Okay, guys, it's me, Bacon Pancakes (I love that song xD)! I'm back!
My replies to those "guest" reviews:
letswatchblade- Thank you! I know, I bet you're not the only one who's wondering what the flip's going on. I know, right? "Why is everyone acting all 'Oh Finn you're alive!'?" You''l know soon enough (I hope xD Laziness sometimes takes over me).
Alien Auschwitz- Thanks! :D It's not Finnceline, though. Marceline won't be Finn's girlfriend this time, but his...well, you'll find out. ;) I decided to make a twist. Wonder if anyone had ever done that before.
Anyhow, thanks to those who reviewed and I decided to upload the behind-the-scenes to keep you contented before posting the first chapter. Just tell me if you don't like it.
"Wait, so you mean...?" Finn asked, his eyes widened. "I'm...?"
"Yes," Marceline answered. "You are."
"Wait, then why...how...?"
"Let me explain."
They sat on the couch.
"Long before the Mushroom War I was just an ordinary girl. Then it started. That stupid war between those kingdoms. My father was the commander of some troops and so I was guarded everyday by his bodyguards. He feared I'll be killed by our enemies. HIS enemies, anyway.
Soon I got sick of these guys trailing me around like a guard dog so I ran away and found myself in the middle of an abandoned town. I thought I had the whole town to myself, but I was wrong.
I was eating near the town's Hall when I heard footsteps. I looked around and saw none, and so I continued eating. Then that idiot jumped on me and strangled me down onto the ground."
Finn snorted. She had called him an idiot.
"Then what happened?"
"Well...I..."
I put down my pen. Whew, finally finished this part! Before I could sneak it down into my pack, however, my seatmate's hand shot out of nowhere and snatched the notebook.
"IANNE!" I breathed, "YOU COULD GET US CAUGHT!"
"Don't worry," she whispered back and started reading.
"I'm not finished with that chapter before!" I whisper-shouted, and grabbed the notebook.
"HEY!" she said, "I was reading!"
"I'll add a few more words then you could read it."
"Just make sure I will read it first," she said, "and not your crush."
"Shut up." I snapped, my face turning red.
Yeah, these are my friends. Ianne, Darlyn and Axl (my crush). I started writing this about three weeks ago, and these three are the only ones who've seen it so far. I wanted to keep my work private, but later on I realized that I should post this on Fan Fiction.
Anyway, Darlyn turned to us and asked, "OH my GOSH, is it finished?"
"The first part of the chapter is." I answered, getting my pen.
"Hey, is it finished?" asked Axl.
"NO," I replied and hid the notebook.
"Aw, come on, lemme." he said.
"NO," I repeated.
"Well, she can't finish it until we all go away and let her do the thing she's good at peacefully." Darlyn said and went back to arguing with Axl.
I continued writing down the next part. And then, they would get my notebook again. Sigh. They always act all nuts when I've added another part.
"Finished?"
"No."
5 minutes later...
"Finished now?"
"NO."
another 5 minutes later...
"How about-"
"NO!"
"Well, hurry up."
"I'm the one writing this, so you don't have any rights to make me hurry up." I snapped.
"Fine."
Yeah, this happened during our Science Class. After I finished copying the lecture, I began to write that part. How we were passing that notebook around without being caught by our teacher and sent to detention is a miracle. xD
Yeah, it's hard passing this around, even if it's just us four. If we were caught and the teacher reads it, we're dead balls! Because you know...Rated M... most of the chapters are, anyway.
And just so you know, Fionna will play a big part in the story and so does Marshall. Not cameos anymore! :D
Please tell me whether you like this or not.
Oh, and that part is longer, just got lazy typing the whole thing (xD).
