Hello! I'm sorry if you guys don't like chapters devoted to author's notes, but this has to happen, otherwise you won't be reading all of the chapters... I have four chapters that need to be put before the latest ones - here's how it will go.
When you see an update, read the first chapter - Tori: Divergent - that'll be changed significantly.
Then there'll be a complete revision of the next two chapters - Marcus: Choices, (I changed the chapter name as well) and Amar: Welcome to Dauntless.
Then I'm going to update a chapter of Amar, just before Amar: Simulation - it's going to be called Amar: Visiting Day. This is going against my thing of not putting the same POV twice in a row, but I can't think of any way to rearrange the chapters, so there's going to be a new chapter in between the Amar ones. Any suggestions? I was thinking Peter, Christina, possibly Al - can you guys tell me the one you'd most like to see? It doesn't have to be anything I've already mentioned!
Also, if you're wondering why I'm changing all of these, it's because I am seriously unimpressed by my writing then; it's just way too fragmented for my liking and just not as good as I hoped. However, I'm pretty proud of how much it's improved since I started this - the chapters I'm the most proud of are chapter 10 (Simulation), chapter 12 (memories), and both of Caleb's chapters. Which chapters do you like the most?
Thanks for reading! The next chapters will be up in a few days, I hope! This note will be taken down as soon as I get all four new chapters up :)
EDIT: The first chapter's up now!