Quick chapter, I'll put the next one up in a bit cause this is so short.
AN DA RLLY SOUT CHAPTA (So, do you like shout your chapters? Because, it seems to me you usually have everything capitalized) THT IS PROMISED
"Iz she dead?" asked Olive. (I hope to god she is. That would make this story so much more enjoyable)
"YESSSSSSS!" screened Jorge.(George. And, I hope your right)
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" screamed fred.
SUSPENSE (Wow, I'm in such a state of wonder…)