Here's the next chapter. If you don't like it say it the nice way or not at all.
EDDIE'S POV
She's so beautiful, I can't stop staring at her. I missed waking up with Loren in my arms. She looks so peaceful, I can look at her for hours. But we have to get ready for school so I give her a soft peck on her lips.
Loren (sleepy): Hey
I walk to her bedroom door and lock it. She looks at me confused so I explain by pulling her into a passionate kiss.
Loren (pulling back): How much time do we have?
Eddie (panting): Enough... (smirking) Let's take a shower.
Loren (smiling): That sounds great.
She gets out of her bed and I admire her naked body. She notices but this time she doesn't cover it up. I walk closer to her and put my hands on her waist. I pull her into a fierce kiss and we walk backwards into the shower.
Loren (whispering): Wanna soap me in, babe?
Eddie (panting): I can't say no to that, can I?
Loren (smiling): Nope, you can't.
So, I put some soap on my hands and start rubbing it on her. I start with her shoulders and trail to her breasts. I take a little more time with her breast than with her shoulders. I look up to her face, her eyes are closed and she softly moans. I decide to tease her by trailing down to her stomach. She looks down with a disappointed face and I soap her legs in. While I trail down to her legs I touch her sensitive spot for a brief moment and she lets out a load moan.
Loren (moaning): You're such a tease.
After soaping in her legs it's time for her ass. I stand up and start stroking her ass while Loren kisses my neck. I start moaning and squeezing her breasts. She's still kissing my neck while moaning loudly.
Melissa: Guys, wrap it up! It's almost time for school!
I open my eyes and see Loren smirking.
Loren (smirking): Wanna do a quick one?
Eddie (panting): Yeah...
MELISSA'S POV
I woke up because of the noises coming out of Loren's room. I can hear Loren and Eddie moaning loudly because my room's next to Loren's. Luckily mom's room is on the other side of the house so she can't hear it. I try to open Loren's door but it's locked so I use my spare key to open it. I walk into Loren's room and decide to listen to them so I can tease them about it later. I look at the time and see that it's almost time to go to school so I yell at them. Not too loud so mom won't hear it.
Melissa: Guys, wrap it up! It's almost time to go to school!
I wait for their reaction and it's absolutely hillarious. I never thought of Loren as the dirty type but she's a really dirty lady.
Loren (smirking): Wanna do a quick one?
Eddie (panting): Yeah...
Not lang after that I hear loud moans coming out of Loren's bathroom. I guess they started round 2. My heart almost jumped out of my chest when I saw mom coming into Loren's room. I start coughing so she won't hear the moans and I walk out of Loren's room. Lucky for us, she follows me.
Nora: Are you two almost ready?
Melissa: Yeah, I'm gonna change. Loren told me that she's almost done in the shower.
Loren walks out of her room with her robe on and with her cheeks all red. Mom probably thinks it's from the shower but I know where it's really from. I was right, Eddie really IS good.
Loren (catching her breath): Yeah, I'm almost done.
Nora (suspicious): Is everything all right? You two are acting weird.
I was about to answer but she already walks into Loren's room. Oh no, now she'll see Eddie. Loren and I walk in after her but Eddie's nowhere to be seen.
Melissa: Yup, everything's all right.
Nora: Okay, hurry up you two
She walks away and I turn around to face Loren.
Melissa (smirking): So...
Loren: Don't even start, Mel
Melissa: I won't... (smiling) We'll talk about it on our way to school.
EDDIE'S POV
I'm already at school waiting for my girl. I can see their grey opal coscada arriving and they walk up to me while laughing.
Melissa: He did?! That's so sexy!
Loren: I know right?
Eddie (wrapping his arm around her waist): Hey babe, what are you two talking about?
Loren: Just talking about that sexy boyfriend of mine.
Eddie (pecking her lips): Oh, that has to be me.
Loren (laughing): Someone's full of himself.
Eddie: I know, but that's one of the reasons you love me.
Loren: Are you coming over after school?
Eddie: Do you want me to?
Loren (sarcastic): No, I don't want you to, that's why I'm asking.
Eddie (pecking her lips): I'll be there
Loren (pulling back): Invite Ian too, Mel
Melissa (smiling): I already did and he's coming
LOREN'S POV
School's over and I'm driving Melissa and me home. Eddie and Ian are following us and we soon arrive at the Tate house. I park the car and we get out. Eddie walks over to me and wraps his arm around my waist. Ian walks to Melissa and wraps his arm around her shoulders. I suddenly feel so happy. I've got the perfect boyfriend and Melissa's happy with Ian too. But that happiness faded when I saw the person who hurted me most standing in front of the door. I guess Eddie felt me tense up because he tightens his arm and looks at me concerned. Trent walks up to us and we all stand still. There's confusion on the faces of Ian and Eddie and I can't blame them.
Trent: Hey girls
Loren and Melissa: ...
Eddie (confused): Loren, who is this?
Loren: This is Trent
Ian: Trent?
Trent: I'm their father.
Loren (snapping): No, you're not!
EDDIE'S POV
Trent: I'm their father.
Loren (snapping): No, you're not!
This is Loren's father? This is the man who broke my girl's heart? I really want to punch him in the face right now. I look at Ian and see a look on his face that's probably on mine too. I hear the sound of a car and look around. Nora arrived and she walks up to us.
Trent: If you like it our not, I'll always be your father Loren.
Melissa (snapping): Like she said, you're not our father. We despise you.
Nora: Just leave Trent, we don't want you here.
Trent: Of course you do
Nora: No, we don't want you here anymore. When we did want you here you just left us, so leave because this time we want you to leave.
Melissa walks past Trent and "accidentally" kicks him in the guts. Loren walks close to Trent, looks him in the eyes and slaps him on his cheek. She waits a few seconds and slaps him again, harder this time. I can see that she's trying hard to hold back her tears.
Loren (holding back her tears): I don't ever want to see you again.
She walks away and I follow her. I turn around one more time and see Nora yelling at Trent and slapping him too. Seeing that remembers me that I forgot something. I walk back to Trent and punch him so hard that he falls to the ground. I hear Nora gasp but when I look at her she smiles and whispers a thank you. I walk into the Tate house and walk into Loren's room. She's laying on her bed, holding her knees. I sit down and she wraps her arms around me.
Eddie: It's going to be okay, babe. I'm here for you, I'll never leave you.
Loren (pulling back): It's just that... (sobbing) I still love him.
Eddie: I know you do...
Loren: All of the good memories all still in my head but him leaving, I don't want him back in my life.
Eddie: That's okay, I totally understand. I wouldn't want him back either.
Loren: Eddie?
Eddie: Yeah?
Loren (talking very fast): Why were you taking so long outside? Not that I'm that kinda girl who wants you with her all the time. Well, I guess I kinda do want you with me all the time. But I'm not the kinda girl who wants to know where you are all the time it's just that-
Eddie (cutting her off): I was punching your dad.
Loren (smiling): You were?
Eddie (looking down): Yeah, are you mad at me? I know you still love him an-
She cutted me off by kissing me.
Loren: How did I deserve you?
Eddie (cupping her head): You deserve the best. I'm not sure if I am the best but I'm trying to be the best for you. You're amazing, you're the greatest girl I've ever seen and I'm crazy in love with you.
She pulls me into a soft kiss and I place my hands on her waist. I pull her closer and use one hand to wipe her tears away.
NORA'S POV
After Eddie punched Trent, he finally left. It really hurted to see him again because I once loved him very much. I walk into the house and check if the girls are okay. Melissa's laying on her bed talking as much as she always does and Ian's looking at her like a lovesick puppy, he's trying not to show it though. I guess seeing Trent didn't affect Melissa much. I open the door of Loren's door and see her sitting on the bed with her head in Eddie's hands.
Eddie (cupping her head): You deserve the best. I'm not sure if I am the best but I'm trying to be the best for you. Because you're amazing, you're the greatest girl I've ever seen and I'm crazy in love with you.
Loren pulls him into a soft kiss and he places her hands on her waist. I can see the tear stains on her cheeks but Eddie wipes them away. They really love each other. I can now see that Melissa was right. Loren and Eddie can't be apart from each other every night. It hurts them really bad to be apart from each other for longer than an hour.
Nora: Loren? Eddie?
Eddie (pulling back): Yeah?
Loren (blushing): What's up?
It's cute how she blushes after I saw them kissing. I was afraid of Loren changing but she'll always be my little girl and I have Eddie to thank for it.
Nora: I still have to talk to Max but you guys can spend the night together again. I know now how much you guys hurt when you're apart.
Loren (hugging her): Thanks mom!
Nora: Just no funny buisness, okay?
Loren (blushing): I can't promise you but I'll try.
Ian: I never thought of you as the dirty girl Loren Tate.
Loren (blushing): Oh gosh, you all heard me saying that.
Eddie walks up to us and wraps his arms around Loren's stomach. He kisses her cheek and after that he starts placing little kisses on her neck. Loren's blush is still there but she now starts smiling.
Eddie: Don't be ashamed, babe. They've all had thought thinks like that. (smirking) Right Nora?
Nora (ashamed): Okay, I think I'm gonna go now
Melissa (laughing): That's right mom, walk away!
EDDIE'S POV
I walk backwards and sit down on Loren's bed with Loren between my legs. Ian takes a seat in one of the chairs in Loren's room and Melissa sits down on his lap.
Eddie (teasing): So, how about you two. Did you already get any Ian?
Ian: Well...eh...no
Loren: And why's that, Mel?
Melissa: It just didn't happen, okay? You shouldn't force those things.
Loren (dirty): Oh but Eddie and I aren't forcing anything. Right babe?
Eddie (kissing her neck): Nope, Loren tastes delicious by the way.
Loren (giggling): You're such a perv
Melissa: Yeah but Eddie flew you to Italy, Lo. It's very easy to have sex on a vacation like that.
Loren (shocked): We didn't have sex. We made loooove.
Melissa: Yeah, yeah
Eddie: Wanna play truth or dare?
Melissa (cheery): Yes! I can't believe that I'm about to play truth or dare with EDDIE DURAN. When I first moved here I was determined to marry you and now you're dating my sister and you seem like a really normal guy.
Loren: A really sweet and sexy guy.
Ian: Let's just stop talking about Eddie and start playing the game, please.
Melissa (teasing): Are you jealous?
Ian: Please?!
Eddie: All right, all right. Melissa, truth or dare?
Melissa: Because it's the first round, truth
Eddie: Are you a virgin?
Melissa: No, I'm not
Eddie (shocked): Really? But you said you and Ian didn't do it yet.
Melissa: That's right. My first time was very stupid, I was drunk.
Ian: Does Nora know about it?
Melissa: Yes but I promised I wouldn't be so stupid ever again.
Ian: Do you know this guy?
Melissa: No, I don't remember a thing. Ian, truth or dare
Ian: Truth
Melissa: Did you ever have sex before?
Eddie (teasing): We all know that one.
Ian: Yes, I did but I never loved any of those girls.
LOREN'S POV
I can see by the look on Melissa's face that she's wondering if Ian loves her. I know he does and she loves him too.
Ian: Loren, truth or dare?
Loren: Dare
Ian: Really?
Loren: Yes
Ian: Make out with Eddie for a minute
Loren (shocked): But you guys are totally watching
Ian: You have to do it.
Eddie (smirking): Thanks mate
I turn around and start kissing Eddie. He pushes his tongue into my mounth and he moves his hand to my breast. He starts squeezing it and I totally forget that Melissa and Ian are in the room. I start moaning and move my hand underneath his shirt. I start stroking his chest and his shirt crawls up a little bit so his abs are visible.
Melissa: Ooh, me likey
I ignore her and Eddie's still squeezing my breasts. We're both moaning and I can feel his boner.
Ian: Okay guys, time's up.
Eddie (groaning): Why didn't you make it longer
Ian: Because that would have been a lot less fun.
I get off Eddie's lap and sit down between his legs again. I guess Melissa saw the tighter part in Eddie's pants because she starts laughing.
Melissa (laughing): Oh Lo, you totally turned him on!
Ian (smiling): Loren, you really are a dirty girl.
Eddie (groaning): It's not funny
Loren: My turn! Ian, truth or dare
Ian: Dare
Loren: Ask my mom if she wants to help you with a boy problem.
Ian (suspicious): What kind of problem?
Loren: Tell her you can't get a boner so easily anymore.
Ian (begging): No, please Loren. I beg you, that's too emberassing.
Loren (teasing): What were those wise words again? Oh, I know, "you have to do it"
Ian walks out of the room and when he comes back his face is so red as a tomato.
Eddie: What did she say?
Ian (shaking his head): Don't even ask man, don't even ask.
Melissa: It's your turn, Ian
Ian: I just need a short moment to progress the emberassement I just had.
Melissa: Don't be a baby, play!
Ian (sarcastic): Because you asked so nicely, love. Eddie, truth or dare.
Eddie: Truth
Ian: How many times did you and Loren have sex?
Eddie: Ehm... Loren?
Loren: I don't know, it's a little too much to count.
Melissa (shocked): But you guys have only been together for less than a week.
Eddie: What can I say...I'm just too good.
We played the game a little longer and we had much fun. Ian's staying over tonight too, he's sleeping in Melissa's bed. Eddie and I are laying in bed and Eddie's strong muscular arms are around my waist. My minder wanders to Trent, why does he show up after all these years? He broke my heart but Eddie's picking up the pieces. I love him more than anything in the world.
Eddie (kissing her head): What are you thinking about?
Loren: About Trent...and you.
Eddie: What about me?
Loren: Just thinking about how much I love you.
Eddie: I love you too, babe
Loren: Eddie, if you ever leave me I think I'm gonna die.
Eddie: Don't worry about that okay? I'll never leave you.
LOREN'S POV
Eddie and I woke up and did our morning routine, including the long shower. We went to school and he brought me home. He wanted to stay but we both have a lot of homework so I'm gonna go to him tonight. I walk trough the door and find a note from Melissa laying on the kitchen table.
I'm at Ian's place and mom's still not home. I know what you're thinking right now. You're thinking that I have a lot of homework. Do you want to know what I think? I think that I don't care about homework. Bye, luv you xxx Melissa
After reading the note I turn around and my heart almost beats out of my chest.
Loren (angry): What are you doing here?
Person (coming closer): I'm going to give you wat you deserve.
Loren: You're drunk, go away
He walks closer to me and raises his hand. He smashes it across my face and I fall to the ground.
Loren: Leave me alone!
He kicks me into the gut and I almost can't breath anymore. Before I could catch my breath he kicked me again in the same spot.
Person: You're a little bitch and you deserve all of this.
He kicks me again but this time higher on my ribcage. His breath smells like alcohol and it makes me sick. It makes it even harder to breath.
Person: You won't tell anyone about this or I'll go after the people you love. I'll kill them, do you understand me?
I wanted to say something back but I can't get enough air to speak. He smashes his hand to my face again, making me scream out in pain.
Person: Do you understand me?
Loren (barely breathing): I-I-I u-unders-stand, I-I-I w-won't tell a-anybody...
So, who was beating Loren up? Let me know if you guys want to know the rest.