Hey so here is chapter 2,trying my hand at Edwards POV let me know what you think.
Previousely: BPOV:The alleyway was like heaven to me. Quiet peaceful and there was no pain. I sat there just gazing at the stars as the snow continues to coat the ground. I didn't feel the cold anymore. I didn't feel anything. It was such a nice feeling. My last thought before I closed my eyes and let the darkness takeover was "Now, I'm not afraid to die"
Chapter 2 EPOV
100 years of this life, 100 years alone, I'm sick of it, sick of listening to the loved up couples in this house, sick of listening to everyone's inner most thoughts.
"Edward what's wrong I can feel your emotions from the other side of the house" my brother jasper asked to me as he entered my bed room.
"Nothing" I reply but jasper raises his eyebrows obviously he knows I'm lying. I sigh as I tell him the truth.
"To be honest it's just that it's a bit frustrating living under this roof with all of ye couples. Don't get my wrong I am happy for all of ye but it can get a bit lonely". Jasper looked at me understandingly and sympathetically at the same time. Before he had a chance to reply I excused myself on the pretence of going for a hunt and speed out the door as fast as I could, I knew they wouldn't follow me, I knew that they knew I needed some space. So I ran and ran until I smelt mountain lion, my favourite. It wasn't long before the mountain lions body laid at my feet.
I didn't want to go home yet so I headed to my meadow. My meadow was the only place I could be truly alone, no-one there, no voices in my head it was peaceful my little piece of heaven the closest I would get to heaven. I was dammed to this eternal hell as a monster to never find or be loved, to be alone the rest of my life. I was just lying on the grass enjoying the peace when I heard "I'm a Barbie girl, in the Barbie world, Life in plastic, its fantastic!" Alice I groaned as picked up the phone
"What?" I snapped I was not in the mood for my too energetic sister.
"Well hello grumpy, who ate your goody? "She asked I just growled don the phone to her.
"Ok,Ok, but I need a favour and before you say no I know you will do it but you will just avoid a lot of time and annoyance" she said in one breath .
"Fine what is it" I sighed giving up.
"Excellent so I need you to go to town and pick up a few things that I ordered in Mays boutique and bring back to the house just tell them Alice sent you and they will give you the bags so thanks, bye see you later" she then hung up. Great I said to myself as I got up from the ground and made my way to the house to collect my car first, I could run but I didn't want to run with god only knows how many bags for Alice.
I made my way to Seattle ignoring any speed limit, I had a built inn cop detector so I was good. I just wanted to get back to my meadow as soon as possible. I parked my car next to mays boutique and went into the store and approached the young girl behind the counter "Oh my God he is so hot, maybe I could get his number….." I tuned out of her mind not wanting to listen to her plans to get me into bed.
"Excuse me, I'm here to collect an order for my sister Alice Cullen please "I say uninterested but still try to stay polite as possible. Thank god she got the hint and she went to get the order as quickly as possible and handed them to me over the counter without a word. I took the many bags from her with a thank you and left the store.
As I was putting the many number of bags into the back of the car I felt something fall on my face, it was snowing. I liked the view of the city under a blanket of snow. As I closed the back door I heard a faint whimper, normally I would just ignore it but something inside told me I should not ignore it I locked my car and went in the direction the noise came from.
As I entered a narrow alleyway I smelt the most appetising sent I have ever smelt. I scanned the alleyway for the source of the scent and sure enough there was a young girl lying against the wall of the building. Her long brown hair was covering her face. I started walking towards the girl and the smell got stronger and stronger. I tried to resist the urge to kill her and taste her delicious blood. I just kept thinking of how disappointed Carlisle would be in me if I gave into my urges. As I got closer I could hear her heartbeat , it was barely there I don't know why I was so suddenly worried about this strange girl but I rushed to her side, her skin was so cold and pale. I removed her hair from her face and noticed that her lips were blue. I suddenly had the urge to stroke her cheek and when I did I felt some sort of spark run through me, it felt like a fire had awoken inside me. I knew from that moment that I needed to protect this girl, needed to get her to Carlisle as fast as possible.
I scooped the small fragile girl up in my arms and bought her to my car and lay her own in the back and quickly speed off beating even my speed record to get home. Carlisle I shouted as I picked up the girl from my back seat and ran into the house straight to his office. "What is it son?" he asked worriedly as he got up from behind his desk. He then noticed the small girl in my hands and pointed to the examination table. I lay her down on the table and stepped back to let Carlisle do his job.
"What happened to her?" he asked me as he began to examine her.
"I'm not sure I found her lying in the snow in the middle of an alleyway, I couldn't leave her there to die, please tell me she will be ok?" I asked panicky, Carlisle looked up at me confusion evident in his mind about my worry for this girl. " I don't know its mild hyperthermia we need to warm her up to make her heart beat faster" before he even finished his sentence I had gathered as many blankets as I could and draped them over her . "And now we wait "Carlisle said
I stayed with her for our listening to her heart get stronger and stronger and eventually Carlisle was able to properly examine her. When he lifted up her I almost growled, her stomach was covered in bruises and scars ranging in sizes "what has this girl gone through" Carlisle thought to himself. As he pushed in on one bruise the girl began to moan in pain. I was by her side in an instant stroking her forehead whispering reassuring words in her ear trying to make her feel better in any why I could. "Her ribs are broken but I need to get an x-ray to be sure he said I think I will give her a sedative will I do the rest of the exam" he said as he injected the sedative into her arm. Her breathing become more shallow as the sedative began to work and she feel into a peaceful sleep while Carlisle finished his examination
I sat next to her holding her hand as Carlisle finished his examination just staring at the beauty that lay before me when I was interrupted by Carlisle shocked voice "oh my God her …
So what do you think my first attempt of EPOV and a cliff-hanger let me know what you think.