I got a review saying that using the apostrophes made the speeches sound like thoughts, sorry if it did. I will use quotation marks for the speeches now and for the thoughts I will use apostrophes and italics. Hope you enjoy this chapter! Naruto and Naruto Shippūden are owned by Shonen Jump, I am not affiliated with Naruto, Naruto Shippūden or Shonen Jump, I am just a big fan.
Then the two boys returned to find something unexpected. A volleyball net strung up on the court.
"Sasuke, Naruto, you're late! We are about to start the volleyball match with Sunagakure High School!" Guy yelled to the boys.
"Oh crap, I forgot!" The boys said in unison.
"Naruto could you please fill Hinata in about all of this?" Guy asked Naruto.
"Sure!" Naruto replied as he walked over to Hinata.
"W-What's going on?" Hinata asked timidly.
"Well, on the first day of every term, we fight an opposing school in an elimination volleyball game (as the name suggests, the closest person/last person to hit the ball when it hits the ground is out and to win, all players on the opposing team must be out.), and Sunagakure High School is the first one every year. It then goes Kirigakure, Iwagakure and then Kumogakure."
"C-Could I go next to you for this?" Hinata asked Naruto.
"Of course you can!" Naruto replied with a huge grin.
"Konoha High! Are you ready?" The announcer asked.
"YEAH!" The school replied.
"Suna High! Are you ready?" The announcer asked.
"YEAH!" The opposing school replied.
"Come on Hinata, let's smash these guys!" Naruto said to Hinata.
"Y-Yeah!"
"5"
"4"
"3"
"2"
"1"
"START!"
The volleyball was thrown high in the air before being served hard by Suna High, the pelted back as hard as it was served, a Suna student hit it but not far enough, as it hit the net and fell to the ground.
"Suna High, one of your students has been eliminated, please send them off the court." The announcer told the opposing school.
All that could be heard were squeaking shoes on the wooden floor and the announcer announcing the elimination of players in each team. Eventually there were only three people on each side, Sasuke, Naruto and Hinata on Konoha High's side and on Suna's side there was a boy with hair that was dark red, with bags under his eyes and had the stance and face of a leader, a brown haired boy with purple paint leading from his bottom lip to his chin, which connects to the paint going across his face horizontally covering his lips, and there is another streak going horizontally covering his eyes and a blonde haired girl with here hair tied back in four identical spiky pigtails on the back of her hair. Naruto and the boy with red hair looked at each other like they were best friends that were determined to beat each other but would still be best friends no matter who won. Then the ball was served. Sasuke hit the ball back over and then the ball was spiked by the boy with brown hair right next to Sasuke.
"Konoha High, one of your students has been eliminated, please send them off the court." The announcer told Konoha High.
As Sasuke walked past Naruto he said,
"You better win idiot."
"Alright Hinata, it's just you and me. Let's go!" Naruto yelled. "Here we come Gaara!"
The red haired boy then spoke'
"Bring it."
Naruto then served the ball near the brown haired boy who then promptly hit it back to Hinata who then hit it right in the corner of the opposing square, the closest was the brown haired boy who then yelled,
"Gaara, Temari! You better smash them!"
"Yeah, don't worry Kankuro." The blonde girl told him.
"Suna High, one of your students has been eliminated, please send them off the court."
Then Temari served the ball but just before it went over the net, Hinata had already got there and spiked the ball back at her and then eliminated Temari.
"Suna High, one of you-"
"Yeah we know!" Temari yelled at the announcer, cutting him off. She then stomped off the court. Gaara then served the ball hard and fast, acing Hinata out.
"W-What happened?" Hinata asked Naruto, as she was still confused about what happened.
"Oh, that happens when it's a 2v1 with Gaara against me and someone else, he always tries for a 1v1, I have to admit I do it too."
"Konoha High, one of your students has been eliminated, please send them off the court." The announcer said, for the final time.
"Alright, now the real fun begins, Naruto."
"Yeah, let's get started."
Hey guys, like I said I had a review that asked me to change to quotation marks and I would like to point out that this is the type of review that is needed if any mistake is found within my work. This is because I like to bring you guys the best content I have and I need this constructive criticism to give out better content for you guys. So see you guys later!
