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Eddie leans in but Loren slaps him on his cheek with all she has. Eddie's cheek turns all red
and a little bit blue and purple. Loren walks back to her house. Eddie tries to follow her but she starts to run.
Loren (yelling): Don't you dare do that again!
Eddie's thoughts
So she does like my music but doesn't like me. Is that a good or a bad thing, I guess both. I want to change her opinion about me by kissing her but she slaps me really hard and runs away. This girl is special, every other girl would be thrilled to kiss me but not her. She's beautiful, confident, strong and super talented. This girl is amazing and she looks so hot. I got guilty, I've got a girlfriend and I tried to kiss another girl.
Melissa and Nora are already there when Loren runs into the house.
Melissa: Lo, where have you been. We already finished unpacking.
Nora: Is everything alright sweetie?
Loren: Yeah, I'm fine. I'm going to unpack now.
The next morning Loren wakes up and realizes that it's Monday. She wakes Melissa up too and starts to get ready for school.
Melissa: Lo, we've got to look hot today
Loren (sighs): Why?
Melissa: Well first of all, our first impression on the other students needs to be good or they're gonna think we're losers
Loren: And the second reason?
Melissa (excited): We're on the same school as EDDIE DURAN, isn't that great?!
Loren: No, it isn't
Melissa: Well, I'm gonna make you hot anyway
Loren (groans): If you have to
Melissa made Loren wear a grey bareshoulders chain strap floral print top and white shorts. She hangs a white crescent necklace around her neck and white feather earrings in her ears. She finished it with styled hair, white eyeshadow, mascare, eyeliner above her eyes and black kidsuede chinese laundry shoes.
Melissa wore a sexy sleeveless purple top and denim shorts. On her waist hangs a crystal belt made in tanzanite and in her ears big round sparkling earrings. She finished it with eyeliner above her eyes, mascara and violet suede high heels sandals.
Melissa and Loren walk into the kitchen. Nora looks shocked at her two girls.
Nora: Eh, why are you two looking like that?
Loren: Don't look at me, she made me do it
Melissa: Mom, you have to understand that we need to make a good impression on the other students... and EDDIE DURAN
Nora: Well, I'm sure you guys will make some great friends
Loren: I hope so
Melissa: Come on Lo, don't be always so negative. You have to see the good in things.
Loren: Come on, we have to go
Nora: Hey girls, before I forget I bought you a little present because you two were so supportive about the whole moving thing.
Loren: Oh mom, you didn't have to do that
Melissa (excited): Where is it?
Nora: Yes I did. You've been through a lot. First with Trent leaving and now by moving and leaving all of your friends behind.
Melissa (louder): Where is it?
Nora saw the hurt in Loren's eyes when she mentioned Trent. Loren was so strong, she had a really hard time when Trent left two years ago. She never cried when someone saw but Nora knew she cried a lot at night. Melissa never did though, it was also like she didn't care Trent was gone. The only thing she said about it was: his lost.
Melissa (yelling): Mom, where is it!
Nora: It's standing in front of the house.
They all walked outside and saw a grey opel cascada standing in front of the house. Melissa starts squeeling and jumping.
Melissa: Thank you mom, Loren and I will be like the hottest girl in school with this car and our looks
Nora: Mel, Loren drives this car at all times. Understood?
Melissa (sad): But why?
Nora: Because you crashed your last car and Loren is much more careful.
Melissa (sighs): Yeah, you're right. (happy) And I'll look great at the other side of the car too.
Loren gave her mom a kiss and she and Melissa got into the car, opened the roof and drove away. Both with sunglasses on. They arrived at school and drawed a lot of attention. Eddie stood in front of the school with a blond girl.
Eddie's thoughts
Man, Loren looks HOT
Blond girl: Babe, are you gonna tell me what's wrong with your cheek? It's all blue and purple of the bruises.
Eddie couldn't tell her that Loren slapped him because he tried to kiss her, so he lied.
Eddie: It's nothing babe, I just fell
Ian, Adam and Tyler were standing in front of the school next to Eddie and were watching Loren and Melissa.
Ian: Hey man, who are those chicks?
Adam: Don't know man but they look HOT
Ian: Forget it man they are so too hot for you
Tyler: So that leaves them to me and Ian because Eddie already got a girl
Eddie couldn't help but feel a little bit jealous.
Loren and Melissa walked out of the car, past Eddie and his whole fanclub/friends without even looking at them. They were now standing at their lockers which were next to each other.
Melissa: Well, I think that went pretty good
Loren: Yeah, I guess
Tyler and Ian came walking up to them. Melissa turns round but Loren just continues putting stuff into her locker. They were friends of Eddie so she didn't want anything to do with them. She figured they would be spoilt just like Eddie.
Tyler: Hi, I'm Tyler and that's Ian.
Melissa: Tyler Rorke that famous actor and Ian the photographer?
Ian: That's us
Melissa (flirty): Well, hello. I'm Melissa Tate and it's very nice to meet you
Ian (flirty): It's very nice to meet you too, Melissa
Melissa blushes and Tyler touches Loren's shoulder. She was just ready putting stuff in her locker. She turns around and looks into a gorgeous face.
Tyler (flirty): Hi, I'm Tyler
Loren (litte bit angry): Bye, I'm Loren
Tyler's thoughts
Ooh a fighter. I like it!
With that said Loren walked away, Melissa followed her. Around the corner Loren saw Eddie just pulling back from a kiss with the blond girl. She walked over to him and...
Ooh, what whill she do? Review and you'll find out. So thet didn't kiss in the beginning of this chapter. That would ruin my whole idea of this story because Loren doesn't like him... at all. Maybe they'll kiss now? Again review and you'll find out.