Tobias threw Addison off me and punched a few times where it counts before dropping him. He dispatched of Drew quickly.

Then Peter shot him in the stomach. I don't know who screamed, me or Tobias.

Peter turned to me and I shielded my face with my good arm. He look at me with distaste.

"Time to end this, Tris." He turned me over. And I didn't hear what happened next. I just heard his scream.

I turned over to find him slumped over Addison and Drew, who bumped their heads on the gravel again. And a girl with a bloody dagger. She was breathing hard, and I finally got a close-up to the girl from the picture.

She was beat-up, and had no curves so you could tell she was young. Her white hair went down to her mid-back, and you could tell it was still growing.

But what cut my heart were her eyes.
A startling light blue, brighter than the sky. They were eyes who had both seen and experienced great pain. They knew betrayal. It cut my heart down to the quick. A child's eyes shouldn't have looked like that.

Her hands flew in a message. "I'll go get help, but then I must be returning home. Father will beat me if I am late." She turned and ran, after cleaning her knife on the grass.

I looked at Peter. He was stabbed in the stomach, right where he had shot Tobias. My own stomach lurched and I almost vomited.

I finally slipped into sleep from the pain.

I fell asleep to the image of Rebel's eyes.

Sorry for the short shitty chapter! Please, R&R!

I have concluded that I am not a good author and therefore will not get as much reviews as other people. I've read stories that I think are much better than mine and twice as short, and twice as many reviews. I have thought this over and decided that my stories will not get that many reviews. Despite this, please R&R! ANd F&F!

Whoever is my twentieth reviewer gets a shout-out! and my thirtieth, and so on.

Someone has suggested that I should maybe do a story with a non-overused storyline.

Hence, Tears of an Angel will be up soon!