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Chapter V. First Jumper
TRIS
Once the train nears the Dauntless Headquarters, we jump onto the roof. Christina and I jump together, both of us landing successfully on our feet. Sadly, two did not make it. An Amity and Dauntless born failed initiation. We are lead to a giant hole in the middle of the rooftop that looks bottom-less. Christina and I exchange a look.
"Initiates!" We all turn to the voice.
"My name is Eric. I am a Dauntless leader. Here, you will have a chance of jumping down into Dauntless headquarters. The Dauntless born have the right to go first."
I look at Eric. He seems to be staring at me, but he moves his eyes elsewhere, probably scanning the crowd of us initiates. He'd be handsome, without the many piercings.
He has short blond hair, steel blue eyes, and he's pretty muscular. Our eyes meet, and he smirks at me. I smirk back.
"Watch it, Stiff." He says. The other transfers and the Dauntless born's eyes are on us.
"What would I have to watch?" I say playfully.
Eric glares at me. "All right then, why don't you jump first?"
"Gladly." I smile.
I make my way through the gaping initiates and stand on the ledge of the hole. The wind whips around my baggy clothing as I remember my plan. I take off my shirt, earning me catcalls, and my pants. I am now wearing my Dauntless black outfit with the matching combat boots I had stolen that night. I open my satchel and put my gun in my pocket with the knives.
Peter yells, "Take it off Stiff!" More catcalls and whistles. I look at Eric. His eyes are wide with a look of shock.
I throw my Abnegation clothes at his gut so hard, he lets out an 'oomph'.
I put my hair up in a pony and I turn around to face the other wide eyed, jaw dropped initiates. I smirk and yell, "DAUNTLESS BITCHES!" I do a backflip and fall down into the hole. I can still hear the cheering, then Eric's yells, telling them to shut up.
I land on my back on a net. I cheer and grab a hand, which pulls me off the net. I land on my feet. "Name?" I look up to see the man whose hand I grabbed. He is tall, muscular, has short dark brown hair, and eyes that are so dark blue, they could be black. I've probably been staring too long because he raises an eyebrow at me. I blush red.
"Tris."
"Dauntless, right?" A girl with pixie cut blond and purple hair says from his side.
"Nope. Abnegation." I beam. Both their jaws drop.
"A Stiff?! In Dauntless clothes?! First to jump?! Unheard of." I nod in approval to the girl's words.
"There's a reason why she left them Lauren." The boy says.
"Make the announcement Four." Lauren, I guess, says.
"First Jumper, Tris!" A crowd of Dauntless emerges from behind him, catcalling and screaming, "ARE YOU SINGLE!?" From more than half the boys. I nod. They cheer even more, making me blush. I swear, I saw Four in the corner of my eye have a shadow of a smile when I said I am single.
I turn my attention back to the net as I hear girly screams coming closer. Christina lands in the net, still screaming. I run up to her and help her out. She smiles when she sees me. We stand by Four and Lauren.
"Tris! That was so amazing! And they way you pissed Eric off! Priceless!" She yells.
We both break out into laughter, I manage to make out, "Thanks. It was hilarious stripping to my Dauntless clothes and throwing them at Eric."
We start laughing again. Four turns up to us and we stop laughing.
"Just a question…Tris, why are you wearing Dauntless clothing and why did we hear so many catcalls and wolf whistles?"
Christina and I look at each other and laugh again. Another person comes down onto the net, and jumps off.
The voice screams, "CATCH ME TRISSY!" I look up and Uriah falls on top of me.
"WHAT THE CRAP URI? GET OFF ME!" I yell.
Even if he was joking, it made me realize that I would never want a guy on me again.
I mean, unless I'd want them to, but I'm still not over that.
Uriah gets up, and starts cracking up with Christina. I join in too. I stand up, brushing myself off. Uriah starts to talk to Four.
"So you see, Trissy caught Eric staring at her, and she made some remarks and ended up having to jump first, which she wanted to do." Christina continues.
"Then she takes off her shirt and pants and throws it at Eric who was blushing like a tomato!" Four still keeps his calm demeanor on, even though he looks like he wants to burst out laughing.
"Then I turned around and-" I can't stop the laughter, "I yelled out 'DAUNTLESS BITCHES' then I did a backflip into the hole and now I'm here." Christina, Four, Uriah, and I look at each other and laugh.
Four goes off to help the other initiates off the net while Christina and I keep talking. I have no idea where Uriah went. Sooner or later, he comes back with someone who looks like an older version of him.
"So you're the Stiff that dressed as a Dauntless and stripped in front of an embarrassed Eric. The whole faction is raving about you. I've heard from them that you are pretty, and looks like it's true." I blush.
"Shut up Zeke!" Uriah yells, punching Zeke in the arm.
Zeke grows a huge grin. "Hey Trissy! Wanna hang out sometime? Did you fall from heaven? Because you're the only ten I see!"
Uriah and I look at each other, and crack up, laughing about how Zeke mixed those two cheesy pick-up lines.
"Wait…oops." Zeke blushes a deep red. We start to laugh even harder.
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