Hello everyone
I am literally sorry the lengths of the chapters are so crappy,i know I'm a horrible author but this is the first REAL Fanfic I've planned, Any suggestions are welcome, I'll try my hardest to make the chapters longer
Darkness hung thickly in the den, only to be penetrated by a tiny shaft of light. A sharp pain shocked Flutterpaw as her head shot up. "Sorry Flutterpaw,I stepped on your tail" the familiar voice of her sister, Cloverpaw apologized. "It's okay" Flutterpaw muttered, resting her head back on her paws, already beginning to drift off.
"You should be getting up too" the voice of Splashstorm echoed around the apprentice den. "But it's only dawn!" Flutterpaw pleaded, not opening her eyes. "Perfect time for a /dawn/ patrol" Splashstorm retorted "now up and Adams".
Flutterpaw grunted, pushing herself to her paws she began to groom her pelt, gently and thoroughly taking her time. "No time for that, you've kept us waiting long enough" Splashstorm meowed, lashing her tail "now c'mon, the others are waiting".
Muttering inaudible words to herself, Flutterpaw pushed out of the den and into the clearing. After her eyes adjusted, Flutterpaw could make out Teaseltwine, Cloverpaw, Brackenpaw and Greyflash all seated in the clearing "about time to" Greyflash growled, standing up and turning, stomping towards the entrance.
"What a grumpy badger" Flutterpaw muttered with no intent on others hearing her. To her despair, Splashstorm shot her a glare "maybe if a certain apprentice had woken up on time, he wouldn't be such a 'grumpy badger'". Flutterpaw rolled her eyes "it's not my fault, I've never been forced to wake up this early". Splashstorm lashed her tail, clear anger brimming in her gaze "Neither has Cloverpaw yet she's been just fine".
Flutterpaw didn't respond, anger seethed in her mind 'what a stickler, why was I given her as my mentor'. ''Older cats are always kinda bossy'' a nervous laugh next to her made her turn her head. Padding next to her was a gold and white Tom.
"Your Brackenpaw correct?" Flutterpaw inquired, giving no indication to his past statement. Brackenpaw hesitated for a moment before nodding his head "yep, my mentor is Greyflash". Flutterpaw twitched her ears "lucky you" she muttered, glancing down she noticed to the Tom was padding perfectly in step with her.
"H-he's really not that bad" Brackenpaw responded, his eyes shining "he's a brilliant fighter, I'm happy to have him as my mentor". Flutterpaw simply grunted, quickening her pace until she was walking next to Cloverpaw.
Cloverpaw at the moment was deep in conversation with Teaseltwine. "Oh hey Flutterpaw" Cloverpaw smiled, looking over to her sister, her smile fell as she observed her sisters mood.
"What's wrong?" She asked, tilting her head "Splashstorm is a horrible mentor". Next to Cloverpaw, Teaseltwine let out a laugh "bad mentor? How so?".
Flutterpaw lashed her tail, anger still flickering In her gaze "she's being a complete butt because I didn't want to wake up" she seethed, narrowing her eyes. Teaseltwine laughed, amusement shining in his gaze, "do you think it is funny?" Flutterpaw challenged, her fur bristling.
"I- uhh no" the Tom meowed, forcing his maw to shut, Flutterpaw growled, stomping ahead until she was padding towards the front of the patrol.
'Every warrior is rude and obnoxious' She thought to herself. 'but I won't be, I'll be the nicest, kindest one with the most handsome mate in the clan...maybe he'll even be from Valleyclan!' At that point her mind wandered off, daydreaming upon her fantasy.