Chapter 4 – Negotiation
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Peter
I put on my coat, I bye to my brothers and I went straight to the bank. I was enjoying the cool fall wind on my face there. I went up to the floor of the administration.
"I came to see Mr. Wonder wood" said the receptionist.
"Must have an appointment" which makes the phrase more annoying is the superficial tone they use.
"Say you come representing the Pevensie family"
"Just a moment" He applied, got up and walked into the room. Two minutes later she appeared at the door. "Come." gave me passing through unauthorized. I went. The young man, with brown hair and blue eyes stood up and we shook hands.
"It's a pleasure to meet Edmund Pevensie." he said. "Sit."
"To tell the truth ..." I tried to fix.
"I thought Miss Susan would personally be the oldest instead of having a boy ..."
As if he was older than me. I gave a fake laugh.
"I'm Peter Pevensie, Susan's older brother."
"Oh, Peter! Which was traveling? It's a pleasure nonetheless."
How did he know that?
"Well, what brings me here is the letter you gave my sister a few days ago" I put the paper on the table.
"As you know, I just did my job"
"I came here to negotiate," went straight to the point.
"Well," he leaned back in his chair colossal. "And what is your proposal?"
"I ask for more time to the point ..." interrupted me, shaking his head.
"That is impossible. The bank does not provide more time."
"It's in our interest to pay off the debt, but we have no conditions on such short notice" I insisted.
He paused thoughtfully.
"I know of your interest, but not make available for a longer period, however, have a proposal to make."
"I'm open to suggestions." I sat back in his chair where he was.
I hope you enjoyed. I wanted to thank you for all the reviews; they left me very happy, very much. Love you all! Thank you my beautiful readers, without you I am nothing. Well, some of the reviews that I received said that there are some errors in English. If not asking too much, you might point out these errors to me? Because I revised the text nothing really caught my attention. Yes, I agree, need to improve my English, D.
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