Disclaimer: When you see the word disclaimer at the start, you already know I do not own Naruto or Star Wars…
Hey everyone, its xNamikazeKyuubix coming back to you guys with another chapter of Naruto: Force Unleashed. I woke up much better today, it seems like my illness has passed for the most part so here's to hoping eh? Since I felt better, I decided to get to writing on this next chapter since everyone wants me to update faster.
You guys do know that I am probably already the fastest up loader on this website right? Come on, I upload a new chapter every what? One or two days? That's freaking fast already, it takes time to type out a good chapter and to think it up as well. So I would appreciate it if you guys stop adding 'Please Update Faster!' into your reviews as it really puts pressure on me. It would be really appreciated.
Not saying I don't enjoy reviews, I really do enjoy getting and reading them. Since a plea for me to update means that you guys are really into the story, so I try my best to update as fast as possible while keeping up the quality. Damn, many of you want Danzo and Mizuki to bite the dust as horribly as possible as a result of Naruto hunting them down.
Another thing is that a lot of you think that Naruto should leave Konoha due to being beaten to the verge of death also one person believes that Naruto should be darker.(You know who you are ^.^) All I can say is….you will have to read to find out about Naruto's decision about staying or leaving the village. As for his personality, let me just say he has something akin to multiple personality disorder (MPD). He will be aloof and friendly around people he knows he can trust while returns to a cold sadistic personality when facing people he dislikes, he will just act indifferent to people he doesn't know that well. As you can see, he is also a slight flirt and will be doing so with some of the females, that does not mean he is going to be paired with them!
The poll concerning Sanbi has been closed because there was only one choice that was winning by a landslide, so Sanbi will return and join Naruto's harem. So for the current harem we have:
Mei, Female Kyuubi , Mikoto, Kushina, Yugito, Yuugao and Sanbi. I don't think I can seriously handle any more girls in the harem and I will not put up a poll because you guys always just vote to add them in the pairing…
Well here is the next chapter that you guys have been waiting for!
Chapter 6: Date and feelings
Naruto sighed as he got ready for his date with Mei, why was he sighing when he had a date with one of the most beautiful and sexiest females in the elemental nations? Well that's because Kyuubi has been refusing to talk to him after he had informed her that he was going on a date with Mei and he didn't know why. (Clueless…)
'Why has Kyuu-chan been ignoring me since I told her about my date?' Naruto thought sadly as he missed conversing with the beautiful red-haired demoness sealed within him. 'Was it something I said?'
Naruto sighed again as he looked at his reflection in the mirror, he was wearing a black T-shirt with a matching pair of black jeans. That was all he had for casual attire at the moment since he came to Kiri to fight a war, not to attend a fancy dress party. He just hoped Mei would understand and not melt him with her lava techniques…or acidic steam.
It has been a day since the war ended with Yagura's death at the hands of himself; the group decided it was best not to inform the public about Yagura being under an illusion. The Kiri army had quickly pledged their loyalty to Mei, the new Mizukage, as they didn't want to anger the guy who trashed a Biju. So repair works have gone underway with both the bloodline clans and non-bloodline clans working together like they were supposed to, Naruto's presence as Darth Revan ensured that.
Naruto had a small smile on his face as he walked down the streets of Kirigakure, while repair works were far from being completed, the village definitely looked better than it had during the war. As he walked towards the general direction of the building that Mei was temporarily staying in, the people on the streets waved a cheery greeting to him with smiles on their faces. Despite his initial protests, Mei had somehow convinced him to show Kiri the true face of their saviour.
At first everyone was shocked to see such a young face behind the menacing helmet of Darth Revan but that quickly changed into cheers of admiration and thanks. The civilians here were among the most grateful as they suffered a lot during the bloodline purges and they showed their gratitude by thanking him at every opportunity. Naruto thought back to the previous day's announcement of Mei as the Godaime Mizukage.
Flashback no Jutsu!
"People of Kirigakure! After a year of fighting and bloodshed, the war has finally ended and we can live our lives peacefully under a new leader. Everyone I present to you our Godaime Mizukage, Terumi Mei!" The announcer left the stage as Mei took his place; the crowd were cheering and clapping as she placed the Mizukage's hat on her head.
"Citizens of Kirigakure, shinobi and civilians alike! I, Terumi Mei, promise to return our village to its former glory and with your help, to show the rest of the hidden villages that we are stronger than ever!" Mei felt a sense of pride rush through her as the crowd roared their approval.
"I thank you all for your support but there is one person who we should all thank more than anyone else. The person who is responsible for ending the war and defeating 'Sanbi no Yagura' by himself, I give to you Darth Revan!" Mei clapped along with the crowd as the armoured form of Darth Revan made its way onto the stage beside her. Mei gestured to the mike, signalling he should address the village as well.
"As most of you should know by now, I am not a resident of Mizu no Kuni. My homeland is Hi no Kuni (Fire country) or to be more specific Konohagakure (Hidden leaf village). I had overhead the conversation between the Sandaime Hokage and Mei-chan and I heard the old man decline her request for help…" Naruto paused as the crowd seemed to mutter about selfish old leaders. "So I approached her and extended my services for free as I believe that you all were fighting for a noble cause."
"However…there is another reason for me…something more personal. I know the feeling of being discriminated…the feeling of being hunted down just because you are different than everybody else…the sadness, sorrow and confusion when people call you names such as freak or monster." Naruto whispered sadly as the bloodline half of the crowd nodded in understanding while the people that originally persecuted them hung their heads in shame. "I was rescued from my personal hell by three of my precious people so I couldn't stand by when other people were suffering the same fate as me."
"Villagers of Kirigakure…please do not reveal the information I am about to share with you with anyone outside the village, even if they are your friends or relatives. My alias is Darth Revan but my real name is Namikaze-Uzumaki Naruto…" Naruto removed his helmet as everyone gasped at the name, even Mei as he had not told her. "…and I'm the jinchuriki of the Kyuubi no Yoko."
Flashback no Jutsu KAI!
After he had announced his secret to the entire village, he proceeded to share the story of his life so far in Konoha… every single beating down to the last detail. He wasn't trying to scare them, he just wanted them to realise that he understood how they felt. The entire population had suggested razing Konoha to the ground for what they had done to their hero, shocking Naruto by their hatred towards 'his' village.
Naruto was so lost in his memories that he didn't notice he was already standing in front of Mei's doorstep until a total of five minutes had passed. Quickly regaining his bearings, Naruto rapped his knuckle on the wooden door three times and stepped back to wait. He heard shuffling footsteps approaching the door and the lock being undone before the door opened.
"Hey Mei-chan, I hope you don't mind my attire because this was all I brought with me to Kiri." Naruto smiled apologetically as Mei gave a small giggle.
"That's quite alright Naru-kun, we aren't going anywhere fancy. Just a quick bite somewhere and maybe a stroll around Kiri's park." Mei stepped out and locked the door while Naruto took the time to appreciate her figure.
She was out of her normal attire consisting of the fishnet bodysuit and ocean blue dress, instead she wore a dark blue tank top and a snug pair of faded blue jeans. The tank top hugged her natural curves and accentuated her cleavage while the jeans conformed to her long, slim legs and showed off her firm ass. With her hair flowing down naturally, Naruto had to use all his will not to get propelled down the street by a nosebleed and to keep his 'friend' from waking up.
"Maybe you should take a picture Naru-kun it might last longer." Mei suggested in amusement, knocking Naruto out of his trance as he rubbed his head sheepishly.
"Sorry Mei-chan, you just look so sexy in that outfit." Naruto replied honestly but shivered slightly when he saw Mei's smile turn into a devious smirk.
"Oh really? I think I look much sexier without any clothes on, want to see?" Mei asked innocently as she lifted her tank top slightly and that was too much for poor Naruto's brain to handle as he fainted with a trickle of blood coming from his nose.
After shaking him awake, the couple decided to grab a bite at a random roadside store that sold all kinds of food. Naruto had ordered a bowl of Niku Udon while Mei settled for a plate of deep fried tempura. They talked about the rebuilding of Kiri and what were the most important facilities that needed to be rebuilt.
"I believe the hospital should still be perfectly fine since it wasn't damaged during the war so the next important structure would be either the Mizukage's tower or the Ninja Academy." Mei listed off from her mind as she took another bite of the tempura prawn within the grasp of her chopstick.
"In my opinion, the academy should be the main priority since many good shinobi were lost during the war so you need to start training the next generation. I personally think Hayase would make a great instructor since he has the skill and patience to teach and handle children." Naruto suggested while thinking of the Jounin being surrounded by little kids.
"I agree…I guess I should speak with him regarding the matter and if he accepts then I shall have him be the headmaster of the academy." Mei decided and was about to take another bite when the piece of tempura floated out of her reach. She pouted at Naruto who just took one look at her face and chuckled. (Just like Anakin and Padme ^.^)
"I stand by my statement that you look cute when you pout." Naruto said as he used the force to float the piece of tempura back to Mei, who bit it right out of the air. They continued chatting but now about non-ninja related things while Naruto used the force to float the pieces of tempura to her mouth where she ate them. The store owner chuckled as he saw this, drawing the attention of both ninjas at the stand and looked at him curiously.
"The both of you look almost like a real couple with you feeding her although the method of doing so is a first for me." The owned chuckled further as both mentioned parties blushed but smiled and continued their actions.
We now find the pair strolling through the main park of Kiri hand in hand as they admired the scenery; they were not alone as many other couples were doing the same as well. Mei let out a sigh of contentment as she rested her head against Naruto's shoulder as they sat down on a park bench.
"This was my favourite place before the war started…my father always used to bring me here and tell me stories about my mother." Mei had a soft smile on her face as she reminisced about her past.
"What happened to your mother?" Naruto asked as nuzzled the top of her head and inhaled the scent of her hair, she smelled like an ocean breeze.
"She died when I was only a year old…apparently she had an incurable disease and my birth was too much for her system to handle… so she died a year later." Mei sniffed slightly as Naruto gave her a squeeze to comfort her. "My dad always used to say I looked so much like my mom… almost a perfect replica."
"Then your mom must have been beautiful, what was her name?" Naruto asked.
"Her name was Megumi…Uzumaki Megumi." Mei chuckled slightly at the surprised look on Naruto's face. "Surprised? I was too when you first told me your real name."
"So your mother was from the Uzumaki clan…" Naruto mused as he stroked her hair absentmindedly, something that Mei enjoyed greatly since no one had done that since her father had died at the start of the bloodline purges. (A/N: The war started a year ago but the bloodline purges had been going on for several, it was only a year ago did they start fighting back.)
"Yeah…" Mei trailed off as a depressing thought suddenly came to mind, Naruto immediately noticed the change and inquired about it.
"Hey… what's wrong Mei-chan?"
"It's just… this has been great Naruto… the most fun I've had in a while…but…" Mei bit her lip as tears threatened her vision.
"Come on…whatever it is you can tell me." Naruto tried to coax it out of her and finally succeeded.
"You're going back to your village and I might never see you again!" Mei blurted out suddenly causing Naruto to go wide-eyed.
"Baka, is that all you were worried about? I can come see you anytime I want…do you honestly think anyone could stop me?" Naruto tilted her head upwards as he spoke to her.
"You really mean it?" Mei asked hopefully as Naruto gave her a small smile.
"How about I show you?" Naruto whispered as he closed the gap between them and captured her lips in a soft but firm kiss. Mei gasped lightly but quickly melted into the kiss and returned with as much vigour, she pouted slightly as he pulled away.
"Does that prove my sincerity?" Naruto kissed her on the forehead this time as she let out a small giggle.
"It certainly did…still can't grasp the fact you're eight years old though…" Mei admitted.
"Well when you live a childhood like mine, you'd be amazed how quickly your mind matures to keep you alive…but enough with the gloom and doom atmosphere. It's getting late and I believe you should be getting home Mizukage-sama." Naruto joked as he swept her off her feet and carried her bridal style, prompting an 'eep' out of the shocked female.
"Warn me before doing something like that next time!" Mei slapped him on the arm lightly as Naruto carried her back to her room.
"Is that an order Mizukage-sama?" Naruto asked in an amused tone as Mei slapped him on the arm again.
"And stop with that Mizukage-sama crap, it makes me feel old."
"Anything for you Mei-chan." Naruto laughed as he suddenly increased his speed causing Mei to hold on to him tightly.
Eventually they arrived back at Mei's doorstep, where Naruto gently let her back onto her feet.
"I really enjoyed myself today Naru-kun…" Mei sighed but Naruto drew her in a hug.
"No sighing Mei-chan." He reprimanded lightly. "I may be leaving tomorrow morning but I promise I will visit from time to time."
"I know…I guess I'll see you off tomorrow morning…night Naru-kun." Mei gave him a small peck on the lips before entering her room and closing the door. Naruto had a smile on his face as he walked back to the apartment Mei had provided him with during his short stay in Kiri.
Naruto closed and locked the door behind him before flopping down onto the bed in his room, he thought about all he had done the past week. He sighed as he wondered if anything interesting had happened during his absence in Konoha, since he hadn't gotten any memories that meant the clone was still 'alive'.
Mentally shrugging, Naruto rolled on to his side and drifted off into sleep.
Mindscape
Naruto opened his eyes to spot the familiar surroundings of his mindscape; he was in the forest that surrounded Kyuubi's house. He made his towards the house he himself had designed that was situated in the middle of the forest.
Upon entering the house, Naruto heard the sound of someone crying and well…there was only one possible person in the house besides himself. He immediately sprinted up the stairs and slammed open the door to Kyuubi's bedroom and found the beautiful demoness sobbing her heart out into a pillow.
"Kyuu-chan!" Naruto exclaimed in worry as he rushed to her side and tried to pull her into a hug but she pushed him away.
"Why are you crying Kyuu-chan?" Naruto asked in a soft tone as he sat on the edge of the bed, he reached out a hand and placed it on her shoulder. Kyuubi flinched at the contact but didn't try to pull away; Naruto slowly moved his hand to her back and started to rub it soothingly. "What's wrong?"
"Y-you kn-now w-what's w-wrong!" Kyuubi managed to get out through her hiccupping sobs causing Naruto to adopt a look of confusion.
"I do?" He asked as Kyuubi broke down again, Naruto quickly pulled her into a hug. Kyuubi initially tried to push him off but gave up halfway and just cried onto his shoulder. "I'm sorry Kyuu-chan but I don't understand…was it something I said?"
"N-no…" Kyuubi mumbled but thought. 'It's something you didn't say…but I would wish for nothing more to hear from you.'
"Please tell me what I did wrong Kyuu-chan…you know I can't stand to see you cry…" Naruto squeezed her shoulders gently as she whispered something under her breath. "What is it?"
"…why?" It was clearer this time but the word confused Naruto.
"What do you mean by why?" Naruto was really puzzled by her behaviour.
"…tell me why…" Her voice was normal now as she tried to control her sobs.
"I don't understand what you me-"
"WHY DID YOU PICK HER? WHY NOT ME? WHY CAN'T I HAVE A HAPPY ENDING? WHY DO I HAVE TO FEEL THIS WAY ABOUT YOU? WHY Don't you love me…" Kyuubi's voice lowered at the last part as she grabbed the front of Naruto's shirt in a vice-like grip as tears streaked down her face from her crimson pupils. "Why must I be alone…?"
To say Naruto was shocked would be an understatement, the mighty Kyuubi no Yoko, queen of the tailed beasts and hell, the most beautiful and sexiest woman he had ever seen loved him. Now Naruto was by no means gay if you think he was not attracted to her, he definitely was attracted to her.
"Kyuu-chan…" Naruto used a hand to wipe away the tear marks on her face.
"Is it because I'm a demon? Or am I not attractive enough?" Kyuubi asked softly as she looked at anywhere except Naruto.
"Kyuu-chan…look at me." Naruto said seriously. "I don't give a damn if you're a demon and I told you before that you are the most beautiful woman on this planet."
"Then why don't you love me!" Kyuubi wailed as her tears sprung forth again.
"But I do love you damn it!" Naruto shouted as he shook her by the shoulders, she froze on the spot upon hearing that.
"W-what?" Kyuubi asked hesitantly as if she was afraid that she had misheard it.
"I love you." Naruto emphasized each word.
"Then why didn't you tell me?"
"Do you think admitting my feelings for you is easy? You are the Kyuubi, queen of the Bijus and hell, why would someone as beautiful as you choose me when there are so many better guys out there…" Naruto trailed off with a sigh.
"Naru-kun… there is no better man out there than you, you are strong, brave, handsome and smart but you are also kind, compassionate and caring to those you care about. That's why I kept asking myself why would someone as wonderful as you show any interest in me… and seeing you with Mei just confirmed it…" Kyuubi sniffed slightly.
"Kyuu-chan… I told you I don't care that you're a demon or if you did anything terrible in the past, I don't care about any of that because in my eyes…" Naruto smiled as he drew closer to her. "You're perfect just the way you are."
Naruto pressed his lips against hers in a passionate kiss; he pushed all the repressed emotions he held in into the kiss. Kyuubi couldn't believe that Naruto was kissing her but her stunned state lasted only a moment before she returned the kiss with equal passion. Naruto didn't know that much about kissing but went with his instincts; he licked her lower lip to ask her entrance to her mouth. Kyuubi opened her mouth in reflex and invited his tongue in to engage in a heated battle for dominance that Naruto won, she moaned as he drew her tongue into his own mouth and sucked on it.
They eventually had to separate leaving behind a trail of saliva that connected their lips, Kyuubi moved beside Naruto and nuzzled deeper into his embrace.
"Hey Kyuu-chan…?" Naruto called her name.
"What is it Naru-kun?" Kyuubi looked up at her blonde haired lover.
"What about Mei-chan?" Naruto asked in worry. "I love you but I don't want to hurt her and I think I'm starting to fall for her too…I don't know what to do…"
"As much as I'd love to have you for myself koi (love), I know it be unfair to other girls… besides I think I just remembered something that would help." Kyuubi said.
"You do? What is it?"
"Isn't there some kind of law in every village stating that the last member of a bloodline clan has to take multiple wives so to restore the clan? Technically you are the last person able to use your bloodline so…" Kyuubi let him figure it out from there, which didn't take long as his eyes widened in realisation.
"I have to take multiple wives… but won't you or Mei mind sharing me?" Naruto didn't want to do something that would make her sad.
"I already said no matter how much I'd want you all for myself, it wouldn't be fair to Mei as well as others… it is also common practice for male demons of high ranking to take multiple mates." Kyuubi gave him a peck on the cheek. "But that's for being so considerate about my feelings."
"I guess if it's alright with you then I could give it a shot… but only if the girls love me for me genuinely." Naruto looked at the demoness he was holding. "And I promise to get you out of this seal as soon as possible."
"I honestly don't care as long as I'm with you… but being on the outside again would be nice. However I believe you should be getting some shut eye for your trip back to Konoha tomorrow." Kyuubi pulled him down with her onto her bed and used his chest as her pillow. Naruto placed an arm around her waist and pulled her against him, she responded by snuggling into his chest.
Naruto closed his eyes as he thought of all the future challenges that would be as hard or harder than the fight against Yagura but for the moment, with Kyuubi in his arms, he was content and complete, which was all that mattered.
Shorter chapter this time around due to the fact that this is just Naruto forming his relationships with his two main future mates, Kyuubi and Mei are going to be the main focus of the harem. I hope it wasn't too sappy or anything, I'm not very good at writing this kind of thing more adept at fight scenes and storylines. Well leave me a review or PM letting me know what you think about this chapter okay?
I tried approaching the NaruKyuu relationship from a slightly different perspective, most stories have Naruto as the one who feels he isn't worthy to be Kyuubi's mate. So I made Kyuubi the one who felt she doesn't deserve Naruto in this fanfic though Naruto also feels the same way but only to a certain degree. Hope you guys enjoyed my portrayal of Naruto's, Mei's and Kyuubi's behaviour, also the fact that I made Mei's mother an Uzumaki.
Well that's it for this chapter; stick around for the next one which should be out in a day or two. I'm having my final Japanese exam tomorrow so wish me luck everyone! Please review as I enjoy reading them, Ja ne!
*Turns into sand and drifts away just like Gaara ^.^*