Konnichi wa! Hello! So I just re read the last chapter and I realised how bad it is! I hate it! And it annoys me as what I've got planned for this story is really good, but it seems I can't do it So I have decided to redeem myself and give it another shot. Okay… Deep breath in, and write.
Fresh Start, Fresh Blood
Chapter 2: Confused Emotions in the Red Sea
As they walked through the corridors Maria replayed the last event over and over in her mind. She had never been as close to Zero as she was with the others. But today they had had a connection, like they finally understood each other. When she had seen him so vulnerable and sorrowful on the cold bathroom floor she had felt a sudden urge to protect him, look after him even. His problems were her problems and his tears would be her tears. There was also something else that she felt, stronger than friendship, something she had never felt before. Could it be? No it was not possible. She shook her head. Zero was annoying, grumpy and a kill joy. Why would she even suggest that? He was a brother not a… No she would not say it. But if it wasn't that then what could it be? When they had held onto each other, all the troubles she had experienced vanished and she knew he felt the same way. It was as if they had found someone to hold onto in the darkness, someone they could trust, someone who knew how they felt. Someone to care for.
They came to a stop outside one of the many doors that lined the walkway. Yuki knocked at the door. The door swung open before Yuki had finished knocking, she almost fell in.
"Opps. Mind your step Yuki!" Giggled an exited girl with mad, frizzy blonde hair chopped to the chin and loud blue eyes that glistened mischievously in the setting sun. the girl turned to Maria and stuck out her hand.
"Hi! Nice to meet you! Im Flossy Caption," Maria took her hand which Flossy began to shake violently.
"Umm. Nice to meet you too, Im Maria Sakura." She said, nervously.
"And im…!"
"Ah!" Something jumped onto her back.
"Chihiro. Hello!" Said the girl, jumping off Maria's back to display herself to her. Maria could see what Yuki had meant when she said Chihiro was the only one who was shorter than her, Chihiro was tiny with a bob of straight brown hair that was parted in the middle and dark green eyes.
"Hi." Replied Maria. She was beginning to like these girls, they seemed like her in a way, and she knew once her nervous streak was gone she would fit in just fine. Yuki turned to her.
"Will you be OK? Or shall I stay for a bit?" She asked.
"She'll be fine Yuki. Run along now." Chihiro sang, who had already linked arms with Maria as if they were best friends. Chihiro kept on lifting her feet of the ground, so Maria had to support her body weight, which made a very funny image of Maria suddenly being pulled to the ground as if by gravity. Which Maria would soon find to be a regular occurrence.
"Well bye then." Said Yuki.
"Bye." Chorused the girls.
After Yuki had left, Maria got down to un packing her stuff. Flossy told were everything was kept and then left her to get on with it. She took out her most important stuff first, there was her teddy which she had had since she was born, her retro Nintendo 3DS, an antique that would now fetch millions, her sketch book, which held her most treasured work ,and a photo of her family's last Christmas together. She thought back to that day, the last time they were truly happy. The next day her father had disappeared, no one asked questions, everyone got on with their lives, it was as if he had been erased from history. When she cried for him, or asked where he was, she was ignored, and as her mother grew more, and more mad, Maria realised how much she needed him. How much they all needed him. Maria started to whimper.
"Hey, kid! Hey, Maria!" Flossy called.
"Maria?" Flossy cocked her head to one side in concern. Chihiro whacked her on the head with a note pad she had been writing in.
"Flossy, don't be so insensitive! Look, its Maria's first day she's bound to be experiencing home sickness." Maria turned to them, rubbing her eyes on her sleeve.
"No it's not that, it's just…"
"What?" Asked Flossy.
"Flossy you're doing it again!" Screamed Chihiro whacking Flossy again. Flossy must have been used to it as she didn't seem to care much about the treatment she getting from her roommate.
"Look." Said Chihiro.
"Whatever's bothering you we can fix it! We are the masters of comedy. You could help us with are next masterpiece. Tell her Flossy!"
"Well we are creating a story, it's about, wait for it, wait for it, the murder of BOB THE BUILDER!" Maria laughed.
"Ha! That sounds hilarious! Who kills him?" Maria asked, already forgetting her last thoughts.
"POSTMAN PAT!" Squealed Chihiro.
"And POLICEMAN PLOD has to solve the mystery!" Contained Flossy.
"This is gonna be awesome guys! So basically you're turning loveable cbeebies characters into blood thirsty creatures?" The girls nodded.
"I LOVE IT. So here's what you gotta do…" Maria and the girls got to work on their creation.
Before going to bed Maria decided to read. The book she was reading was Twilight, it was the oddest thing. She had read a few vampire romances, but not like this, maybe this was the book she had been waiting for. Twilight was an old classic, it apparently started this whole revolution of vampire stories, after its release it created this huge explosion of vampire novels, which was good as it gave Maria plenty to read. The thing was that at the end of the twenty first century there was a giant global warming issue so most films, computers, electricity had been destroyed and along with it books became destroyed and so there wasn't many copies being made. Maria was lucky to find it in a car boot sale one day. As Maria read she started to become fascinated by all the new ideas she had never considered. She read until she fell asleep.
Maria gazed up into the darkness .Nothing but black. She opened and closed her eyes several times trying to make sense of her surroundings. On the fifth or sixth time she saw four pairs of blurry dots. She rubbed her eyes and when she looked closer she was shocked to realise that they weren't dots at all, but eyes, glowing, red, beacons in the darkness. One pair of eyes was far away another even further, and the last two were hovering over her head. Their eyes full of curiosity.
"Ahh!" She screamed.
"Shhh little one." Coaxed the voice that came from the eyes on the right. It was a woman's voice. Something slithered along here hair.
"Ah!"
The fear of the unknown. Maria had never been scared of the dark. Her mother said she was special because of it. Maria was a goth at heart and she liked the dark, she also found it very hard to sleep if there was the tiniest bit of light in the room. But tonight she felt herself panicking. The slither must have been the woman, not a snake she told herself. But she could not stop the fear that was growing inside of her. There could be anything in this strange place, anything, she needed to keep calm, keep calm.
"Shhh." Whispered the voice. The creature stroked her. It made her skin crawl.
"What a fine specimen." Cold hands grabbed hold of her head, forcing her chin upward, the grasp was so strong ,she thought if she tried to resist her head would rip off. The creature directed her head to the second pair of eyes, the eyes looked away from her like it was embarrassed, or disagreed with what the woman was saying. It was hard to tell when you couldn't see its features.
"Come now." Chuckled the voice.
"You want me to have the first taste? Ha, you spoil me too much."
Taste?
Suddenly the eyes from above her disappeared and then reappeared at what Maria could only guess as her feet. Stone hands grabbed hold of her right foot and something wet and rough licked against it. Maria squealed and pulled away, bumping into the body that belonged to the sad eyes, only to dislocate her knee, she drew in a sharp breath and cried out a very weak
"Help!"
"Hold onto her." Ordered the woman. The sad crimson eyes went up and down as if nodding and two strong arms came down onto her chest, keeping her stuck to the spot. She was sure that if she moved, those arms would crack open her ribcage.
"Don't worry." Whispered the woman. She could feel her hot breath on her toes. She raised the limp leg to her lips
"This won't hurt a bit." Suddenly a huge flood of pain rushed up her body. It felt like a hundred knifes had torn into her skin and gouged out her insides.
"Aaarrrrggghhh!" She gave out an ear piercing scream, which seemed to never end, just pain, the ripping of bones and endless pain.
"Release her!" Commanded the creature. Her eyes disappeared from view as she made her way back to the servant.
"I'll leave you to enjoy the rest." The second pair of eyes followed after the other as she retreated into the vail of black.
Nothing had happened in a while and Maria decided to look around her, thinking that maybe her eyes would adjust and she'd be able to make sense of this strange world. She tried to get up, but some sort of weight pushed her back down. She slowly lifted her head off the ground (?) she had stopped feeling her legs and was worried that that creature had destroyed or even eaten them. She gasped. She was lucky to not see the mangled horror of her body, but instead she saw something just as disturbing. A sea of unnatural, florescent red blood streamed down her legs and gathered below her. Was red the only colour that existed here?
"Beautiful, isn't it." Said the second pair of eyes. The voice was gruff, but gentle, she recognised it. As the man stared down at the crimson liquid his eyes turned hungry and flared even brighter, something else began to glow. A crest. She knew that tattoo anywhere.
"Z-Zero?" She whispered. Maria reached for him. In an instant he swiped her hand and lay it to his cheek, he closed his eyes and breathed her in.
"Oh Maria you clever girl." Suddenly Zero's image was revealed. His skin was as white as snow, red stained his pure crisp shirt, his eyes burning like flames, he was wearing a demented smile like one those creepy grinning puppets that hang in your grandparents house. She turned her head to see if any of the others images had been revealed. But no. They still looked on like a lion at his pray. She looked back at Zero, his expression was the scariest thing she had ever laid eyes on, but for some strange reason, she could not look away, she was in a trance, the beast that sat before her was her master, she was his now, there was no going back, she could try to run, but she would just get caught in her strings. Zero rolled up her sleeve, giving her a wicked lovely smile that made her want to melt. Somewhere in the back of her mind she knew she should try to escape, run, a voice was screaming at her to wake up, surely with her knowledge she should know what was coming, but no, she was heading for death. Like a rabbit to the head lights. All she could do was stare.
Zero rolled down the sleeve of Maria's night gown , he caressed her arm with his lips, his eyes never leaving hers. Sending ripples of pleasure and fear through her entire body.
"Arrrrgh" the pain came back, this time more painful than the last. Spasms of delight followed by pinching of a thousand jaws, then the horror of knives gauging out her insides and finally, the wicked teasing of numbness before starting all over again. She could feel her blood swimming up her veins, flowing into Zero's lips. The trance he had had her in vanished and Maria's mind for a second cleared.
"Wha…?" She looked on in fear at the fangs that sank into her arteries. The glowing of the crimson liquid ran down her slender frame, outlining it in the darkness. Zero didn't seem to be paying any attention to her. He was in heaven, he revealed in pleasure.
After what had seemed like for ever Zero throw her to the ground, like a stubborn child after finding that he did not get the latest Ben Ten game but a plush toy instead. His eyes ran over her, like he was searching for a reaction. She was too weak to respond. He leaned over her. She could feel his hot breath on her cheeks.
"This is what I am, Maria. This is what you are." He said in a husky voice. The blood on his lips splatted onto her face. She winced.
"Im not like that and neither are you!" She barked. She believed in Zero. She knew this thing that was in front of her was not who it was made out to me. Inside was the real Zero, the kind, loving person he really was, and she was determined to bring that out of him.
"Yes, you're not the most obviously kind person in the world but…" Zero chuckled darkly.
"Heh, heh, heh, I am far from kind, but you my dear are the cruellest." Maria narrowed her eyes in confusion. What was he talking about?
"What?" Zero's eyes widened, her grabbed her hand played with her fingers. Maria could not escape his iron grip, she was trapped, there was no were to run.
"You just couldn't leave me alone could you?" he moaned, his grip tightening.
"Owch! Zero your hurting! What are you talking about?"
"Don't act innocent!" He shouted, he bit into her fingers.
"Arrgh! Zero stop it! I seriously have no idea what you're talking about!" Zero ignored her.
"You kept pestering me, ever since you got to the academy, you wouldn't get out of my face! You haunted me, night and day till I-I, just, just... But you just didn't learn. The things you've done, the people you've hurt!" He looked close to tears, he let go of her.
"So- so me and – and… we had to teach you a lesson. Do you realise now? How it feels to be loved and then thrown away and stamped on like last year's piece of trash?" Zero wiped his eyes with his blood stained shirt.
"Zero, I still have no idea what you're saying, where am I, why am I her. What happened to me?
"You never listen!" Zero had stopped his tears and was now cackling wildly.
"This is your lair! You LIVE here! HA, HA! You want to know what happened to you HUH? Do ya? Then take a look." Zero pointed to a mirror that had suddenly been made visible. She stumbled over it. For the first time, noticing the ground below. It was slippery and bumpy, like the rocks at the seaside. To stop herself from falling she held onto something stringy and slick that felt like seaweed. She climbed over to the mirror. As she reached it, her image became clear, her hair was as black as night, her pyjamas were red, as she looked closer she found it was not dye, it was blood. Her eyes were as red as Zero's and fangs protruded from her stunning white teeth.
"Oh, my, god." She whispered. Zero giggled as he looked at her stunned expression. He creped over to her tucked her lose hair behind her ears and whispered to her.
"Look at all that blood…" Zero cackled louder, his pupils grew smaller, his eyes grew bigger, his mouth widened, showing hundreds of sharp teeth, he continued to laugh, he fell to the ground.
Suddenly her surroundings lit up. She wasn't standing on rocks, oh no they were bodies, thousands of bloody bodies. She knew every single one of them and she remembered killing them all. She screamed, cried for help. She turned to the thing she had been holding on to all this time and gasped to find that it was not seaweed, but hair, long thick hair,. She backed away, only to trip over fall into a black hole, created by the dead. Thousands of dead faces stared at her, in a flash their eyes snapped open and they chanted.
"Wake up, wake up, wake up" Above her she could still here Zero giggling away. She screamed, and screamed, begging for them to stop, and suddenly, everything went black.
X-X-X
"Wake up Maria! Maria! Wake up! For the love of God please wake up!" Shouted Flossy.
"What's wrong with her?" Moaned Chihiro, who was rubbing her eyes and yawning from lack of sleep. Flossy ignored her.
"Maria, WAKE UP!" Flossy grabbed her pillow from her bed and throw it at Maria.
"Owch! What was that for?" Maria cried.
"What was that FOR?" Exclaimed Flossy.
"What was that for? That was for waking up the entire dorm, with your screaming!" Shouted Flossy.
"I was screaming?" murmured a very blurry eyed Maria.
"Yes! Luckily for you missy, we are at the end of the corridor, far anyway from anyone else, so as no one has come knocking yet, it's safe to say no one heard you."
Or they just couldn't be bothered to get out of bed. She thought. Maria, had been screaming for hours, first it was just little moans, then it grew louder and louder till at about 7 o'clock she broke into full on screaming, it was now half seven, Flossy had been trying to wake her up for nearly an hour. She was surprised Chihiro had only just woken up.
"What were you dreaming of?" Said Chihiro, who was leaning on Flossy like she was a teddy bear. Flossy tried to get her off, but no, Chihiro was stuck to her like sticky tape, and even if she did get her off, she would jest hit her with something. Maria sat up, she didn't look well, her skin was icy pale and she had dark rings around her eyes, she looked like a ghost. Maria rubbed her head.
"Urm, you know what, I can't remember." She shrugged her shoulders and slipped out of bed, throwing on her dressing gown and flicking out her trapped hair.
"You don't remember? A dream which made you scream in your sleep." Flossy followed Maria into the bathroom, while she brushed her teeth. Maria spat the tooth paste out.
"Yes." She stated.
"bu…"
"Leave her Flossy." Said Chihiro, stirring her friend back into the bedroom. Once they we're out of Maria's sight, Flossy grabbed Chihiro by the shoulders and whispered.
"Chihiro, im sorry, I know I shouldn't push her but come on, shouldn't we be worrying about her? I know you were asleep most of the time. But you've got to believe me. She was screaming for like half an hour."
"You've just got to keep calm, she seems fine."
"Keep calm? Keep calm?"
"Yes." She groaned.
"Look Floss, this will probably be a onetime thing, okay? For gods sakes the girl doesn't even remember what it was she was scared of. It can't be that bad, can it?" Flossy took a deep breath, and sighed.
"I suppose your right."
"Yes I am. Now come on, im hungry."
X-X-X
Zero sat in his room, he had been woken up by screaming, his room was attached to the girls dorm building, so he would sometimes her them chatting away. They weren't really noisy so he didn't care much. Annoyingly for him though, he and Yuki both had keys to the door outside his, that led to the other dorms, so Yuki could barge into his room whenever she wanted, had she forgotten that he chose this room because he wanted to be alone. Maria would probably have said something like "It's his emo hole Yuki, and you don't want to disturb an emo." Maria. Before he had gone to bed he had thought a lot about what had happened that night. He still didn't quite get it. In the end he had dismissed the idea that she actually cared for him. She had never paid any attention to him before so why now? Then he had come to the sickening conclusion, it wasn't because of what he was like inside, it was how he looked. He was a vampire now, and she must have been attracted to him for his predator looks and smell. It disgusted him to the very core.
The screaming had worried him for a second, but then he remembered who was in the dorm next door. Flossy and Chihiro. They were always doing something crazy. One time he heard Flossy scream. "It's alive!" According to Yuki they had gone out to see Frankenstein and when they got back they tried to make their own creation. Zero really didn't want to see that. Another time he heard Chihiro say "Come on Mr Hamster, swim!" Apparently, the whole of the day class girls had squashed into their bathroom to watch there hamster swim 20 laps across the bath! Apparently it worked! They were in the Guinness book of world records! They had been training it for weeks.
So anyway Zero had decided not to worry, till he herd Flossy say "Maria!" Zero had jolted from the bed. Maria? What happened? Zero changed into his uniform, it was a Sunday but oh well, he was on the disciplinary committee so he had an excuse. He sprinted down to their door and was about to barge in when he heard whispering.
"I still wonder what was wrong with her." Flossy's voice.
"Oh Floss, get over it okay." Chihiro was in her angry mode. Which would make anyone who was not used to her, laugh their head off. Chihiro was so tiny and innocent looking it would always surprise you when she would groan or swear. There was a classic thing she did to people (well only people who knew her, otherwise they could get offended) she put the most repulsed face imaginable on and walk up to them and say "You disgust me" or "How could you" it was very funny. Unfortunately for Zero, she would always choose the wrong time to do it to him. And it would always get him down.
Zero knocked at the door.
"Who is it?" Chihiro snapped in her granny voice.
"It's Zero."
"ZERO!" Flossy's voice. Had she already forgotten he was next door?
"You're not allowed in the girls dorm!" She tutted.
"Look, I heard screaming and I was worried."
"That was ages ago." Stated Chihiro.
"Look, can't I just come in." He said, gently.
The door creaked open. Finally. Chihiro pocked her nose out and said.
"No." She slammed the door.
Zero sighed.
"Please."
There was some mumbling behind the door. The finally, it opened.
"Why didn't you say so before? I love a man with good manners!" Said Chihiro in her creaky granny voice. Zero just shook his head.
"Where's Maria?"
"I'll go see if she's ready." Said Flossy. She trotted over to the bathroom.
"Maria." Whilst Flossy was talking to Maria, it seemed Zero had to make conversation.
"Umm. So, Chihiro… Ummm… What are you looking at?" Chihiro was looking above his head. He sweeped round to see if there was something behind him, but there wasn't. He turned back to find Chihiro shaking her head as if coming out of deep thought. She looked at him.
"Oh, sorry, there was a racoon on your head." She said, in utter seriousness. It would have made him laugh, but he didn't feel sociable, instead he gave her a stern look.
"Riiiiighht…"
"Ugh. Zero no one's gonna like you if you act so damn serious all the time." Chihiro's words echoed round his head. Someone had said that once before to him. Yes, it was her.
They had all gone on holiday to England. Everyone came, Maria's family, even Kaname Kuran who, was of course was there for Yuki. They had gone to England because it was the only place where the weather would change; it was forecast to be wet. So Kaname and Zero would not have to worry about the sun too much. Unfortunately, the weather had had a dramatic change, and they experienced a heat wave.
They were in Devon, sitting on a very overcrowded beach. "Bigbury on Sea". Both sides of the beach were surrounded by sea and on the right was an island with a pub and an art deco hotel, above it was a very steep cliff leading to some ruins. Zero had not been paying attention to what they were, he didn't care. The heat was horrendous. The sun usually didn't bother him much, but it was so hot, it hurt. The beach was a sun trap. And with all the people, Zero was starting to get really uncomfortable. Zero wanted to go to Bantham beach. The quieter beach next door. It had some shade and was quite idyllic. But no, the girls wanted to go here as it was a big tourist attraction. They were going stay here till the tide came in and then go on the "Sea Tractor" that would take them up to the pub for dinner. As Zero's opinion didn't matter, he was now stuck there. In the middle of thousands of people. And having to watch Kaname be fawned over by mums. Yes you heard correctly, mums. Kaname was only 14 so he still wasn't older enough to have girls squeal at him. So instead, older woman would go up to Kaien and so what a cute boy his son he was. After the tenth time, Maria's dad Raiden pretended he couldn't speak English and eventually woman stopped coming.
Zero was now sat in the tent watching in disgust as Yuki, Maria and Kaname messed around in the sand. They were making a fort, to protect them when the tide comes rolling in. They made a kind of sandcastle thing in the middle, with deep canals for the water to channel through. The adults kept telling him that he should join in but no. There was no way he would socialise Kuran. Nothing in the world would ever make him do that.
It was lunch when Zero heard the adult's talking about the happy group.
"Oh aren't Yuki and Maria just to peas in a pod." Said Maria's bubbly mother. She was a colourful woman with curly brown hair with red and purple high lights. She was an actress who starred in many gothic and horror films.
All the parents turned to the kids. They were frolicking about in the sea now. Maria seemed it have dived in. Her cloths were completely soaked and she flapping her hands about, eyes squashed closed, she seemed to be in pain for the sting of the sea water. Yuki was joking about saying she would help her but the water was too cold and she didn't want to get wet. Then suddenly Kaname tipped toed behind Yuki, wrapped in his arms around, lifted her up, Yuki squealed.
"No, please, Kaname, don't throw me in, don't throw me in, don't throw me- Arr!" Kaname tossed Yuki into the icy waters with a devilish grin on his face, he waded over to Maria and they hi fived each over, Yuki surfaced, with a red face and seaweed stuck in her brown locks.
"Oh look what we have found Kaname! A mermaid!" Yuki scowled at them.
"I could have seriously injured myself, you know." They just laughed.
"Kaname, I think this mermaid is dangerous! Run away!" Yuki started chasing after them, using seaweed as a weapon.
The parents laughed at them.
"Oh aren't they cute." Continued Maria's mum.
"You'd think Kaname was their big brother, wouldn't you? He's just so sweet to them!" Zero spat out his sandwich in disgust.
"He's not family!" Zero jumped from his tent.
"Im gonna get an ice cream." The headmaster got up from the sand.
"But you haven't finished your lunch!"
"I don't want it. It's full of sand!" Zero stormed off.
X-X-X
Zero had ended up having a walk around the coast for a bit. He had to clear his head. He hated how everyone fell in love with Kaname when he knew that eventually he would betray them. He also hated how Yuki loved him; she worshipped the ground Kaname stood on. Whenever he came round, Yuki would stay up late so she could see him. It was disgusting.
By the time Zero had got back to the beach the tide was coming in and the trio were inside their fort. They were yelling and teasing each other, Maria's mother was right they did look like one big happy family. Maria tripped over the moat they had made and did a face plant right below were Zero was standing. She looked up at him and then gave him the awkward turtle and pushed herself up. Her clothes were still wet from earlier so all the sand stuck to her, she didn't bother to wipe it off, instead she wiped her sandy hands on his shirt.
"Now you look like you've been to the beach!" She said. Zero just stared at her.
"Come on Zero, I gave you those cloths to make you look cute." Yesterday the girls had gone shopping and came back with some distressed pastel cut offs and a pastel pink, yellow and blue stripy polo shirt for him. He had to admit it did look good on him. But it really wasn't him.
"But it doesn't work if you don't even try to look happy!" She pouted.
"Maria!" Yuki called.
"Coming! Zero, why don't you join in, it will be fun!" Maria begged.
"No, it's not my thing." Maria crossed her arms and walked back to the others.
"Ugh. Zero no one's gonna like you if you act so damn serious all the time!" She yelled.
X-X-X
"Zero? Hello?" Zero came back to reality with Maria clicking her fingers at him.
"When I click my fingers you will awaken, 3,2"
"Cut it out!" Snapped Zero.
"All right, alright, keep your hair on, sigh, why are you here?" Zero went blank. He had totally forgotten what it was he was here for.
"Umm… Nothing… Bye." Zero turned and left.
"Well that was weird." She said.
Yay the return of Flossy and Chihiro! They are based on my friends, they've been in another of my fanfictions and have returned in this one! Seriously everything I say about them is true (except their experiments) you will never meet anyone like them, and some of the randomest stuff they say is true. Like the thing about the racoon. She actually said that to me once and the story their making. That's actually something me and Flossy are making, we might even publish it. Oh and another thing. I discovered Hetalia this holiday, and well Flossy's half German, and she is nothing like him which is funny as she is the classic blue eyed blond haired, master race thing. But she's got a big imagination so England fits her perfectly.
Anyway enough about that! You wouldn't believe how hard it has been to write this. I don't know why I feel so negative about this but I am. I was so scared I wouldn't re read it till the end. I kept on saying that a couple of people had favourited it so it must be good, but it wasn't till I got a review (thanks Kaname 3) that I got a kick up the backside and was just like "Roxie just finish it already" So phew! I am now out of my depressed state and have got a big weight off my shoulders. Okay so what did you think? Was it as good as the last one, is Maria a good character? What did you think of the holiday? Do you make forts? I remember when I first went to that beach no one made them and each year more and more people started doing it. Did we start a trend? I doubt it. Thanks to everyone who has favourited, alerted or reviewed this story. I've now forgotten what else I was going to say so
BYE-NEE!
P.S please R&R my new fanfic 20 reasons why vampire knight is better than twilight
P.P.S just remembered what I was gonna say!LOL! Um, well i've decided if this story gets more reviews than my haruhi/vk crosover then i will priorites this one and make sure to get a chapter out per week. Its very easy to do, i've had 6 reviews but they were only by 2 people so really I only need to more, so if you like this then even more reason to review! Sorry if im being a nag. God this is a long author notes.
Okay see ya!
Thankyou!
