My second chapter :) please review, and if you continued this far, thank you so much! here, have a cookie :P
A blond man, dirty and hungry, sat under a large tree, looking over a sparkling pool of water. He had been there for days, probably weeks.
All alone, with his head in his hands, crying. It was pathetic really, the likes of him, degraded to this, pure tragic. He was supposed to be feared, even though at this point he really didn't want to be feared, he just wanted someone to help him without him asking, so as not to embarrass himself.
He had no idea how he had gotten on this planet. One moment, he was in the fiery depths of hell, dying, and the next, he was on a strange new world, face down in the dirt. His jeans were ripped in random parts, from his knee below.
For a while, he had blood all over his hand, his own blood probably. He had tried walking, but his leg was very sore, so he limped. He struggled with walking for a few more days until he found the pool of water. There he washed his filthy face and hands, only then breaking down, sobbing.
He had been given so many chances, chances to get better, be better. And he turned them all down.
"I am an absolute idiot" he thought "Why wasn't I allowed to just die in hell, why did I survive"
Even if he had a way to get off this stupid planet, where would he go? He was an enemy of almost every planet. No one would help him, even if he begged, which he hopefully wasn't going to lower himself to.
Wallowing in self-pity, the blond man calmed himself down, ran a hand through his hair, and lay down to try to get some sleep. Curled up, he fell into a deep unconscious state, not to wake up for a few hours.
He woke up to darkness. And voices. He assumed that it was all a dream, some cruel trick to give him hope, but he wouldn't take his chances.
He quickly stood up as well as he could and hobbled to the opposite side of the tree, hiding himself from view of anyone, or anything for that matter. He leaned against the tree, holding himself up. Pulling his dark hood over his hair, he held his breath so as not to draw attention.
He heard a girl's voice. It was full of laughter. It was calling out to someone, saying to "catch up" and "hurry". The voice didn't sound hostile, but he decided not to take his chances. He closed his eyes so as to concentrate better on the situation.
Her voice kept getting louder and louder, until it sounded like she was on the other side of the tree, but then it got all quiet. He tried to move a little, but just his luck, he stepped on a leaf, making a noticeable crunching sound.
He felt a pain on the back of his head, and the last thing he heard before it all got dark, was a strangely familiar mechanical noise. But before he could see who or what it was, he was out cold.
Amelia, holding a branch in a batting position, stood over a body of some sorts, just as the Doctor arrived
"Pond, I can't leave you alone without you killing someone, now can I" The Doctor said in a jokingly tone as he stepped out of his TARDIS
"Doctor, you cheat, that wasn't fair" Amy pouted " and I didn't kill anyone. I heard a crackling noise so I grabbed this branch and I swung."
"You are so Scottish" he mumbled, Amelia heard him
"How so?" she challenged
"Well, I, well, just never mind, you just are. Come on, let's get whoever or whatever this is into the TARDIS. Then we can come back out here and watch the stars" he replied
So Amy and the Doctor grabbed the arms and legs of whoever it was and pulled them into the TARDIS and onto a couch. Without a second glance, the two travelers rushed back outside, just in time to see the start of a meteor shower.
"This is beautiful" Amy breathed in awe, as they lay on the blue grass, staring at the beautiful night sky
"I know, we should come back here again" the Doctor agreed.
Amelia nodded, and before she knew it, she had fallen to sleep. The Doctor soon followed her example, and they fell asleep under the gorgeous night sky.
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