So, I'm back from vacation. I hope you guys will review
Loren: You would just start about how you were right about rich people and it was kind of exciting to secretly date him.
Melissa: Lo, you can tell me everything. You know that. The only thing you could never tell me is like if you kissed Eddie or something like that.
Loren (nervous): Well, than it's a good thing that will never happen
Melissa (laughing): Yeah, you don't even like him. You would never kiss him
Loren (laughing nervous): Yeah, never
The next day at school Loren was putting stuff in her locker when Eddie walked up to her. He puts his hands on her waist but she steps back.
Eddie: What's wrong? I thought that you're my girlfriend, you know because of the kiss?
Loren: I wanna be your girlfriend Eddie, I really do but I can't
Before he could respond Loren walked away. He tried to follow her but she was too fast.
After the last class Loren walked to her locker but someone pulled her into a closet. Before she knew Loren was pinned to the wall.
Loren (shocked): Eddie? What are you doing?
Eddie: I need to talk to you. Why can't you be my girlfriend?
Loren (persuasive): Eddie, let me go
Eddie: No, not before you explain
Loren (sighs): Okay, I'll tell you why. I can't date you because of Melissa
Eddie: Your sister? Why not?
Loren: Because she's kind of crazy fan in love with you. She's convinced that she's gonna marry you some day
Eddie: How can she love me? She doesn't even know me and I thought that she was dating Ian?
Loren: She says that that's only temporary
Eddie: Isn't that a little bit mean?
Loren: Yeah it is but she says Ian doesn't like to date the same girl for a long time so it doesn't matter
Eddie: But I don't like Melissa, I like you
Loren: Why? Why do you like me?
Eddie: Because you're different. You don't like the rockstar EDDIE DURAN like Melissa, you like me for me. And I feel a really deep connection with you, when we kissed I felt energy flowing through my whole body.
Loren (blushing): Yeah, I felt that too. But I can't date you, Melissa would hate me forever
Eddie Well, she can't hate you if she doesn't now that we're dating right?
Loren: You would keep it a secret for me?
Eddie: Yeah, you're special Loren. I would do anything for you
Loren (blushing): Aaaah, that's sweet but I've got to go
Before she could walk away Eddie pulled her into a fierce kiss. He pinned her even harder against the wall and a small groan came out of her throat. Loren puts her legs around his waist and he supports her by putting his hand on her butt. He licks her bottom lip asking for entrance and she opens her mounth. Their tongs fight a while for dominance, Loren wins and starts exploring his mounth. After a while Eddie starts pushing her tong away and he explores her mounth. Loren lets small groans escaping her throat when he starts stroking her back with his free hand. Her hands move wild over his chest and Eddie lets a groan escape too.
Nora: Melissa, do you know where Loren is?
Melissa: No, I couldn't find her after school.
Nora: Didn't she say anything to you? Maybe if she went to the house of a friend or boyfriend?
Melissa: No, she didn't say anything. Maybe she's with a friend but she doesn't have a boyfriend anymore.
Nora: What do you mean not anymore?
Melissa: Well, she had one but she broke up with him. But I still have a boyfriend though
Nora: I thought you were gonna marry Eddie?
Melissa: Yeah, Ian is just my temporary boyfriend
Nora (shocked): Melissa! You can't use people like that. If you're not serious about this boy, you've got to break up with him.
Melissa: But I really really like Ian
Nora: Well, than why do you want to marry Eddie?
Melissa: Eh, duh because he's famous and rich
Nora: So, you want to use Eddie too?
Melissa's thoughts
Maybe mom is right, I can't just use Ian and Eddie like that. And I really like Ian, maybe I don't want to marry Eddie anymore. I really feel a connection with Ian and when I kiss him I feel sparks I never felt before. I have to think about it.
Loren (totally out of breath): I have to go
Eddie (groans): Why?
Loren (breathing heavily): Because my mom and Melissa don't know where I am
Eddie (breathing heavily): Well, I guess I'll have to let you go than
Loren (out of breath): Oh no!
Eddie (out of breath): What?
Loren: I don't have a car, Melissa must have took our car when I didn't show up
Eddie: I can drop you off
Loren: No you can't
Eddie: Why not?
Loren: Because Melissa will see you
Eddie: Than I'll drop you off at our spot
Loren: Our spot? I like that, we should meet there when we want to see each other. That way no one will see us.
Eddie: Yeah, we'll do that. Come on let's go
Loren and Eddie arrived at their spot but when Loren wants to get out of the car Eddie grabs her arm and pulls her into his lap.
Loren: Do I ever get rid of you?
"No" says Eddie before pulling her into a sweet kiss that soon became more passionate. Eddie asked Loren for entrance by licking her bottom lip but Loren doesn't open up, instead she pulls back.
Ooh, why did she pull back? Please review, more reviews is more motivation for me to update sooner.