Hey guys I'm so sorry I haven't been on for about a month now! With the start of school and the whole pressure of grades and such I just haven't found any time to write anything. It's nothing any one did (unless you are my asshole teachers) I just am not very good at managing my time. I hope that I can start writing this again but I have no guaranties on how often I will be able to update with basketball starting soon, but I promise to do my best! I also wanted to answer a few questions…
Kaylinthehuman- I guess that I didn't really like the idea of Shruikan being just Galbatorix's slave, after reading so much about how powerful and majestic the dragons were, it just didn't seem right. Another answer to that is as Galbatorix's daughter, Kyana grew up around Shruikan and no matter how orderly she might act she was once just a little kid that Galbatorix kept hidden. I figured that after having a little girl to chase around he just wasn't as mentally messed up because she was always there.
Mandpandt- I plan on Murtagh coming back into the story. I hope after this chapter the reason he was gone for a bit makes more since. (I really just didn't know how to write him when Galbatorix was training him so I decided that he would be hidden especially when Azeilia and her father were in town.)
Skullkitty: I wanted to first say thank you for the editing, this is the first thing I have ever not written in the first person so I guess you can say it is kind of a attempt on how this would work with my personal writing style. Thank you for pointing out anything confusing, it really helps, like a lot. I would love to take you up on being my Beta, I really could use any form of help. Don't worry, I didn't take it as a bash at all! This is my first semi-good story, (at least to some of you) and I really don't know what I am doing!
I hope that I can actually update this week and get back into the mode of things.
But I love you guys and all the support I get from each of you, I never thought so many people would find something that I thought of in five minutes so interesting. I really don't get what you like, this story sucks but hey I'm not here to judge.
Hope to be back soon, and for real this time. 3