Replies for chapter 10's reviews:

Kaleigh: you said- Thanks for updating so quickly!! Interesting twist to the story. I can't wait to see what happens next! P.S.- Will you write Jared's or Ian's POV for when they're buying clothes?

Thank you. I'm glad you liked the twist. In answer to your question..yes I will…when will I? …this chapter :D

Emma: you said- I didn't expect the whole thing about Maudy. It is interesting though. I'm definitely reading more. How many chapters are you planning on writing?

What's funny is I didn't expect it either. I'm serious when i say that the story basically slips through my fingertips. I'm not sure how many I know for sure that this story isn't ending anytime soon.

Zoe: you said- Cool! Loved the whole new thing with Maudy. It makes the whole story more interesting and not foreshadowing. I thought that Mel and wanda were just going to buy dresses then get out.

I love foreshadowing but I suck at I always give away everything instead of just bits and pieces. And like I said to Emma, the way a chapter turns out is always unexpected to me…because I don't really think it through I just go with the flow. I intended for Mel and wanda just to buy dresses..but then I came up with a different idea… and maudy just sort of ended up being the character that is going to help me follow through with my idea.

Sophy : you said-Hit definitely for me! I love your writing style. Have you written fanfiction for any other books like Twilight?

Thanks for the hit! Yes I have written fanfiction for the twilight series…one is called "There is a first for everything" and the other is "Chemistry."

I would love it if you read them…and leave a word or two telling me if you liked them as much as you like inseparable. *batts eyelashes pleadingly*

Dani: you said-I really liked the whole Maudy part because I didn't expect that. Please write again this week! PLEASE!

AAA… I'm so glad you liked the maudy part…I was a little nervous people would think it was stupid. I'm writing again this week :D

Kate: you said- Hit hit hit if you ask me. Loved it! I love reading your fanfiction because Stephenie Meyer still hasn't written the sequel to the Host! I'm waiting for her next book and your next chapter (hopefully this week).

Thank you so much! I hope she writes a sequel too…but I hope it's after I finish most of this story because I don't think I could write this story if she came out with her sequel. I just wouldn't be able to compete with her.

Mia: you said- Please update your story this week!! Sorry I'm not more informative but I do have to say that I check every day to see if you've updated your story! Love it!

Just telling me you love my story is informative ENOUGH! So don't worry about it just the fact that you took a few minutes to give me a review is satisfying enough.

Allison: you said- My friend Mia told me to check out your story cause I'm a Host obsessor. I can read almost any fanfiction on the host. Yours is one of my favorites. I hope you get to 200 reviews so your writing is appreciated and so that all of host obsessors out there who are in love with your story (like me) will get to know more.

I'm so glad im fueling your obsession for the host!! Wow I'm really touched that people are telling their friends to read my story. And the fact that my story is one of your favorites…that just kicked my self esteem up a notch! Thank you!

Hayleigh: you said-Wow! I love this story! I just read it today for the first time because my friend recommended it. It's awesome! Please update it soon! A lot of people like me are waiting!

aaaah I'm loving the fact that people are recommending my story! That just makes my life! I'll try to limit the wait!

Meggie: you said- I always wondered what Ian and Wanda's everyday life was like, too. I'm glad that I can guess thanks to your story. I'm not very imaginative. but your story is so good! I would do more exclamation marks but I don't have the time. I can't wait for your next chapter.

Hehe..i'll do exclamation for you..because you took the time to write me a review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm glad I can help you guess…I never thought I was imaginative…but then I found fanfiction and like the site says "unleash your imagination" and that's exactly what it did for me atleast.

Thanks for the review!

Meggi115: you said- OMG! We need to know what happens next! That chapter was amazing!

I'm glad you think it's amazing! Thank you for reviewing

Ms cullenblackoshea: you said- i love this story please continue...i am on alert when you do i want to know wanda surprise and more about maudy...

I love your review. It tells me exactly what you want to know in my story…you'll definetly get a little more maudy and wanda surprise will be revealed in due time.

X-abbi-X: you said-omg! This story is zoo amazing ! I dont actually have a fanfiction account but I love the host ( and Ian of course ) so I decided to check it out. These chapters are soo great and they are really well written. O and by the way you asked a couple of chapters ago if anyone reads the authors notes and I can't speak for anyone else when I say this but I always read them :) keep the great chapters coming :)

Thank you thank you thank you, you're making me blush with all the praise. I think you might be the only one that reads my authors notes because you're the only one that addressed the question I asked. So thank you for reading my notes…and FOR LOVING THIS STORY…and for reviewing!

A/N:

So … the whole I need 200 reviews before I update this week was a pretty absurd request on my part. I realized that after I posted the chapter up. Despite my cruelty you guys reviewed abundantly and I'm so thankful because you made my week better. The explanation of why my week wasn't so great is in the bottom author's note.

I'm really glad you guys liked Maudy and her story… I was a little nervous about that.

Let me clear something up before I let you guys read chapter 11. Ian and Wanda are the main focus of this story. So don't worry when Ian disappears for a chapter…because HE will always comeback! I love him and the main reason I'm writing this story is because when I read the Host there wasn't enough Ian in it and I NEEDED MORE OF HIM.

One more thing...i will be updating atleast once a week from now on.

Drum roll please….

Because here is what you've all been waiting so patiently for... ;)

Disclaimer: Anything you recognize is not owned by me!

Chapter eleven

-IPOV-

"Be safe" I whispered.

Wanda rolled her eyes, mockingly. She brushed her lips against mine. I tried to deepen the kiss, but she pulled away and started giggling.

"Bye, Ian." She said ecstatically and bounded out of the car.

I closed the door, and Jared stepped on the gas. Wanda waved, and I kept my eyes locked on her retreating figure. We turned the corner and I could no longer see her or the store. I sighed and turned my craned neck back to face the front.

"So how far is the Men's wearhouse from the store?" I inquired, hoping that it was close enough.

Jared chuckled shaking his head backing and forth. "Relax, Ian. It's only 5 miles away."

I nodded with satisfaction and slumped back into the seat.

After about 10 minutes we drove into yet another parking lot. Except this one actually had several cars in it.

We got out of the car and walked confidently through the glass doors, below the Men's Wearhouse sign.

A blast of cool air hit our overheated bodies. It felt like we just came out of the oven and stepped into a freezer.

The store was packed with racks full of suits draped over silver metal hangers. It dawned on me that this wouldn't take as long as I'd hoped it would. What were we going to do with ourselves after we finished and had to wait for the girls to finish their shopping? I sighed in dismay.

I didn't get a chance to dwell on my thoughts for long, because I noticed a sales man walking up to us.

Act natural. I reminded myself.

I felt really uncomfortable around souls, excluding Wanda of course because she was more human than anyone I knew. I just wish she'd see herself that way.

"Hi I'm Grazing the Grass. What can I help you with today?" the sales man said.

I cleared my throat, giving me enough time to come up with suitable names for Jared and me.

Remember your manners. Wanda's voice floated into my head. I had to slightly shake my head to keep myself from swooning at the sound of her voice. The day before yesterday, she had sat me down and gone through an entire list of things I needed to do in order to act like a soul.

"Nice to meet you, Grazing the Grass. I'm Burns Living Flowers and this is my friend Ride a Horse." I said shaking his outreached hand.

Jared shot me a look. I had to stifle the guffaw that wanted to erupt from my lips.

"Well, it's a pleasure to meet you. Now what exactly are you looking for." He asked in a serious business tone.

"I'm getting married." Jared stated through clenched teeth.

Damn. I wish I never pissed him off, because now his attitude could give us away.

"So, we need tuxedos." I added in a friendlier tone.

"Very well, then." Grazing the Grass replied, as he turned on his heal and walked towards the back corner of the store.

"Jared, what the hell was that? Are you trying to blow are cover?" I hissed.

"I should be asking you the same thing. 'Riding a Horse'?" he snapped.

"I panicked okay. Shit, I'm sorry that I couldn't come up with a better one on the spot." I defended myself.

Jared sighed. "Yea. I know I would've thought of something worst. Just don't tell Mel. Okay? She won't let me forget it, if she found out."

I smiled mischievously for a moment, before replacing it with a serious expression. "I won't." I reassured.

Grazing the Grass walked back with a tux in his hand. He held it up so that we could examine it. "How's this?" He asked Jared.

"I'm not picky. This one looks like something I'd wear." Jared responded, in an indifferent but kind tone.

"Alright then go try it on and see if this is your size." Grazing the Grass ordered.

Then he looked at me studiously.

Before he could turn and walk away, I said. "If you don't mind, do you think you have a tux that I could wear as best man and then later as a groom?"

He tapped his chin thoughtfully for a mere second, nodded, then turned around and walked away.

I glanced down at my watch; it had only been 20 minutes. I groaned. I needed time to go faster so that I could see Wanda and hold her safe in my arms.

When I looked back up, Jared stepped out of the fitting room.

"What do you think?" he said mockingly, spreading his arms out like the girls who present the showcases on Price's Right.

"It's so you. I think this might be the one." I gushed sarcastically.

"I think you're right Burns Living Flowers." Grazing the Grass said as he walked over with another tux in his hand.

I had to keep my jaw from dropping and my chuckling under control. He thought I was serious?!

"Here is yours. This is a perfect for a best man as well as for a groom." He stated matter-of-factly.

His business like tone and his seriousness was getting too much for me to handle. God, souls had no personality. I don't see how Wanda associates herself as one.

I took the tuxedo from his hand and walked into the fitting room next to Jared's.

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"So what was that nonsense GG was sputtering about your tux being perfect for a best man and a groom?" Jared asked as he shifted gears.

After I had come out of the dressing room, Grazing the Grass, or GG as Jared called him, had approved of it. Then we had quickly payed for the suits and got our asses out of there before you could say 'Burns living Flowers.'

"I don't know" I replied shrugging off Jared's observation.

"Well, whatever his reason, he got me thinking. And no pressure dude, but when are you planning to tie the knot with Wanda?" he questioned.

I could answer this one truthfully, so I replied. "When she is ready."

He nodded in agreement.

My mind quickly digressed and began to wonder if Mel had figured it out yet. I wanted to call them and ask if they were done. My body was aching to hold Wanda. My heart was hurting even more, because without her in my embrace I didn't know if she was safe.

As if reading my mind, Jared said "Let's call them and find out if they're done yet. It has been an hour and a half."

I tried nodding indifferently, but I knew you could see the eagerness sketched across my face.

Jared laughed, "She better be ready soon, because you can't live a second without her."

Then he picked up his cell and pressed the '1' key, speed dialing Mel's number.

A/N: Sorry it's short. It took me a while, because I'm starting to get writers block. I know where this story is heading I just don't know how to get it there exactly…these chapters are basically writing themselves out spontaneously.

Also the other reason this is short…is because this week is really hard for me. My favorite teacher just passed away due to reoccurring cancer. He was supposed to live another week. I found out over the weekend and it was just a big shock. My entire school is in a really depressed mood, but we had a snow day yesterday and today… so it helped me recover a little.

Okay…well I hope I satisfied all of the people who wanted Ian and Jared's shopping trip scene.

As always review….

And I will send you a sneek peak if you do.

p.s. If you guys are fans of twilight...i would love if you read my stories "Chemistry" and "There's a first for everything" and i would LOVE it even more if you reviewed them and told me if you liked it as much as this story or not!

xoxo

rmla

**wanda's wedding dress poll is still running!**