PUZZLING DETERMINATION
Puzzleshipping
Humor/Romance
Chapter 2
\YUGI\
/YAMI/
/Yami's Thoughts/
I keep on forgetting this. I own nothing and I think anyone who has EVER been on this site knows that they have no ownership over any of the material unless they are actually the author/creator.
TRY #6 Puzzle Pieces
\Mou Hitori no Boku! Did you make this?\
/Hai, Aibou. It is simply a more complex version of the blank puzzle Honda gave Miho./
\I'll get started on it right away!\
/Please don't react badly…/
{10 minutes later with the puzzle halfway done}
\Oh, I'm sorry, Mou Hitori no Boku! I promised I will meet Jounochi at the arcades! I'll just put it back in the box to finish later!\
{Dropped back all mixed up and closed where a pile of old homework fell down and buried it; forgotten}
/Back to square one./
ATTEMPT 6: Blocked
TRY #7 Name
\Everything's scratched out, Mou Hitori no Boku!\
/It's fine, Aibou. We'll figure it out someday./
\But-what about Jounochi, Honda, and Anzu? They can't keep calling you Other Yugi, people will get suspicious and they might take you away from me!\
/I'll never leave you, Aibou. I need to tell you something./
\Mou Hitori no Boku?\
/I really like -/
\Like what?\
/Ano…the name Yami! Yeah…/
\Yami? It really suits you! *Smiles Beautifully*\
/*Sigh* I couldn't do it…/
ATTEMPT 7: Backed Out
TRY #8 Jealous
/Aibou? Where are we going?/
\There's this new place I want to show you!\
/Place?/
\Yea! I LOVE it! So now I have to show you!\
/Love? Why can't you love me? Oh, really?/
\Yep! *Nods Head* It's the new candy store!\
/Damn./
ATTEMPT 8: Didn't Even Try/Jealous Over Candy Store
Try #9 Chocolate
/Aibou…who gave you chocolate? So I can kill them for stealing my idea./
\Anzu gave it to me, Yami! She said to share with you, do you want to take control of my body to try some?\
/…Is Yugi trying to kill me? It is fine, Aibou. Why don't you enjoy it? While I plot Anzu's demise./
\Really? Thanks, Yami!\
/Aibou, why don't you go visit the thief? You haven't spoken to Bakura in a while. Payback, tomb robber./
\Okay, Yami! After I finish the box!\
/Tongue…Melted…Mess…Licked Clean…Think of…Think of…Damn it! Yugi's going to be the death of me./
ATTEMPT 9: Too Late
Try #10 Amethysts
He could never get tired of those beautiful amethyst eyes shining with innocence and light, not so naïve, but more as in the gentleness and purity. Yami couldn't help but fall in love all over again as he stars at Yugi's reflection in the mirror. He absently replies to Yugi's question only to snap back to reality at the shocking silence echoing in the mindlink.
/Aibou?/
\Yami. Did you just call me beautiful?\
/Umm…Damn. Did I say that out loud? What would you say if I said yes?/
\O.O Are you playing with me Yami?\
/Aibou…I don't like lying to you and am telling the truth. Here it goes…I think you are beautiful./
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~SILENCE~
/Aibou?/
\...\
/Aibou? Are you okay?/
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CLIFFHANGER! I won't update until you guys decide on how you want this to end.
The options are as follows:
Yami plays it off as Yugi's eyes reminding him of something
Yugi ignores Yami in a state of shock
Yami confesses to Yugi right there
Yugi runs off to one of his friends and closes off the mindlink
Nothing happens and Yugi believes it is all a dream because Yami takes over the body, puts Yugi to sleep, and lays him down in bed, making Yug iwake up with nothing seeming wrong
Please review to tell me how you want it to end because right now, I can't decide.
Plus, tell me on what you think about the story so far, any criticism to help me improve, etc.
Silver Replay
*It's 8:05 PM right now and FFN has been down for 2 hr 48 min. When is it finally going to come back online so I can post this?