So, I didn't have much reviews. I decided to post this chapter and after that wait until you guys tell me if I should continue.

She walks up to the hill and is shocked by what she sees. It's the most beautiful view she has ever seen. She could look all over the valley. She decides there and then that this was gonna be her spot and she wasn't gonna tell anyone about it. She walks back home and sees that the truck with their stuff arrived.

Nora: Hey Loren, we're gonna unpack later. I'm going to MK to discuss my job with Max.

Melissa: Can we go with you? Please, please, please?

Nora: Sure, but why?

Melissa: Because Max is the father of EDDIE DURAN, duh. Maybe Eddie's gonna be there and even if he isn't, I wanna meet my future father-in-law.

Loren: I'm just gonna stay home for a little bit.

Nora: Why? Don't you wanna meet Eddie or Max?

Loren: Max, maybe. Eddie, definately NOT!

Melissa: Well, then you're out of luck because you're going so with us

Loren (groans): Why...

Melissa: Because I don't wanna be there all by myself.

Loren (sighs): Okay, I'll go with you

Melissa: Thanks! Have I ever told you that you're the best twin ever?

Loren: Maybe a few times

Eddie just came home from his interview with Lily Park and his phone went off.

Eddie: Hey pops

Max: Hey, how did your interview go?

Eddie: Fine

Max: Eddie, can you maybe come over to MK?

Eddie: Sure, why?

Max: Well, I've got a new employee and I want you to meet her.

Eddie: Why do you want me to meet her?

Max: Because she's gonna be like my personal assistent, so she's going to be around a lot. I want you to like her.

Eddie: Well, I'm sure I'll like her with your taste in woman. I'll be right there

Max: Thanks Eddie, love you

Loren, Melissa and Nora walk into MK and see Max and Eddie waiting for them. Melissa is jumping up and down but Loren just stood behind Nora.

Max: Hey Nora, nice to see you again. And who are those two beautiful ladies you brought with you?

Nora: These are my two daughters Melissa and Loren. They are huge fans of you Eddie.

Loren: Uchum

Nora: Oh, I'm sorry. Loren isn't a fan, only Melissa is

Max: Well, nice to meet you girls

Loren: Nice to meet you too Max.

Melissa (excited): Hi Eddie!

Eddie: Hi Melissa, nice to meet you

Loren (whispering): Mel, I'm going home

Melissa (not paying attention): Aha

Eddie's thoughts
Nora seems nice, I think my father made a good choise by employing her. She has got two daughters about my age, the black one is good-looking but the brunette looks absolutely stunning. Loren, that's the most beautiful name I've ever heard. Wait, did she just said that Loren isn't a fan of mine? She's leaving, I'll follow her and find out why she isn't fan of me.

Eddie: I'm going dad, bye Nora. It was a pleasure to meet you.

Melissa: Wait Eddie, where are you going?

Eddie: I just have to handle some buisness, bye

Melissa: Byeeeeeeee Eddie

Loren walked back home and up to the hill, she wanted to write down an idea of a song that was in her head. She sat down and started to sing it while writing it down.

They tell me it's nice this time of year

Down on earth

But my heads been in the clouds I'm acting weird

And lost for words

...

Close enough to touch but you're looking through me

In the same room, a smile away

feels miles from where you are

Might as well be Ma-a-ars

Might as well be Mars

Loren jumped from the sound of clapping behind her.

Eddie: That was really good, you know

Loren: How long have you been standing there?

Eddie: Long enough to hear your beautiful song

Loren: How did you find me?

Eddie: I followed you

Loren: Do I need to be scared?

Eddie: Of course not, I just wanted to ask you why you don't like my music

Loren: I never said I didn't like your music

Eddie: So you do like it?

Loren: It's not so bad

Eddie (pretending to be hurt): Ouch, not so bad?

Loren: You heard me

Eddie: Well, I'll just pretend I didn't hear that. Why did your mother say, you're not a fan of me

Loren: Because I'm not

Eddie: Why not?

Loren: Because you're just a spoilt little rockstar

Eddie: What makes you think that

Loren: The way you act and the things you say on TV

Eddie (coming closer): And how would that be?

Loren: Like everybody loves you and like you own the world

Eddie: Well, what can I do to change your opinion

Loren: Nothing, you'll just have to go to my sister if you want a fan

Eddie: Will this change your opinion?

Eddie leans in...

Ooh, will they kiss. Read the next chapter to find out. But don't forget to review because I want to know if you guys think I should continue or not. So review!