So, I'm glad you guys liked it. Here's another chapter. Enjoy!
Around the corner Loren saw Eddie just pulling back from a kiss with the blond girl. She walks over to him and slapps him on the same cheek as yesterday, again with all she has. After that she walks to class.
Blond girl: Who was that girl?
Eddie: She's the daughter of my father's personal assistent. I just met her yesterday.
Blond girl: Why did you have to meet her?
Eddie: My dad wanted me to meet his personal assistent because she's going to be around a lot. She took her daughters with her.
Blond girl: I get that but why did she hit you?
Eddie: I really have NO idea
Blond girl: You aren't lying to me are you?
Eddie: Of course not, babe. I really have no idea why she hitted me.
Blond girl: All right. But just stay away from her, will you? She could be a crazy stalking fan or something like that.
Eddie: No, she isn't a fan. She made that pretty clear yesterday.
Blond girl: What do you mean?
Eddie: Well, her mother said that her daughters were huge fans of me but then Loren kuched. After that her mother said that Loren wasn't fan of me.
Blond girl: Well, maybe she isn't a fan but she is now the hottest girl in school. After me of course. So stay away from her, I don't want you to fall for her.
Eddie: I hate to break it to you babe but the guys think that Loren's the hottest girl in school and that her sister is the second hottest girl.
Blond girl (shocked): But, but that makes me third!
Eddie: Don't worry babe, (lying): I think you are the hottest girl and I'll stay away from Loren
Eddie's thoughts
Why did she hit me?! It really hurted, my cheek already was bruised but now it's turning black. I'm going to find out what I did wrong. It must be pretty bad with the way she slapped me. I hope she will Tyler down too though, not that it will help. Tyler is a fighter too, I know him long enough to know that he won't give up. I think the guys are right though, Loren IS the hottest girl in school and Melissa's second but I'm not gonna tell my girlfriend that.
After the last class Loren and Melissa walk to their car. But when they arrive they see Tyler and Ian leaning against it. Loren tried her best to stay calm.
Loren (a little bit pissed): Would you guys please stop leaning against our brand new car?! You're ruining the varnish!
Tyler: Only if you girls go on a double date with us
Loren was about to say forget it when Melissa whispered in her ear.
Melissa (whispering): Come on Lo, please. I really like Ian.
Loren (whispering): I thought you were gonna marry Eddie?
Melissa (whispering): Yeah, but until that day comes I can have a litlle bit fun, can't I?
Loren (whispering): I guess but I think they're just spoilt and think they can have every girl they want.
Melissa (whispering): Please Lo?
Loren (confident): Melissa will go on a date with Ian if you guys stop leaning against our car. But there's no way, I'm going out with that spoilt little actor.
Melissa (whispering): Lo, what are you doing?
Loren (whispering): Trust me
Tyler (pretending to be hurt): Okay, spoilt actor I can take but little actor?
Loren (disdainful): Deal with it pretty boy
Tyler: Well, if you're not going with us, I guess we don't have a deal
Ian (whispering): Man, what are you doing. You're ruining my date with Melissa
Tyler (whispering): Just trust me, Loren will break eventually
Oh, what was Tyler wrong. Loren steps into the car and signs Melissa to do the same. Tyler and Ian just keep leaning against the car. Suddenly Loren drives away with full speed, Tyler and Ian fall against the ground
Loren (yelling): Byeeeeee boys!
Ian (standing up): Man, I told you
Tyler (standing up too): She's great, isn't she?
Ian: Hey man, focus! You blew it
Tyler: I know, next time I'll make sure you get your date with Mel okay?
Ian: You better, Melissa is hot, isn't she?
Tyler: Loren is way more hotter, dude. And Loren has got an attitute, I never dated someone like that. All the other girls I dated were all over me, no Loren is different
Ian: Yeah, she sure is a fighter. Just like you, I'd love to see how that turns out
Tyler: It will turn out great but why do you like Melissa so much? You've dated girls like that before
Ian: I don't know dude. But there's one thing I do know, she's the hottest girl in school
Tyler: Second hottest, Loren is the hottest girl in school
Ian: Let's just go
Melissa: Lo, WHY didn't you just go on a date with Tyler?! Now you totally blew my change of going on a date with Ian
Loren: Because he's a jerk and a player, he doesn't deserve it. I'm sorry Mel but I just couldn't give him what he wants
Melissa: Well, I guess you're right. Maybe they are players but I don't care because I'm gonna marrry Eddie so it's just temporary.
Loren: Well, that's just not the way I am Mel
Melissa: I'm sorry Lo. I know how much you care about a solid relationship. Especially after dad left, I know how hard that was for you
Loren (hurted): It's alright, you just want to have some fun
They arrived at home but didn't expect what was standing in front of the door.
Ooh, what would it be, why did Loren hitted Eddie and who's Eddies girlfriend? Review and find out
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