midnight with a menacing red glow about it; it seemed to scream danger to anyone who saw it.
"It's amazing as well master Revan; I will guard it with my life." Naruto bowed as Revan pet his head.
"Naruto the next two gifts are linked to one another, I want you to… wear my armour and take my name when I am gone." Revan crouched in front of Naruto as he looked him from eye to visor. "Promise me Naruto…"
"B-but where are you going to?" Naruto asked uncertainly as Revan and Galen shared a sad glance before sighing and turning back to Naruto.
"We are finally going to join our family and friends as one in the unifying force."
Naruto started to tear up as he let out a soft sob as he didn't expect the two men who had trained him from three years ago to be gone from his life so suddenly. Revan and Galen brought him into a three-way hug as they comforted the boy they had begun to see as a younger brother.
"I know its hard Naruto but we have delayed ourselves long enough and in the end we are all a part of the Force, so I want you to promise me Naruto…take my armour and continue my legacy." Revan told him softly as Naruto wiped away his tears and nodded once.
"I promise Revan-sensei…I will miss you guys a lot…" Naruto admitted as the two men had similar smiles though you could not see Revan's one.
"Goodbye Naruto and May the Force be with you." They said in unison as their bodies seemed to fade away into blue particles that swirled around Naruto once before floating away into the forest. Naruto just stood there as he felt a sudden surge in his force power before he too faded out from the Force Forest for the last time.
Mindscape
Kyuubi was lying on her bed reading a random book Naruto had generated inside of the mindscape; apparently Naruto had turned the sewer like place into a two story house around two years ago. The book was about a knight who battled against numerous monsters and demons to regain his honour and ended with him succeeding the current ruler of the kingdom and marrying the princess before living happily ever after.
'Where's my happily ever after…am I just a demon for someone to kill so they can marry a princess?' Kyuubi thought as she sighed before flinging the book into the corner of the room.
"Wow what's wrong with the book?" A familiar voice called out as she turned her head and saw an amused looking Naruto holding up the book she had thrown.
"Overused plotline…" Kyuubi joked with a small smile before she seemed to notice the sombre aura around Naruto. "Hey…what happened?"
"…Revan-sensei and Galen-sensei have gone on to join the force." He finally said as his voice cracked as tears threatened his vision once again. "I promised Revan-sensei that I would continue his legacy…and I intend to do so."
"They must have taught you everything they knew already and believed you would advance from there on your own two feet." Kyuubi reasoned as Naruto nodded and sniffed while he wiped away the moisture from his eyes.
"I guess you're right Kyuu-chan…" Naruto sighed as he fiddled with the switch of his lightsaber, catching Kyuubi's interest.
"They left you a lightsaber?"
"Two lightsabers, one from each of them." Naruto corrected as he thumbed both of them to life, one blackish-white blade and one reddish-black blade. Naruto swung them in a few basic strokes while Kyuubi watched the deadly light show the blades seemed to weave, he eventually thumbed them off as he slumped onto the bed.
"You must miss them already…" Kyuubi voiced his thoughts aloud as she pulled him into a hug as the tears he held back started to fall as his shoulders shook with every gasp of air he took.
"I can't believe they're gone…" He cried onto Kyuubi's shoulder as she rubbed his back soothingly until the tears finally died down as he brought himself back under control. "Thanks Kyuu-chan…"
"Anytime Naru-kun, it's normal to hurt when you lose someone that is precious to you." Kyuubi released him from her hold as she unconsciously noted that she had felt complete with Naruto in her arms.
"Promise me you won't leave me Kyuu-chan…I don't think I would be able to continue on if I lost you too." He admitted as he looked at the demoness beside him, who flicked him on the forehead with two fingers.
"Baka, didn't I promise you that I would never leave you. Why don't you meditate? It looks like you could use it to clear the depressing thoughts from your mind." Kyuubi suggested.
"I think so too." Naruto went into the lotus position as he closed his eyes, once again clearing his mind of all thoughts and synchronised with the force flow around him. He could sense the presence of Kyuubi beside him before spreading out his awareness across the entire village when he was suddenly hit with a powerful jolt in the force. Naruto's eyes snapped wide open as he clutched his chest with his hand causing Kyuubi to look at him worried.
"I sense a disturbance in the force…it sounded like multiple cries of terror before they suddenly vanished from the force all together." He said in a disturbed tone before fading from the mindscape and appearing back in his apartment. He saw a storage scroll in his lap that wasn't there before, he quickly unsealed it to reveal his two lightsabers and a modified version of Revan's armour and cloak.
In a split second decision, Naruto decided this would be a good time for the legend of Darth Revan to make itself known once more. He tore off his clothes in a second and started to don the armour of his deceased mentor, he stood in front of a mirror and for a moment he thought he was looking at his mentor.
Due to all the physical training Naruto had been doing for the past three years, he now stood at an impressive 1.6m for his age and was built solidly but not overly so. The armour's colour scheme seemed to have been altered since the plates were now completely black with red trims and the visor was now a glaring crimson.
'Damn I look cool! Now I know why Revan-sensei always chose to wear his armour around all the time…either that or the fact he didn't have any clothes under it.' Naruto thought before he threw the black hood of his cloak over his helmeted head and vanished in a swirl of leaves.
Uchiha district
Sasuke had a smile on his face as he raced back home after the academy had ended, he had aced his test and couldn't wait to tell his parents and Itachi. He cheerfully greeted the Pocky store owner on his way back; he never knew what his brother found so enjoyable about the snack.
As he rounded the corner leading to the clan grounds he paused as he sensed that something wasn't right, his smile vanished as he increased his speed to his home.
'Why do I smell blood coming from the direction of the clan grounds and is that…sulphur?' Sasuke thought as he ran through the clan gates and was greeted by the horrific sight of bloodied and cut-up bodies of various clan members lying on the ground. 'W-what the hell is going on!'
Sasuke started to panic as he tried to process the images in his mind before running off in the direction of his home, hoping that nothing had befallen his parents or sibling…foolish boy.
Mikoto tried to scream as her recently deceased body of her husband slumped to the floor in front of her but not a single sound escaped from her lips. She watched on horrified as she stared into the familiar eyes of her eldest son as he advanced on her with his sword poised to strike.
"What are you doing Itachi? Why are you doing this?" She finally managed to scream out as Itachi closed his eyes with a sigh and raised his tanto.
"Sorry Kaa-san…" With that Itachi swung his blade in a sweeping arc, expecting the familiar sound of steel cutting through flesh. Instead what he got was the sound of steel impacting against steel; he opened his eyes to see a crimson visor staring right back at him.
"What do you think you're doing?" The armour wearing individual asked in a metallic voice, his right hand was outstretched and had blocked his blade with his gauntlet.
"Get out of my way; this matter does not concern you stranger." Itachi replied in his usual monotone voice as he tried to assess the threat level of the newcomer.
"It became my business when I see you trying to harm such a beautiful woman." The figure countered lightly as Mikoto felt her cheeks heat up despite the situation.
"…very well then, I shall just dispose of you and finish the job later." Itachi jumped backward to create some distance before blurring out of existence and reappearing behind the individual, he went for sweeping side slash at neck height. The figure just blocked it with his left gauntlet before swiftly spinning around and placing his palm against Itachi's stomach.
"Kiton: Chikara no Pusshu. (Force release: Force Push)" The metallic voice whispered as Itachi suddenly flew backwards due to an unknown force that emitted from his opponents palm.
'Kiton?' Itachi thought in confusion as he hacked up a mouthful of blood. He was suddenly assaulted by the memories of a clone he had ordered to patrol the grounds for any survivors.
Clone memories
The clone jumped on top of a pole to better view the area; he immediately spotted the running form of his little brother. He knew he couldn't kill his brother as he loved him too much so he thought of a plan to give his brother some motivation to get stronger.
Sasuke ran through the blood soaked streets as he hurried to his house when suddenly his brother appeared in front of him. Just as he was about to hug him, Sasuke noticed that Itachi was dressed in his ANBU uniform and his tanto was covered with fresh blood.
"A-aniki what did you do?" Sasuke asked in confusion. Itachi's clone just looked at him with indifference before examining the blood covered blade of his tanto.
"Just killing this sorry excuse for a clan."
"What? Why are you doing this!" Sasuke shouted in outrage.
"To test the limits of my power, nothing more nothing less…" Itachi replied simply as he looked Sasuke in the eyes. "I won't kill you today or tomorrow or even next week but I will come for you eventually. So run foolish little brother and cling on to your pathetic existence, hate me and use that hatred to grow stronger."
"Why aniki why…" Sasuke whispered as he looked into Itachi's eyes that suddenly changed into a tri-bladed shuriken.
"…because I simply can, Tsukuyomi! (Moon reader)" Sasuke heard Itachi say before his world suddenly vanished and he found himself in a black and red world. "Welcome to my world little brother, in here I control everything including time…for the next 72 hours you will watch me slaughter the clan and our parents repeatedly."
Itachi's clone watched as Sasuke screamed and curled up into a ball after three seconds, 'Damn I used up my remaining chakra using Tsukuyomi…'
Back to present
'So that's what my clone did… never mind that, I have to focus on this battle although almost half my chakra went into that clone.' Itachi thought as he wiped the blood from his lips and stood back up.
"Why don't you just leave Itachi-san, I don't feel like hurting one of the few people who actually bothered to save me from the mobs when I was young." The figure suddenly said causing Itachi's eyes to widen comically.
'This guy is Naruto? When did he get so strong? Looks like I can't finish the mission…' Itachi sheathed his tanto and looked at Naruto directly.
"I can sense the Hokage and ANBU coming already so I guess you win this round…Naruto-kun." Itachi smiled slightly before leaving via a quick Shunshin leaving behind an amused Naruto and a gaping Mikoto.
'This person who defeated Itachi, an ANBU captain at age 13, is none other than Uzumaki Naruto?' Mikoto thought as Naruto sighed and threw back his hood before removing his helmet. Mikoto blushed as she saw the angular face and wavy blonde hair that was slightly matted down due to sweat. 'Without the whisker marks he would look like a carbon copy of Minato…'
Naruto turned and looked at Mikoto before glancing at the corpse of Fugaku; he crouched down beside her and checked her for injuries. "Areyou injured in any way?"
"N-no, you arrived just in time…arigatou for saving me." Mikoto smiled slightly as Naruto just chuckled and replaced his helmet and hood.
"No problem, how could I stand by and watch someone scar this beautiful face. Now I must be off as reinforcements are coming and if they ask who saved you…" Naruto looked her in the eye with his crimson visor. "Tell them…Darth Revan did."
Naruto then vanished into the shadows of the house as Mikoto could still feel the blush on her face at the compliment regarding her beauty. Not a minute later, Hiruzen and two full squads of ANBU arrived at the scene.
"Mikoto-san, what happened here?" Hiruzen asked softly as he believed the woman to be traumatized by the death of her husband but in reality Mikoto had been in an arranged marriage and never really loved Fugaku.
"Itachi just appeared out of nowhere and started attacking us; he managed to wound Fugaku severely before killing him. He was about to kill me when someone saved me…" Mikoto trailed off as she remembered Naruto single-handedly holding off Itachi.
"Can you describe your saviour and did he tell you his name?" Hiruzen asked politely while inwardly thinking. 'Who would be able to hold off Itachi-kun until we arrived?'
"He wore red-trimmed black armour with a helmet and a cloak with a hood. As for his name…Darth Revan." Mikoto decided to honour her saviour's wish to remain unknown.
"I see… well Mikoto-san I think you would be glad to hear that we found Sasuke still alive." He began causing Mikoto to brighten up considerably. "Unfortunately I think Itachi got to him and did something to his mind because he kept muttering something about hatred and avenging the clan."
"Oh no my poor baby! Please take me to him right now Hokage-sama!" Mikoto cried out but thought about something as well. 'Since Itachi was fighting Naruto-kun the entire time that means it was a clone but that would mean Itachi wasn't at his full strength. Especially since he had just killed the rest of the clan…wait Naruto-kun? Where did that come from?'
With Naruto/Darth Revan
Naruto crouched in the shadow of a nearby tree using a technique he had learnt from Kyuubi to mask his chakra presence so people wouldn't be able to sense him easily. He watched as the ANBU escorted a worried looking Mikoto to the hospital for a check-up as well as to find her son.
'At least I was fast enough to save her…' Naruto thought with a sigh as he leapt away from the scene with a force enhanced jump.
'…why did you call her beautiful?' Came Kyuubi's question which caught Naruto off guard and almost caused him to smack face first into the next building.
'Why the heck did you suddenly asked that?' He replied after he saved himself from a humiliating and painful experience.
'Just answer the question!' She snapped causing Naruto to blink. If he had learned one thing about Kyuubi, it was that she never snapped at him even during training.
'I was complimenting her; she does look beautiful despite her age.' Naruto decided to humour her and answer.
'…and I don't?' She said quietly causing Naruto to gain a look of understanding.
'Kyuu-chan…are you jealous?' He asked in surprise as he never took the red-haired demoness to be the jealous type.
'N-no! I was just wondering why you didn't tell me stuff like that…'
'Kyuu-chan I never said that to you not because I don't think you aren't beautiful but because I can't find the words to even began describing your beauty.' Naruto answered honestly causing her to blush uncontrollably while thanking the gods that she was in the mindscape so Naruto couldn't see it.
'Aw thanks Naru-kun.'
'Anytime Kyuu-chan.'
Finally done with chapter two! I had a bit of a problem with this chapter because I actually had a small writers block but that's gone now! Lots of reviews for the first two chapters, that makes me really happy! Sorry if I didn't reply to everyone's review since I rather spend my time on the story rather than responding to reviews. Thanks to everyone who read and reviewed, the story is going to be picking up after this chapter so stick around! Ja ne!
*Vanishes into a swarm of bats*