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An; so u pplz are still saying i look liek a troll when NONE OF U HAVE EVER SEEN A PIC OF ME B4. (Nope. She really doesn't know what a troll is) wow i thout this plcae was supose 2 b mature. i guess nawt RIGHT. sure i may b a little overwait but NOT MUCH no more thn a normal grl my age. (You really are stupid. Why do you say you're overweight just to say a second later that every girl your age is overweight) so stuf (stuf! Haha!) PLZ ok.
and i allready told u no1 uses gramar on the internet, ITS THE INTERNET. (Everyone on this site does!) omg. u pplz r so retarted. (You are retarded because we can use grammar on the internet) lol. retards. (lol. Fuck you)
so, here i the rest of my story!
i woke up the next moning (which was sunday becuz the day b4 was saturday becuz they had no lcasses so tht makes 2day sunday! (I would never would have guessed)) my rists where sore becuz i was cuting them all day yestreday with rose. (Yes, you totally are a role model. NOT!) there was dired up blod all over my rist but i didnt care. i hated the fact tht ron weasley was in grifindor. IT MADE ME SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MADDDDD! (You have met him yesterday for the first time in your life, which really is weird) he was soooo perfet 4 me, becuz he was emo and i was emo. (So that means because I'm a blonde I should date blond guys because they are perfect for me?) but i dnt date wuld b a betryal of slitherin. so i got out of my pijamas (wich where: (I'm listening to Duder's a Spy. I like that song) blak slky pijama patns and a bagy t-shirt whicg was blac wit broken harts and skuls al over it becuz i was soooo sad becuz of how ron was a grifiondor (You really are a freak) nd so i wore tht tshit becuz it was an emo tshirt and thts why i wore it! (That was a stupid sentence))
I chaged into: a vry lowcut mini shirt. (And now I'm listening to Get back Up) it was made of lather and was super super super sexi. (You are a slut) i also put on vry long blac soncks with skuls on them. then i put on a tshirt that was tight and shoewd of my braest realy realty good. (Yup. You .(but dnt look there becuz thts disgusting ok! (Then don't wear it)) it had on whit skuls and pink buterflys coming frm the skuls. it was realy COOT! (A coot is a bird) finnaly i put on my shos tht i got tht every1 else wanted. i looked super super coot in the miror! (No, you don't)
when i had finshed chaning i walked don 2 the slitherin commumm room. pplz turned 2 star at me when i walked down. (Because they hate you so much) but i igored all of them nad walked over 2 rose who was siting in the conor (Poor conor) by the fireplace. she loked sad so i never said anything but just sat next 2 her.
finnaly after wht seemed liek 4EVER rose finnaly spoek! (Great)
"im so sad tht ron is a grifindoer" she said
"i no me 2" i said bac
"hes soooo coot 2" rose said bac (And now I'm listening to Holiday Club. I really like that song)
"i no, hes is coot" i said bac
"i just wish he culd ba slitherin" rose said (I just realised that this is supposed some kind of Romeo and Juliet-story)
"i no, me 2" i said bac
"i think i ned 2 cut my rist agin" rose said finnaly after liek 2 minets of not saying anyhing.
"me 2" i said bac (Oh god, this is killing me)
so rose and i got razors frm ur roms and we used them 2 cut iurselves on ur rist. it hurt but it felt good qat the same time becuz he made us releise ur pain. (How do you know that? I bet you got it from the internet) we cut urselves all moruing untill lunch time.
when it was finnaly lunch time me an roe went down 2 the great hall and to eat lunch. 4 lunch i dediced 2 have:
chickne and fires (This is not a healthy lunch!) and orange juice ad a cookie 4 desert and stuf liek that. it was realy good. (I really doubt that fire tastes good)
but, after i ate it all i didn fell good becuz i was still sad tht ron was a grifindor. i told rose this and she sad tht i was 2 good 4 him and tht it was his lost so i said:
"ur rite" i said (Why did you write 'I said' twice?)
and then 2gheter me and rose walked out of the great hall 2gheter and we where kind of hapier than b4 becuz now i new i was 2 good 4 ron. (No, you aren't) but, just as we where exciting the great hall we saw a flsh of red hair and herd a hot, sexii, sweat, (His voice was sweating? I doubt that this is sexy) beutiful voice. liek the voice of a angle. (Okay)
"h-h-h-h-h-h-h-hiiiiiii Tahirah" he said. (I'm sorry did I just stutter?)
i locked up and saw tht it was ron. rose gave a litle screem an then ran away out the great hall dors 2 the outside. (Why?) i was all along with ron.
"ohh, hi ... grifindor" i said making my voice s evil as posible 2 make him relise tht i ddnt like gifidors. (Yes, because it totally insults him when you call him by the name of his house) but it was hard 2 make an evil voice becuz he was so hot and sexii.
"i no tht ur a slitherin and im a grifindor and ussualy we pplz dnt get along well." (Oh really, how do you know that?) ron said
i said nothing. (YAY!)
"but, ive beem asked out by alot of grls at this school. but ive never been intrested in any of them. they wrnt pritty enuf (Because that's so important, isn't it?) or they where 2 meen. (Hermione isn't mean) but, u seem difernent. u seem sweat (Okay. That's weird) and nice, and ur probly he most beutiful grl ive ever seen as this school." (I really doubt that) ron said
i said nothing aggin, but a teer was beging 2 roll down my cheak. (Why?)
"so, Tahirah" ron said
but i ssaid sumthing b4 he could finsh:
"Call me tay" i said trying 2 keep an evil voice (You tell him to call you by your nickname in an evil voice? You are weird) but it was hard becuz he was soo coot and sexii.
"ok, tay. wuld u liek 2 go out with me." ron said.
"OMG! OMG! OMG!" i scramed
"YES! u r so sexii!"(Okay. That is stupid)
ron smiled and 2gether we walked out of the great hall dors! (Lovely)
2 b continued! (tell me wat u think! but TALK ABOUT MY STORY THIS TIME! (It's really stupid. And I'm still listening to Holiday Club. I realised that I love this song))