READ THE ENTIRE THING. I HAVE THINGS TO SAY, AND ALL OF YOU NEED TO HEAR THEM.
Okay, you know what? I'm gonna take a moment to explain some things here.
First of all, thank you all SOOOO much for all the 'lovely' reviews!
Really makin' my day here, folks! I've never had such a backlash within the first 24 hours of posting! I somehow feel extremely proud of myself for accomplishing such a feat!
Anyways, onto the next part.
Please note that I mostly forgot about Naruto's character during the final section.
...I'm not kidding. I simply forgot.
Now, even though I forgot, you have to give me some sort of credit here.
Firstly, Naruto was just approached by the Three Fates. He may not believe in fate 'n shit, but he can't deny the fact that these three old ladies are in front of him, are very powerful, and can literally eviscerate him with a single thought if they wanted to.
So, there's your explanation for 'But Naruto doesn't believe in Fate!', Lightningblade49, noone, and guest's
What about the plotline itself?
Well, apparently people think the whole 'Kaguya destroys the world', 'Naruto is the son of a god/goddess', 'He gets sent to the PJO universe' is old and tired. But please remember something!
THIS IS AN ADOPTED FIC
I adopted the original plot from Nightlance44, right? Which means I listen to what they have to say about how they want this to go! SOOOOO, if they tell me they want Naruto to be the son of Zeus, I write that out! If they tell me Naruto is the last survivor of Shinju's rampage, I type it down! So that's why the plot is the way it is, and I am not going to listen to any advice on the way it should go, unless you are actually NL44 under a different username: Kylevalheru, PS64, and FFwatchdog
Let's move onto the fact that Naruto would tell the Fates to go F themselves.
Well, again, he literally stands no chance against defeating these three in any sort of combat. But we all know Naruto, and he'd go try to beat 'em up anyways.
How about the fact that he knows that Thalia living dooms the world? Still not a good enough reason, I get that...
Maybe the fact that he knows she'll be okay?
Yeah, that's a good reason!
He doesn't go to 'save her' because he is literally told that she will be okay, but that he must leave her to her fate! That's it!
THALIA NEVER FUCKING DIES, BOOK-VERSE, MOVIE-VERSE, OR 'THIS FIC'-VERSE!
So, there's that out of the way, just for you wonderful reviewers!: Kylevalheru, blassreitter, PS64, Cerberus Kyuubi, Ejammer, and more Guest's
Oh, you thought I don't read your reviews?
FUCK YOU
I READ EVERY FUCKING REVIEW I EVER GET
I KNOW I KINDA SCREWED UP IN SOME PARTS OF THIS FIC, AND I'M SORRY
BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN I NEED YOU 'Yea i am just gonna say you fucked up', 'This is bad', 'the ending was terrible', 'thank you sir you have fallen to negligence', 'It could have been forgivable if it was done well' BULLSHIT!
And I'm normally completely open to criticism... but in this period of time in my life, I DO NOT need extra flack, okay?
I'm am dealing with a lot of shit with school, and finding a job, and dealing with (what I assume to be) depression.
I'd normally give a 'Thank you for the review!' to all of you I can respond to, see how and if I can fix this, and go ahead and pretend I'm not a fuck-up when it comes to writing.
You people haven't even seen the load of crap I'd spew out 1-2 years ago, and this is literally 10x better.
The last thing I need is for people to tell me I suck at writing. Or that I did a terrible job. Or that if it was better, things could be 'excused' (F-U for that last one, BTW).
Because if I hear those things, I start doubting myself.
And I CANNOT AFFORD TO DOUBT THE LAST THING I HAVE HOPE IN
Do any of you happen to know my future career of interest?
Journalism.
An entire job based off of writing.
Now, imagine if I start hearing how my journalistic writing (obviously a different form from fic writing) is shit, and that it's bad, and that things could be excused if it was better.
I guess I better go start working at McDonald's for $7 an hour, huh?
'Cuz, y'know, my writing sucks and it won't be good enough for journalism, and I shouldn't even try, huh?
So, again, thank you all for giving me things to think about!
For those of you who gave me positive reviews, I thank thee for your kind words. I need some sort of silver lining here...
If you'd like, I'll probably go ahead and edit the end of the chapter once I get through my finals for my Junior year in HS (the last year before colleges start checking my class out, so I really need to get good grades).
Until the next time I actually give a shit!
~Kage Musha