Yo! Glad that you guys could make it. Chapter 4's commentary start! Oh and as always, please read my fanfic, SPHR first. This fanfic here is a commentary and dumps for the said fanfic.
We start off with Robbie and Weiss having a small talk as they both going to meet up with Ruby for a little something. A little playful moment in Weiss' part which is totally OOC for her.
They both reached Ruby and we then introduced to Robbie's new weapon; a pair of blade styled after a Chinese scimitar that combines into a bow. I forgot to mention this in Chapter 1's commentary that the arrow made out of Dust energy that Robbie summoned with his previous bow as well as his new bow/blade is inspired by the Epirus bow from the movie Immortals. As for the name of the new weapon, it is named after a flower Forget-me-not (scientific name: Myosotis arvensis). Since most weapons in RWBY is named after a flower, I've decided to follow suits.
The story book that was mentioned in this chapter is a reference to a poem by an English poet named Keith Douglas (1920-1944) called 'Vergissmeinnicht' (German for forget-me-not).
The next morning arrives and Robbie's going out to try his new weapon. A mention of something called Shining Rose, which is a new weapon for Ruby. Crescent Rose is definitely the coolest weapon in RWBY, but it's been 10 years so it's not that odd for Ruby to make a new weapon for herself. I have an idea for how it's going to be like (still a scythe/sniper rifle combo but with something more), though I'm open for ideas.
Then a new major OC, who I will talk about later in Chapter 7's commentary.
This chapter's OTR is actually a text-message styled conversation between Weiss and Blake, who have yet to make an appearance. And what's the deal with Yang, you asked? You guys just gonna have to wait a little longer. Sorry. Also, no deleted scene and parts.