Hey guys. I see that you've finally made your way here. Ready for for Chapter 6's commentary?

Oh and as always, please my fanfic SPHR first if you haven't. This fanfic is a commentary and dumps for that fanfic.

The chapter begins with Robbie's dreaming of his past. Specifically when he was 4 years old. An introduction and description of Robbie's 'parents', Peter and Jane is made here. The reason why the 4 years old Robbie refers to archer as arrow is because I wanted to try to accurately portrays a childish personality of a 4 years old kid. After that we are introduced to this Aunt Sandy who Robbie have mention in Chapter 4. More secrets about this Aunt Sandy will be revealed in the future chapters.

The dream ends, Robbie wakes up, and then get stuffs ready for breakfast. We're then greeted with another flashback of Robbie's past. Just a heads-up, you'll be seeing quite a number of flashbacks in the future chapters as well as dreams of Robbie's childhood. What's the difference? Well the dreams focuses on the time before the death of Peter and Jane and are in chronological order while the flashback focuses on the time after the death of Peter and Jane and are not in chronological order.

Anyway, onto the flashback. This 13 years old Robbie somehow ends up on a orphanage called Yomogi Happy House and it is run by a woman, a minor character named Sayaka Okiura. She is based of the same Sayaka Okiura from the anime Kobato. A wonderful anime if I do say so myself. This isn't going to be her only appearance. She's going to appear again in flashback and in current timeline.

Robbie leaves, and meet up with some shopkeeper named Andrew Henry Irons. His appearance (as described in the same chapter) is based of Egil from Sword Art Online. He is named after Egil's real name and John Henry Irons a.k.a. Steel from DC Comics. The Grimm bones that they both talking about is the one Robbie rips off from Big Bad back in Chapter 5. Robbie's gonna use those bones for something.

After leaving the Armory, we then meet up with another character named Rusty. If you watched X-Ray & Vav, then I don't have to tell you anything about this one. It seem like Robbie have left something behind. A black scroll, Veda which is based on a real life generic smartphones. This scroll, shown by Robbie later in the very same chapter, isn't just some ordinary scroll. It's capable of hacking into electronics kinda like the smartphone from the video game WATCH_DOGS. How did he get his hands on this scroll? I get tired of saying this, but you guys just gonna have to find out in the future chapters. Oh, and the name Veda is Sanskrit for 'knowledge'. I got the idea for the name from one of my favorite anime Gundam 00.

Now onto CCT Tower infiltration. Originally the infiltration is suppose to take place in the future chapters. Specifically a few weeks after the Initiation. But I felt like I've been holding out way too much. So I've decided add it to this chapter. I'm still planning to have Robbie doing another infiltration in the future. Anyway, the CCT after 10 years is no longer the place where people make long distance call, normal or with video. When I think about it, the way the CCT is portrayed in the show is like some kind of a super fancy payphone without the paying part. Please tell me I'm not the only one who thinks that.

As Robbie begins his search, you have notice the name 'Sustrai' being thrown in. Just a little tease. I'll let you guys figure out what that means.

The citizen profile is my way of teasing a little backstory of Ruby, Jaune, Pyrrha and Shirayuki (who I've introduced in Chapter 3) in this fanfic. I referred to RWBY Wikia for Ruby's profile, as well as Jaune's and Pyrrha's. I also made some changes in their respective infos to match their future appearances. If you have any question regarding the profiles, or something similar, feel free to ask me.

Back to Ruby's apartment where Ruby has a small surprise for Robbie. This is where I introduced Robbie's symbol which is actually the symbol of Lockhood's family. I had a bit of trouble when trying to come up with an idea for Robbie's symbol. I want it to be related to archery, but at the same time I don't want it to be way too simple. In the end, I gave up and decide to go with whatever that work. A simple looking arrowhead (based off the one used as a logo for CW's Arrow Season 1 and 2). The keyhole is kinda related to the lock in 'Lockhood'. I know. Lame.

And now we go to the main event; the villains. There are 4 of them in total. They are Anansi Bedrieër, Tamamo Sodaina, Hela Lucky, and Fenrir Lucky.

Anansi is named after Anansi the Spider from the African folklore. The name Bedrieër is Afrikaans for trickster or deceiver. His appearance as described in this chapter is based off Doctor Facilier from Disney's The Princess and The Frog. His speech style, I based it off Dibala, an African dictator from the 4th episode of House Season 6, as portrayed by James Earl Jones. I would have stick with Keith David's portrayal of Facilier, but James Earl Jones, man. James. Earl. Jones.

Tamamo is named after Tamamo-no-Mae, a legendary figure in Japanese mythology. In Otogizoshi, Tamamo was a courtesan who turns out to be a nine-tailed fox; a kitsune (good fox spirit) or a nogitsune (malicious fox spirit), depending on the version of the story told. The name Sodaina is based off Japanese word Sōdaina (壮大な) meaning magnificent, grand, or brilliant. Her being a fox Faunus is an obvious nod to Tamamo-no-Mae being a fox spirit. Her outfit is meant to (more or less) reflects the image of Japanese courtesan of the Heian period.

Now the twins, Hela and Fenrir Lucky. This twins are based off Loki, the God of Mischief from the Norse mythology. Hela is basically the female version of Loki while Fenrir is pretty much Tom Hiddleston. Hela is named after Hel, Loki's daughter. Fenrir is named after Loki's son, Fenrir. Their last name Lucky is a pun to the name Loki. In the myth, Fenrir is depicted as a monstrous wolf. Some of you who knows your Norse myth probably expecting Fenrir to be a wolf Faunus. Well that's not gonna happen because 1) I've already planned another major OC as a wolf Faunus, and 2) I want the OC villains of mine to be exclusively human, except for Tamamo. I have plans for her.

The next day arrives and we finally set to see Beacon. But not until the next chapter. Aaaand, end chapter. This is the first chapter of this fanfic to be the longest, and the record is already broken by the next chapter.

This chapter's OTR is a newspaper snippet featuring Blake making a statement regarding the event in the first chapter. I will admit that Blake being the Chief of Police at the age of 27 does seems somewhat unbelievable. Not that it matter. And in case you guys haven't know, that last name for Coco, Adel is legit. In fact, the rest of CFVY's last name has been revealed; Fox Alistair, and Yatsuhashi Daichi.

And that's the end of the commentary. See you guys in the next commentary.