So that's the end, this fix was meant to just be for the grammar/spelling problems.
Again, its not really to fix any of the plot problems because I don't really mind them anymore, this story is done and I've moved on, it's been actually almost five years since I've written it and nearly three since I finished uploading it once Penny (my best friend and Beta) finished helping me type up the draft I wrote on paper. Long story sort its done, no more!
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"Mommy when are we going to get there?!" a small female voice sounded through the clearing of trees.
A soft chuckle followed the child's voice, "We'll be there soon don't worry so much Ame."
The young girl named Ame pouted, her long blond hair covering her light blue eyes; her hands moving to tug at the end of her dark red skirt.
"Oh, let her be Kit she just wants to see everyone, after all it has been six years since she has seen them all in one place," an older male voice sounded besides the tall blond-haired woman.
"Kurama I know that!" she snapped playfully.
"Naruto be calm please you're going to wake up Kiske," another male voice said.
Naruto pouted. "Oh, shush Itachi, Kiske is going to wake up soon anyway," she said looking at the small bundle in her arms.
Kiske was no older than three years old but he was so cute. He had black hair like his fathers but his eyes were just like his mothers. Like Ame he was full of energy and always wanted to play.
Though Ame was eight years older than her brother she still loved him with all her heart.
Right on cue Kiske opened his eyes.
"Pay pay," he asked after all sleep was gone from his face.
Naruto chuckled before she placed him on the ground. He almost immediately ran up to his onee-chan and grabbed hold of her hand.
Naruto's smile turned a bit sad. She couldn't believe that she almost didn't get to live like this with her family.
When Itachi had finally got her to Hakaru she had stopped breathing.
Hakaru spent days getting her back to normal after her breathing was back to normal but it didn't change the fact that she was in a coma for six months before she woke up.
The first thing she had seen was Ame. She held on so tight to her child it was almost as if she wanted to never let her go again.
The next day she had begun to go through steps to start walking again but to her amusement no one talked about Sakura's betrayal.
It wasn't until she asked herself that she found out that Sakura had been taken back to Konohana and give to Ibiki and Anko to receive punishment.
That brought a smile to her face. It was also then that she found out Sasuke had been visiting the village almost every month.
The rest of that year Naruto and Itachi had finally gotten their proper wedding.
Later on, Naruto finally gotten pregnant again. Though it was hard because one of the spikes had stabbed her in the uterus making her very susceptible to miscarriages, yet she had managed to give birth to Kiske.
Itachi was overjoyed to have his own son at last.
Naruto felt life was going well watching her family. She had turned down the chance to become the next ruler of Uzushio, and Katsumi had taken up the mantle their grandfather had finally passed on a year ago seeing as his illness had taken the turn for the worse.
He died a peaceful death at the very least.
That had been the last year but now she was traveling to Konoha to visit her special, original family she made herself.
She looked up at the sound of her children's squeaks and cheers.
Seeing her kids run up to their uncle who stood holding his wife's hand, that wife being Hinata.
Ame and Kiske ran up to their uncle and aunt attaching themselves to their legs.
"Itoko." Sasuke said softly as he took Naruto into his arms when she was at arm's length.
Naruto smiled at Sasuke's smile, Hinata had been doing a great job getting him to open up he was so much nicer now.
Naruto's head shot up, knocking into Sasuke's chin as she remembered something very important.
"RAMEN!" she yelled as she ran through Konoha's gates, her children following and giggling with joy at the heavenly food.
"She never changes, does she?" Sasuke asked rubbing his chin.
"No and I hope she never does," Itachi said fondly.
Kurama and Hinata chuckled at the two brothers and Naruto's strangeness.
"Come on; let's go before our family gets too big in debt, even selling Uzushio will be too little."
The four followed after the crazy Ramen obsessed family morning the pain their wallets would feel soon.