Kiitsu: i quite like what i did with this jutsu. Somehow i think i could have done better but i'm posting it anyways! Just to make sure you guys didn't get confused. Chapter 11 is in fact a new that i posted 2 days ago. See i deleted the AN chapter cause i didn't need it anymore and posted a new chapter which may have made it seem like oh she just reposted the chapter she posted last week. Nope. Its new. So make sure you read it or you'll be confused as hell.

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Kiitsu: Ah yes, thank you Naruto. So i have now posted 6 chapters in the past week. no reviews :( can i get a little bit of incentive here? Please? So yeah Read AND REVIEW!

Chapter 12

Nikiya waited in a clearing well outside the village. Her eyes were closed while she watched Tenten's chakra signature come closer and closer. A small, red scroll rested in her shaking hand. In the other hand, she held a bloody kunai. Her thumb was bleeding more onto the blade. "Hurry up, Tenten." She murmured desperately. '5, 4, 3, 2' she thought before pulling the scroll open and writing furiously on it with her blood. Just as she shut the scroll and made the proper hand signs over it, Tenten burst through the trees.

"They're right behind me." Tenten panted. Eight cloaked shinobi came through the branches. "More showed up along the way." She explained, shifting into a fighting position. She glanced at Nikiya to see what she was doing. "NO!" she yelled just as Nikiya's eyes opened. They were red with three black markings.

Tenten would never be able to explain what she saw next. One moment, Nikiya was standing there, red eyes staring into the eyes of her opponents standing across from her. The next moment, there was a flash of bright red light and Nikiya was hanging over a tree branch unconscious with all eight of her opponents on the ground. Nikiya and the cloaked men had been torn to shreds by some unseen force.

Tenten fell to her knees in shock. She barely noticed when Gai-sensei came to her and wrapped her in his arms. She hadn't even noticed that she was crying.

"Tenten, what happened here?" Tenten vaguely heard Tsunade's voice ask.

"I don't know. Nikiya had this scroll. She has the Sharingan! She… She disappeared and a moment later this is what I saw!" Tenten's eyes were wide. She was slowly pushing through the fog of shock. She wiped her tears away and ran to Nikiya. Kakashi had picked her up off of the tree branch and brought her down carefully.

"What did the scroll look like?" Kakashi asked, checking for Nikiya's pulse.

"It was red. No markings." Shikamaru replied. "Tenten told me about it once. Said Gai-sensei had given it to her. With the troublesome situation I thought maybe it would help."

"Gai… you gave Tenten the scroll that Nikiya gave to you?" Kakashi asked carefully. "You do realize that she gave that to you because I told her to so that she wouldn't use it?"

"I never gave Tenten any scroll! Especially not that one! It disappeared a couple days ago." Gai explained.

"Yeah Gai-sensei never gave me any scroll. And I haven't talked to you, well besides today, in a week, Shikamaru." Tenten said, her eyes wide.

"Well, thankfully, she's alive, but just barely. Tsunade, you need to heal some of this now or she'll die." Kakashi said with a heavy sigh. His eyes clearly showed worry.

Tsunade visibly shuddered when she saw the blood flowing from Nikiya's wounds. She healed the worst of it quickly and stood back up. "Take her to the hospital. The rest can be healed by normal medics. Tell them they should do a bit of chakra therapy as well. Her chakra is nearly gone.

"What did that scroll do?" Shikamaru asked.

"I'm not entirely sure." Kakashi said softly. "She never gave me details. I don't think she even knew herself the full extent of it. I'm sure she'll tell us when she wakes up. For now, Gai, take Shikamaru and find that scroll if you can. When you find it, take it to me so I can examine it." He picked Nikiya up carefully and started towards the hospital.

Shikamaru looked over at Tenten. She was now standing though still shaking. Something that she had seen had scared her horribly. He knew from experience that Tenten wasn't scared by much so that jutsu must have been a truly horrible sight. Even the aftermath was a bit scary to him though, so it may have just been seeing eight clearly experienced shinobi suddenly being turned into torn up pieces of meat.

"Gai-sensei, help me check if any are alive. If there are, we should take them back for questioning. I want to know why these people were after us." Tenten said while walking over to the closest of the bodies. Shikamaru helped as well. On the last body, he felt a pulse. It was slight, but it was a possibility that the shinobi was alive.

"Tenten, take this one back to the village. I'll help look for the scroll since I know what it looks like." Shikamaru said, moving away from the body. Tenten nodded before picking it up carefully and running towards the village.

"How the hell does a scroll like that just disappear?!" Gai yelled suddenly after nearly a half an hour of searching.

Shikamaru sighed and muttered "Troublesome," before looking around cautiously. "You feel that?" he asked. "Chakra signature. That way." He pointed through the trees.

Gai looked up and crouched into a fighting stance. "It feels familiar but get ready for a fight just in case." He said. Shikamaru nodded and got ready as well.

Shikamaru saw a flash of pink before Sakura suddenly stopped in front of them. "Damn, Sakura, make sure we know you're coming somehow! You had us ready for a fight! So troublesome!" he said, placing his hands in his pockets.

"Sorry. Kakashi-sensei sent me to come get you guys. Tsunade-sama has sent a few shinobi out to clean up this mess and apparently one of the medics found the scroll that you were looking for somewhere on Nikiya. You're to report to Tsunade-sama as soon as you can. Kakashi-sensei will be waiting there for you as well. I need to get back to the medics and help with Nikiya. She's still in critical condition." Sakura explained quickly before running back towards the village.

Gai looked over at Shikamaru with a confused look on his face. "Let's get going." Shikamaru said before jumping after Sakura. Gai followed closely.

Nikiya opened the scroll and wrote her name in blood across it before shutting it and making hand signs. She ignored Tenten for the most part, glancing at her once after activating her sharingan to make sure that she was okay. She looked back to her opponents and waited, she could feel energy flowing through her. "Please, you promised me that if I signed you would come." She murmured.

Nikiya barely heard Tenten scream "No!" before a jolt of chakra was sent through her and she was thrown into the air. She looked down and saw the dark blue that streaked her hair on the scales of a huge dragon. It flew lazily through the sky as it watched the events below

"Who is it that calls me? I never agreed to this!" she heard echo through her mind. Far below, she could see a blue light over her body. Multiple other dragons, smaller, but looking just like the one that she stood on, were tearing her enemies apart, yet the shinobi weren't moving at all. Not even Tenten was moving.

"Leave one." Nikiya ordered. The dragon beneath her roared and the smaller ones left one of the shinobi behind before moving towards Nikiya's body. "Wait! That's me!" she called just as they made it to her.

"Then fight them off." The dragon said with a chuckle.

Nikiya focused chakra into her hand and slapped the dragon on the head before jumping down. The chakra formed a string to the dragon and allowed her to lower herself down safely. She didn't know if in this strange form she seemed to have if she would be safe just jumping. "Stop!" she ordered the smaller dragons. They started to shift past her but she punched one on the nose. "I said stop." She growled. It shook its head back as if insulted. Nikiya began to feel the extra drain on her chakra which meant the time for this summon was at its end. She looked at her body which was hanging on a tree branch. "Now why'd you go and do that?" she asked just before she grabbed her own hand and melded back into her body.

"We will leave our mark. Do not summon us without good reason." Nikiya heard as she receded into darkness.

Kiitsu: yes i have a little bit of an obsession with dragons. not sure if i did well at all on that. but i leave some of the detailing up to you as all people tend to see dragons differently as shown with the idiocy of the Feathered Dragon in the Eragon movie O.o and he even specified detailing on that! not a feather in sight in that book. Anyways back to Naruto story. Hope you like it i already have like half of another chapter ready to go so i don't have too much more to write before another update. Just REVIEW PLEASE!