Dramione chapter 5 part 2

I DON'T OWN HP!

this chapter is in two parts 1) because I didn't want you guys waiting for ages

and 2) I got stuck half way through writing this.

I know this chapter is really sort and sucky but I promise it will get better

This chapter took me 3 days to write thanks to one of my 'friends' saying my story was total crap so that kinda put me down for a while but reading over your reviews helped.

Thank you for reading my stories and giving me confidence (sounds cheesy but true)

"Harry what are you doing?" Draco exclaimed as Harry walked into the room, wand drawn. "Helping" Harry said simply. "I appreciate the gesture but I don't need help"

said Draco now looking at Harry. Lucius took this opportunity to cast a body-bind curse, It hit Draco full in the chest. Harry didn't have any time to react before the curse hit him as well. "Now what should we do with them?" Lucius said coldly giving Harry a hard kick in the ribs, tears formed in his eyes from the pain. Lucius smiled, "As for him" he said looking down on his son. "He should be punished for his disobedience". "Lets take them home, we can work out what to do with them there" Narcsisa said dragging harry to the fire place. Lucius followed with Draco. " Malfoy Manor" Narcsisa said quickly. The emerald flames engulfed them once more.

They arrived in seconds, Harry's scar burned as he was dragged into the Mansion.

"Now should we put him in the cellar until the Dark lord returns" Narcsisa asked pulling Harry behind her and dumping him on the stairs. "Here let me tie him" Lucius said flicking his wand toward Harry, ropes appeared and snaked around Harry, cutting into his skin, burning him as they did so. "What do we do about Draco?' Narcsisa asked throwing Harry down the stairs, he landed at the bottom with a thump. Narcsisa dragged him into the cellar, walked out and locked the door after her. Harry was left in the dark, his scar burning. He could hear the screams of the other prisoners, Then his scar burned red-hot. He let out small sobs, knowing what would happen next. Harry could hear Draco being tortured, his muffled cries as his father cursed him again and again. Footsteps getting closer, the door opens and a body is thrown in.

It was Draco, or what was left of him. His hair was tinged with red, his eyes swollen shut, he was bruised beyond belief. "Harry," Draco whispered, barely audible, "Harry, you have to run, get back to her, Harry, get back befo-". The door opened, light flooded the room, blinding Harry, as hands grabbed him roughly pulling him out.

"Hello Harry Potter" A voice as cold as ice hissed through Harry's head as his scar burned more fiercely. A blinding green light was the last thing Harry saw.

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"Madam Pomfrey" Ron called through the open doors of the hospital wing, as he half dragged-half carried Hermione. "Here" Ron said as he gently placed her down on a bed, Madam Pomfrey quickly sorted a Room for Hermione and a small bed for Ron.

"Hermione" Ron asked softly when they awoke the next morning. He told her what had happened the previous day."Yea" a sleepy Hermione asked, "I wanted to tell you something, ever since I met you I knew there was something I liked about you" He paused taking a breath. "What I want to tell you is … I have always liked you Hermione, and I realized that if you don't tell the person how you feel about them you may never get the chance". "Ron that might just be the smartest thing you have ever said" Hermione said, giggling. "But I have to tell you that I don't like you the way you like me, I don't want to hurt you but I feel it's better to tell the truth". Hermione said, her face serious. "Ron, please try to understand, it's not that I don't care I do, it's just I can't lie to you. Ron didn't say anything for a long time, then he quickly got up and walked out, his eyes glistening and his face scarlet.

"Ron" Hermione sobbed quietly.

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She had already lost one dear friend, she couldn't handle it if she lost another one.

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