Okay guys, I wanna know if I continue the story or no . Tell me if it is good or bad , and please guys tell me what you think about my story and my other characters, and if someone got an idea I would not neglect it. please please just please review

Okay guys, I wanna know if I continue the story or no . Tell me if it is good or bad , and please guys tell me what you think about my story and my other characters, and if someone got an idea I would not neglect it. please please just please review
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