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FANG: So? I am surprised you people like this shit.
ME: Oh no you fucking didn't. Did he just do what I think he did, Nudge?
FANG: Oh no! SHE BROUGHT NUDGE
NUDGE: Yea! And I am surprised too cuase your mean A LOT, excepty for when you give us cookies. I like cookies don't you? I mean they are just so chocolatey and warm especially with milk ya know? *goes off and follows Fang to annoy him-
ME: THE POWER OF THE NUDGE CHANNEL MUAH HAHAHAHAHA!
WHATS THIS? A CLAIMER OF DISSNESS? SHE OWNS NOTHING THAT IS MENTIONED IN THIS STORY EVERRRR!
MAX'S POV:
Huh? Where am I? I feel terrible, she thought. She stood up from the bed and surveyed the surroundings. The bed, walls, dresser, floor, and doors were all black. "Oh, your awake. Well heres some soup." Max gasped and turned at the sound of someones voice.
"Thank you. I, uh, noticed there is a lot of color in here huh?," she said the last part sarcastically. She took the soup and ate it quickly. "Mmmmm, tomato soup. My favorite."
The man grunted and left. How weird…He barely talked to me. I suppose I ought to tell him thank you for saving me.
I heard Welcome To The Black Parade playing somewhere in thee house. I followed the sound to a man my age. "Um, thanks for helping me an everything." He jumped about a mile in the air. I was laughing a bit. Then he turned around and I realized how HOT he was. He had black hair and the most darkest eyes, almost like obsidion, with little gold flecks in them. His skin was olive-y and hee had a six pack. Did I mention he wasn't wearing a shirt? No? Well, he wasn't. And man it was fucking sexy.
"No problem. Can I ask why in the hell were you outside in a hurricane?," he asked calmly. His face was passive and his lips were set in a hard line.
"Because, I ran away from my house. Besides, I don't even know your name! Mie is Max, Maximum Ride Martinez," I held out my hand for him to shake it.
"Nicholas Dente. I prefer Fang." He ignored the hand. I dropped it and went to go find my things. He called out," Your stuff is in the room you woke up in."
I walked back to there and found my phone and called Ella, who was my sister. I wish I didn't have to run away. She answered and screamed, "WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU? I'M WORRIED SICK RIGHT NOW"
I sighed and said, "I left. And I'm not going back. Tell Mom it isn't her fault. It's Jeb's. I love you, Ells. I gotta go." I hung up on her before she could say anything else. I walked over to my purse and put it back into the pocket. I grabbed my purse and yelled out to 'Fang' "BYE THANKS FOR SAVING ME!" But when I tried to open the door it was locked and I sighed, turning around and screamed. Fang stood there, his dark eyes glittering when the light hit them. He asked me where I was going. I didn't answer. He sighed and grabbed my hand pulling me away from the door.
"Go get all the bags on the floor in the room."
Slightly miffed I did what he said and then I walked outsde of thee room and told him to poin the way. He led me to another room and told me, " Because it's still storming outside you can stay here. In the bags are some clothes and stuff. My sisteer picked it out, so be warned." He didn't sound like he was joking so I said okay and started putting the things in drawers and getting all the bathroom stuff and putting into the bathroom which was all mine, I might add.
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Me: Also Sorry about the second chapter being cut off. So Bye
Fang: Bye
Iggy: Bye
Max: Bye
Gazzy: Byee
Nudge: Bye! I hope we see each other again because then I could pick out so-*muffled*
Me: Thanks Gaz.
Angel: Bye
ALL: R&R (All Ecxcept Fang) FOR A DAY WITH FANGYPOO!