100 Smashin' Ways
by AAR
Wrong
Not in accordance with what is morally right and good
Little Mac punched his fist in the air, and Frank and Lyn's child mimicked the boxer with a large grin. His twin sister looked blankly on. Three years had passed since Lyn's pregnancy, and Little Mac had dropped in to see his new 'nephew and niece'. The boy had inherited the mother's hair and Frank's eyes while the girl was his opposite. Mac had taken to the hyperactive boy with great enthusiasm.
Frank looked at Stafy and Saki accusingly and said, "And you guys said that one of my kids wouldn't be hyper…You liars."
Stafy and Saki grinned a little.
To Lays: I really appreciate the review, thanks. Now onto another matter...*turns away for a minute to deeply bow to Konami* I am so sorry I've never played your MGS games or did sufficent research on them for this piece of fiction. When I was typing this, I had no clue Frank even had a kid. I knew about Naomi, but not about Raiden. (Who I only know through a very brief video of Ezio, from Assassin's Creed, was dressed as.)
About the ginormous attention focusing on this particular arc, clustering, etc: Yes, I've been making this into an unusually dragged out arc, and it will still be hinted at from other chapters. Probably too much attention. Gak. About the clustering; sorry about that. Your suggestion to place other chapters in to offset the large amount of pregnancy and kiddie arc is a good one, but my subconscious is against disordering the words. What a bully.
Anyhow, thanks for the views!