Chapter 2
HI!
Just to give you some extra detail, you might find the quote 'I felt the vibrations from the door and managed to form some sort of structure in my mind of what … who the sound waves carved around!', if that doesn't make sense, then I am basically creating the imagery that is from the horror game 'LURKING', you might have seen Pewdiepie play it and … well yeah … that is it.
So, plz R&R to say if it is good, if it needs improvements, to say your predictions for the future OR to say it doesn't make any sense.
Honestly, I am NOT SURE ABOUT THIS!
(I used capitals to create tension/exaggeration, there is NOOOO way I used it because I accidentally pressed Caps-Lock and couldn't be bothered to turn it off :-l)
Thanx again dudes (and dudettes XD)
MarshMellowMania Out!
I woke up and … that was it.
I woke up.
I couldn't see anything, but I knew I was awake.
I couldn't open my eyes … that's all.
That is 'probably' the reason for the darkness … oh what am I kidding? Of course it is!
My mind is just muddled … that's all.
But that is the thing, i cannot think straight! I haven't been able to think straight since … since before we were ambushed!
I MUST have been drugged or something, anything! It is beginning to scare me, that must be the reason I cannot see but … the sharp blow to the head could have affected my sight!
Maybe I am temporarily blind or maybe it is … permanent? NO! I couldn't have had brain damage from just a mild hit … or maybe …
NO! I need to think positive, I need to get through this I … I need to find a way out of here!
I struggle against the chains and … wait, CHAINS! They weren't there before and neither were the puncture holes in my plastron and … wait a minute!
They were experimenting on me when I was asleep … whoever 'they' are! I cannot believe I wasn't aware of my surroundings I … I couldn't believe that I couldn't stay awake! Sensei would scold me for it!
I still tried to sit up but … an arrow of pain imbedded itself into my side and I collapsed onto the floor.
The pace of my heartbeat began to increase, making blood crash into my brain and making me light headed. I began to pant I … I began to hyperventilate or … or something!
Donnie would know what to do … he would tell me to take deep breaths but … but I couldn't. The oxygen kept escaping my mouth and my eyes began to burn!
I couldn't breathe.
Where is Donnie when you need him?
I couldn't breathe!
Where are my brothers, I need them I … I miss them?!
I couldn't breathe!
What if something happened to them … what if I will never see them again?!
I CAN'T BREATHE!
Suddenly, a metallic creek and BANG rang out throughout the room, temporarily making my heart stop.
The slow and heavy sound of footsteps echoed down the corridor, hammering at my brain!
… Thump …
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Then they stopped.
They stopped!
Right in front of my cell …
Right in front of my cell!
I struggle at the chains as I hear the cage door open, I felt the vibrations from the door and managed to form some sort of structure in my mind of what … who the sound waves carved around!
It was a tall figure, probably male, shorter than Sensei definitely … but he seemed to be wearing … a very light coat?
"I see your awake, turtle." His voice sent shivers up my spine. It sounded … rusty, maybe?
The only thing I was sure of was that I was absolutely terrified. My heart felt like it was clawing itself out of my chest, blood was racing through my brain.
"Still not talking? Shame, I hear that you are such a chatterbox from … several, of my allies." His voice suddenly darkened.
"Allies?" I mumbled.
"Let's not talk about my colleagues now; they DEFINITELY won't save your life. But your turtle friends I … am not so sure about. Maybe they care about their own species and will save you, so let's talk about them, shall we?"
I twisted and turned in my chains, my discomfort caused my captor to laugh and before long, he pushed me back to the ground with his foot. I yelped in pain, I heard a crack my chest and felt my stomach twist and turn.
"W-what d-d-did y-y-you do t-to my b-br-brot-brothe-brothers?!" I groaned through clenched teeth.
"Brothers? Ha, maybe I was overthinking you four a bit too much? Oh well," The pressure against my shell increased, and my yelp turned into a shout engulfed by pain!
"Do you think your 'brothers' would come for you, you being so … oh, I don't know, useless?!" Despite me being constantly told by my family that I have a part in the team, the words still stung.
"You don't know anything!" I croaked, only to be cut off by him scoffing!
"Really! The Blue one is the leader, the Red one is the warrior, the Purple one is the inventor and you … what are you, turtle? Hmm? A joke? The screw-up?" I clenched my teeth in anger, feeling like Raph!
"Ha! They aren't coming for you turtle, do you know why?"
He lifted his foot up and began pacing up and down the room.
"One reason could be that they haven't found you yet, which is HIGHLY unlikely, since this place isn't exactly hard to find. Another reason could be that they abandoned you or haven't bothered looking and the last reason is that they could be DEAD!"
I froze.
My brothers, gone?
No. They can't be!
They are too stubborn to let go of life that easily!
I can't let him get to me!
He is trying to get to me!
It won't work, though!
I have to be stubborn aswell!
"Hmm, just so you know, we will be running quite a 'few' tests on you, so be prepared and afraid, be VERY afraid." I felt his footsteps draw closer and at the same time, he kneeled down and stuck something in my arm.
It felt cold, it felt excruciatingly painful! The coldness soon infected the rest of my body, and I was left shivering and whimpering.
I curled myself up in a ball, hugging my legs to receive some sort of warmth. I felt disorientated … I felt … nauseous and I felt
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I felt
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I heard a … a key turn and I … I felt the … pressure from the chains … loosen …
I was left there, begging that unconsciousness would come and … it … did …
Yeah, I kinda forgot that I was trying to keep the character a secret but … hay ho, no turning back! I guess that is the blonde inside of me, the good thing about being a blonde though is that you have an excuse when you come out with a stupid question or when you say something highly un-intellectual!
Thanks again, R and R. XD