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When Pein have possessively hugged Sakura all hell brake lose. All that emotion that prevents them touching Sakura make them go crazy in jealousy. They crave for her touch. Her voice. Her scent. Just her… and only her…
In a blinding speed Naruto scoop her in his arm and ran out of the room in hope to have her all by himself.
Thus the hunting has begun. The hunt for our dear exiled princess…
Naruto ran before anyone could react and when they did a certain fox demon is doing to die. But before he dies they torture him first by taking sweet, sweet Sakura that he dare to touch and then rip him apart. Which ever come first…
Naruto ran silently use his mad ninja skillz. He found a room away far far from the previous room. He put Sakura down on her feet and cover her mouth before she even scream.
"Emft… left gowf…" Naruto ignored her, his back was pressing the door listening for any men stealing Sakura. At first it was chaotic.
"Naruto! I'm going to kill you!"
"Oi! You sad excuse of a demon! I'm going to rip your head from your body!"
"Fucker, where the fuck are you? Jashin-sama will destroy you"
"Tobi misses pretty girl!"
"Shut the fuck up! Yeah. We have to find before… before… oh I'm scared. Danna~ comfort me"
"You disgust me."
"That fucking fox better not fucking touch what's not his. What's about to be mine, Mine…"
If Naruto didn't' know them very well he would have felt hurt, betrayed even but alas now with a beautiful girl in his arm he feels nothing but proud of himself.
Eventually they have quiet down and searched for Naruto to the other side of the mansion. Naruto sigh in relief and remove his hand from Sakura's lips and his arm from her waist which had previously hugged Sakura very close to Naruto's body. When he completely let go of Sakura, she instantly collapse on the floor feeling like a puddle of goo. Naruto panicked pacing back and forth thinking what to do. Sakura was out of breath because he covered her mouth barely letting her breath and she never had a male (forcibly) press them so very, very closely on her before. Her heart was still racing and her face was very flush and makes her dizzy. Suddenly she felt herself being lifted from the floor to soft yet dusty bed which she did not notice before.
I foresee our future. U-hum it's full of rape, ropes and screams. I'm so happy…
I sometimes wish you have your own body.
Why? So that you let me rape… I mean have an 'intimate interaction' with all of these delectable men who is parading around shirtless?
Yes that so they can leave me a-lone so I can kill, you then poison you, and throw your raped body to the ocean. Which ever come first.
Ouch that actually sting…
Naruto kneel down beside the bed where Sakura was laid on looking down on her obviously concern about her well-being. Naruto put his hand on Sakura's forehead checking her temperature and stroking her cheek lovingly.
"Ermm... are you okay?" Naruto said not knowing what exactly to say to her. Sakura nodded in respond. She sat up slowly, her head heavy.
"Thank god" he sigh looking all happy and giddy again. "My name is Naruto the most unpredictable demon in Konoha and I'm going to be the greatest demon ever in the history of awesome demons (not that I know any)! BELIVE IT!"
"Konoha? Hokage?" Sakura felt mildly curious. Naruto's eyes lit up like a charismas tree as if waiting for me to ask that exact question. Eyes widen innocently.
"Konoha is a place where I live before that book sucked me in and ended up here. It's the most wonderful place better than the other counties and it's the strongest too. And one day they'll notice me as the greatest and awesomest demon in the history of…" Naruto continue to talk about him being Hokage but Sakura didn't care. She actually enjoyed listening to his endless story. Naruto then talked about ramen and the long generation of ramen. When he ends his adoration for ramen he notices that Sakura was staring at his face in half daze. Then it hit Sakura in 10 tons of realization.
"Wait…you're a demon?" Sakura ask voice almost shakily. For all Sakura knew demons have bat wings, red beady eyes and are EVIL. Fags and claws shimmering dangerously in blood. That's what the maids told her but this 'demon' is none of those things but a cute normal-ish guy gifted with divine looks, and innocence on the side.
"U-huh I am! The others are too" Naruto looked at Sakura's reaction that says your-so-crazy-dude.
"Well… not now that is, we prefer to hide our true form because you kind of freak out on us when we first came out" Naruto grin sheepishly scratching his head in a shy manner.
"Oh…" Sakura didn't what exactly to say. Now that he mentioned it that was actually the whole reason she's here in the first place.
"Do you wanna see it" Naruto suddenly ask and it took her a moment to realize that he was referring to his 'true form'. Sakura just nodded, curious what a demon really looked like. The air around the room shifted slightly then suddenly a pair of fox ear appears on top of Naruto head, twitching in a cute manner and a long red fluffy fox tail shifted also in a cute way.
Cute…
There was no other word for it. Maybe adorable but that's not the point. Naruto is so freakin' cute. CYYUUUUTEEEEE! I have forgotten to mention I adore/worship cute thing.
"Are you okay?" Naruto said worried Sakura is afraid of him.
I will be if you're on top of me naked.
"Yes, Naruto I'm fine" Sakura smiled ignoring Inner's disturbing sick fantasy while looking at Naruto's fluffy new form.
Must resist cuteness… focus…
Yeah... good luck with that. Oh! Just look at that fluff, soft too.
Resist… focus… bitching Inner…
"Then why are you staring at me in a daze?" his tail flick to the side. Sakura's eyes watching it closely.
I can't tell him I was admiring his cuteness. That's just insulting. INNER! For once help me find an EXCUSE!
How about that we… uh… we were admiring his face and how handsome it is and how deep his voice is…
Bitch! He'll think that I'm a pervert and wanted to get in his pants…
THAT'S THE IDEA SO SAY IT AND LET'S GET ON WITH IT! Mama wants some sugar…
"You're doing it again it" Naruto said raising his eyebrow.
"It's nothing. It's just you're…" Sakura started to murmur thing that Naruto barely can hear just 'resist…focus' was all he heard.
"What?" Naruto ask flicking his tail and notice Sakura stiffen. Then Naruto's dense head started to do a miracle by thinking properly. Naruto started to experiment.
Tail to the left. Eyes to the left.
Tail to the right. Eyes to the right.
Flick ear. Eyes to ear.
Flick tail. Eyes back to tail
There are just a few possibilities he could think of 1. She wants to EAT him. 2. She wants to barbeque me. 3. She wants to…uh roast him. But sadly that miracle was never there it was just a piece of your imagination… then Naruto died because his stupidity has driven him insane and they all live happily ever after. The end.
Kidding! (I was just being random… sorry)
What really happen was that Naruto saw Sakura's hand twitches when his tail was very close. Naruto innerly smile, amused that Sakura is paying so much attention to his demon traits then the demon itself but nonetheless he felt content.
Twitch. Twitch.
Chuckle.
Twitch.
Naruto moved his tail back and forth towards Sakura enjoying every moment of her reactions. Her pouting lips in frustration. Eye twitches. Eyebrow close together to get the focus she'll never have. Naruto chuckled silently again.
"You can touch it if you want to." Naruto smiled and shift his tail nearer to Sakura. Sakura looked up with her big emerald doe eyes that are just so innocent. Her eyes shine with hesitation as if says "Can I really, really touch it…" Naruto's smile widens and nods at her.
"I'll be insulted if you didn't"
When Sakura's hand lightly stroke Naruto's tail her face change to bliss. The blush across her nose made her even cuter. She's just too cute for her own good. Her face shows content and joy. Naruto felt very relax, he'd never had this much contact with an actual human before and she's stroking his tail delicately in its fluffy glory. Her fingers run through his fur as if massaging him. He had decided then and there that… she will be his.
"So what's your name?" he asks very curiously. Sakura gain her focus.
"My name is Sakura. Sakura Haruno." She smiled.
"Well then Sakura-chan it is a pleasure to meet you and…" Sakura, still enjoying his fluffiness didn't notice that Naruto said her name in dark purrs. She moves her hand on top of Naruto's head and scratches at the back of his fox ear. He purrs loudly "Might I say, you smell wonderfully delicious…" that was not Naruto. That was a deep and husky voice that made Inner squeal. Sakura instantly stopped scratching his ear and withdrew her hand sensing the danger that was about to come. But Naruto's fast reflexes caught Sakura's wrist.
Sakura panicked. Naruto pushed Sakura on the bed and laid on top of her, his leg was between her preventing her from moving. His face deep in her hair at her neck. He inhale deeply and made a sound deep in his throat. He caught her other hand and move it above her head.
I think I trigger his horny button.
YES! My wishes have been granted… I'm in heaven~
Sakura couldn't move she was paralyzed. Her body went numb ignoring all of her protest. She heard Naruto inhale deep and gave a little nip on her skin. Naruto heard a satisfying gasp from Sakura. Naruto giggle, Sakura-chan is soo cute. He leaned back to see Sakura's beautiful face. Dark blush spread across the nose breathing heavily and lips swollen because of resisting from making any sound. Beautiful indeed.
Sakura notice Naruto's eyes that were now in a darker shade than before. His eyes were clouded by his dark emotion. Naruto creases Sakura's cheek lightly. Sakura notice that no matter how cute and fluffy Naruto is she had to get out of here with her virginity still interacts.
The way Naruto looked at Sakura mad her regret what was going to happen to him. Naruto creased Sakura's cheek and down to where he bit her, gently and agonizingly slow. His eyes never left hers. He never let her to. It was hypnotizing. His other hand still held her captive and the other creased her, which she just noticed has claws. Then he did what she did not think he would do…
He kissed her hard and agonizingly slow almost making her whimper then he started to lick and nibble her bottom lip hungrily. Sakura tried to move her face sideways but he growled possessively and held back of her head in place. Sakura tried so hard to keep her lips shut. Naruto's claws graze her neck threatening her to open her lip. Scared and unwillingly she did open up a small gap but Naruto force it open with his tongue.
Sakura's mind was starting to black out, then she had completely blacked out which inner don't mind at all but she must execute her plan to escape with her innocence.
Please don't I'm starting to feel good it's our first kiss/make out session.
Inner no, just no. I'd like myself untainted.
Killjoy...
Naruto slip his hand over her still mud covered dress. Sakura squeak but immediately swallowed by Naruto. His hand move in slow motion to her thigh and back down. His claws move in sensual motion. Sakura shivered and Naruto notice that smirk widen letting down his guard for a moment. That moment was just enough for Sakura and her plan.
'NOW!' she screamed in her mind in an instant Sakura's hand move in a blinding speed and hit all of Naruto pressure point and he instantly laid limb on Sakura. 'Thank you Tsunade-shishou!' she almost cried in the remembrance of her former mentor. She flip Naruto's unconscious body which she just notice has a… a raging hard on.
Inner whistled. Boy you are one big man.
Sh-shut up…
Sakura shifted her eyes away from Naruto's limb body. Inner laughed at her naiveté's. She walked towards the door and slowly opened it. The hallway was clear not a single demon was seen. With stealth that she will never have she walked slowly trying to make less sound as possible… but darn the old rotting wood floor that keep on making 'creaking sound.
Where's that grace of a princess that you use to brag about.
I don't know what you're talking about, you must be mistaken me with a girl with red hair and a bitching voice…
Temperamental bitch…
When she came down the big stair she notices that the house is more… lively? Before it was dull and colorless now it's as if I came to life and gave off that 'homey' feeling that she never felt when she was a princess.
Thud. Thud
"SAKURA-CHAN WHERE ARE YOUUU?"
How did he wake up so early…?
I bet he wants more of us…
You mean you…
Whatever…
"Teme, did you see Sakura-chan?"
"Dope, there you are?"
Bang! Crash!
"Ow what's that for?"
"So, un her name is Sakura then."
'Great now they know my name' she cursed Naruto and his loud mouth no matter how cute he is and darn him and his cuteness.
"U-huh, she's really deliciously cute."
"Fucker you touched her didn't you. You will be sacrifice"
"I will eat you. That's nice at least cook him. I prefer him raw…"
Then with his loud girlish screams and ran to save his ass from the evilly manically laughing demon. She came out from her hiding place right beside the stair case. She checked around the place to see if there is any lurking demon ready to pounce her or a ghost screaming 'boo~' at her face. There are none of those. She sighed in relief.
"OOoooOOO~~~ adaaa~~ daaaDAaaa…."
She know that song from anywhere that was an advertisement she saw all the time on TV, she used to love it that song but now it's just plain annoying. She grimaced not because of the song (maybe a little bit) but why was the TV even on. Heck, why is there even a TV in this old place! The many mysteries in the world…
She walks slowly towards the TV which was surrounded by many old couches. All of the white sheets were remove. When she came close behind a couch she saw a black wiggling furry… thing.
I think it's a dancing furry stick that we use to draw when we're kids.
That was a snake…
Oh… can't blame me that your drawing was crap.
Feeling insulted she locks Inner in an imaginary box and threw it in her imaginary ocean.
NOOOOoooooo…
She watched as inner disappear in the imaginary horizon.
It turns out that the wiggling thing was a tail that was attached to a boy with a pineapple hair. Who's laying on a couch directed to the TV. His hand was supporting his head while he watched TV. His tail was swishing from side to side. His expression shows that he was about to sleep in seconds. He finally noticed Sakura who laughing to herself.
He looked at the exotic pinket. The pinket looked back with a steady glare. He was not affected by, it instead he looked back at the TV. Sakura felt ever so happy that at least one of these demon are less demonic and … sexually stress.
She sighed happily. 'Maybe he's nice enough to just ignore' Sakura looked around the room searching for the exit. She walked behind the couch letting down her guard completely. Then suddenly she was pulled to couch. A pair of arm locks themselves around her waist and a leg over hers prevents her to even move an inch. His body was very close his half open eyes bore into her in a strong manner. She shivers. He smirks darkly...
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