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NOW HAVE A HAPPY READING…
Abhijeet pauses for a moment cherishing that beautiful day or better to say reminding his brother's that so pure genuine reaction…. Divyana starts shouting in her childish language…. Hawwww Papaaaaa….. Chachu ko kya ho gaya? She starts jerking her Dad's sleeve of t-shirt stubbornly…. Papaaaaa bolo naaaa…. Chachu ko kya hua tha? Woh kiun chock ho gaye! Pappaaaa….
Abhijeet smiles in his mind seeing her excitement regarding the Birthday Story but thinks at the same time to do a l'll masti with his tiny toddler. He looks at his daughter for once and feeds a spoonful of Upma to Aditi as looking the time he arranges kids' breakfast in garden during the story telling session.
He neither answers Divyana nor gives attention… instead of tries to feed l'll Viva who involves in playing… grabbing the sunrays in her chotu sa palms!
That negligence makes Divyana more desperate. She again initiates her shout…. Papaaaaa…. Bolo naaaa…. Abhijeet quickly pushes a spoonful of breakfast in her mouth with a naughty glance.
Divyana gets too much irritate & making a grave cute angry face, starting chews….. While other two fairies enjoying the whole scenario with giggling!
Abhijeet twists his daughter's nose…. Humesha harbari rehta hain nah tumhe! Thora sans toh lene do Papa ko beta. Tab se khilane ka koshish kar raha hoon, tum ek spoon bhi aab tak thik se khaye nehi… dekho Aditi aur Vivu achhe bachhe ban ke fatafat nasta finish kar li. Aur tum…. aab Chachu kiun TV dekh ke chup ho gaye, woh janna zaroori ho gaya lekin Papa kab se nasta de raha hain…. aur tum kha hi nehi rahi ho, uska kya!
In reply Divyana looks another side with a cute si huhhhh!
Abhijeet laughs at his doll's gesture. He places the food plate on front tea-table and pats her cheek softly & makes Divyana looks at him…. Kya meri nanhi si Divya ko bhukh nehi aaj? He asks lovingly.
Lekin Chachu…..! Unhe kya hua…. woh toh aap bol hi nehi lahe ho… aul mujhe dant lahe ho. main Chachu ko bataungi, aap mujhe danten ho. Divya again looks other side showing her anger.
Bilkul apna Chachu pe gayi hain nautanki main… while thinking in mind, Abhijeet repeats his action but this time l'll dramatically…. He grabs his own ears and says an innocent sorry…. Which gives satisfaction to his drama queen daughter…. Divya smiles broad on her Dad's action and snuggles more to her safe shelter…. Aab bologe na Papa, Chachu ko kya hua tha?
Abhijeet caringly: haan beta kahani toh zaroor sunaunga. Lekin nasta karna bhi toh zaroori hain nah. Mamma aur Chachi ko pata chale agar, ke unke betiyan thik se nehi khaye, unhe achha lagega? Aur aap khaoge nehi toh Papa bhi toh nehi khayenge na…. aap ko Papa ko bhukha rakhna hain?
Divyana nods her head in pendulum order making a sweet sad face.
Abhijeet just picks the chance: toh beta, apke beheno ne pura nasta finish kar li. Aap bhi kha lo. Aur kahani suno. Thik?
Viva and Aditi also join their sister this time and start demanding for further birthday story.
Abhijeet sips his late morning tea and again continues….
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Flashback
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A well-mannered corporate dressed news reader appeared on TV screen after finished the commercial break.
With a glowing face she started announcing professionally…. Aab aaj ka Shanshani Khas Khabar darshakon apke samne. Aaj hain 11th December. Aap sab soch rahe honge, aaj ka date main hain kya itna khas? Toh main aap logo ka curiosity khatam karne jaa rahi hoon. Aaj kisi khas insaan ka birthday hain. Jee haan, aaj humare Mumbai police ke bahat hi jane mane ek janbaaz officer (small pause) CID ka senior inspector Daya ka birthday hain. Jee haan darshakon, aap sahi soch rahe hain, yeh wohi Senior Inspector Daya hain… ACP Pradyuman ka CID team ka ek bahat hi ahem hissa… jinke naam se hi mujrim kamp uthte hain…. jinhe ACP Pradyuman ka team ka dono sabse majboot hathon me se ek mana jata hain.
Some pictures of Daya came on screen randomly.
The news reader again started…. Lekin jayse aap sab jante hain, do din pahele ek human trafficking gang ke sath encounter ke dauran Senior Inspector Daya ko goli laga tha aur phil-haal wo hospital me admit hain (her voice turned low & slow with a perfect professionalism). Lekin darshakon, jinke liye yeh bahadur police officer apne jaan jokhim me daal ke na jane kitne sare masoom insaan ko trafficking ke khatarnak changul se bachaye hain…. wohi Mumbai ke aur sath hi sath humare pure desh ke lakhon-karoron logo ke dua se aab woh khatra se bahar hain.
Aur iss khushi ko celebrate karne ke liye uss saks aaj humare bich maujood hain…. jinhe Senior Inspector Daya ka counterpart kaha jata hain… unka sabse khas dost, jinhe woh apna bhai mante hain…. wohi Senior Inspector Abhijeet aur Daya sir ka pita saman ACP Pradyuman…. Aaj humare channel ke zariye unhe janamdin ka badhai de rahe hain. Aiye dekhte hain….
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A sunny open place came on screen looked like some parking lot. Slowly camera panned on Daya's most desired figure… Abhijeet stood there with his as usual dashing formal coat avtar and beside him ACP sir also was standing. A reporter held his mike in front of ACP Pradyuman with… Sir, aaj apke team ka bahat hi khas hissa ka janamdin hain. Iss absar me aap kya bolna chahenge?
ACP sir looked Abhijeet from corner of his eyes. Nehi, aaj main nehi…. Daya ko paheli badhai uska bhai hi dega… he told humbly.
Reporter changed his mike position smilingly.
Abhijeet thanked ACP sir by eyes. He started with so much soothing way…. Daya… mujhe pata hain, tum hospital me baythke yeh dekh rahe ho. Mujhe aaj jada kuch nehi kehna mere bhai. Tum bas zaldi se thik ho jao. Wish you a very very very Happy Biddday Daya….. followed by a long lovely ha haaa haaa!
ACP sir smiled on Abhijeet's wishing style. Haan Daya…. hum tumhare zaldi recovery ka pray karten hain beta. Mujhe mere sipahi ko zaldi maidaan me dekhna hain phir se. Janamdin ka bahat bahat badhai ho Daya. Humesha khush rehna aur aise hi desh ke liye apna duty puri imandari se nibhate rehna.
Scene changed again into studio. News reader again had seen… yeh toh tha Senior Inspector Daya ka sabse karibi do insaan. Aab apko dikhate hain unke team…. Jee haan darshakon, unka apna CID team.
Within a moment the rest whole team from their bureau central hall appeared in front of TV camera…. Including Freddie, Vivek, Tasha, Mayur & Purvi along with the Forensic expert Dr. Salunkhe and Dr. Pradhan…. They all wished him together as…. Happy Birthday Daya sir/Daya…. get well soon….
Again some random photos of this hard-core cop started running on TV screen…. With a small box side by side where Abhijeet & ACP sir's birthday wishing were shown continuously ….
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Daya really trying hard to normal his irregular vitals…. As he never expected not even in his dream, his elder brother can do something like this…. Abhijeet can plan something for celebrating his Birthday this way….. totally it was beyond his imagination!
Unknowingly he started to chew the food already stuffed in his mouth…. Again a shiver ran down his spine identifying the taste.
Daya couldn't control his emotions anymore and busted into tears with a low love full murmur Bosssss…..
He himself also didn't know why he was crying such harshly…. But somewhere in his core of heart he was just overwhelmed…. He was really moved…. Speechless…. Feeling complete….
Suddenly Daya felt a pair of strong hands wrapped him softly in a soothing hug…. He didn't look upward…. Not a single word came out from his throat…. only he was crying and crying…. Pouring all his love, dependence and faith on that secured shell around him….
After some good moments he calmed down a bit. But still his sobbing sound was echoing in the cabin.
His protecting shell left him and sat in front of him…. Grabbed his palms tightly…. Silently.
Daya tried to utter something but again his throat betrayed due to his overpowering emotions.
He rested his head on his beloved shell's chest with a slow…. Abhijeet!
Abhijeet wrapped him again while waving his hairy scalp.
After a while he forcefully separated Daya & grabbed his chin… kya hua mere bhai ko? Takleef hain kuch, dard ho raha hain kandhe pe? Getting no answer from Daya, he stood up…. Ruk tu, main doctor ko bulake lata hoon.
Daya gripped his wrist tightly. Boss na jao… he requested cutely.
Abhijeet smiled: nehi ja raha hoon kahin re, bas Shambhu ko bolna hain Doctor ko bulane ke liye. Tujhe dard ho raha hain nah…. jhatka lag gaya sayad… itna rota koi, pagal…. He concluded affectionately.
Daya pulled Abhijeet with his unaffected hand…. Tum kahin nehi jaoge Boss. Na hi mujhe dard hain kuch. Tum bas mere pass raho… he wiped his eyes harshly.
Abhijeet naughtily: toh phir itna rona-dhona!
Daya looked this time straight in his buddy's intense eyes…. Tumhe nehi pata?
Abhijeet turned emotional but said nothing, instead of he was just staring at the pure soul.
Daya tighten his grip over Abhijeet's hand…. Kiun mujhe itna jada pyar karte ho Boss? Mujhe kabhi kabhi dar lagta hain tumhara itna pyar se. agar mujhe kabhi kuch ho gaya toh? Abhi tum… tum kayse…. Yaar, mujhse tumhe tutta hua nehi dekha jayega Boss…. he again started weeping.
Abhijeet softly freed his hand and folded near his chest…. Daya, kabhi tum apne parchai se pucha hain kiun wo humesha tumhare sath sath chalta hain?
Daya nodded his head in no confusingly.
Kya tum kabhi apne parchai se picha chura sakte ho? Abhijeet asked sternly.
Sensing his brother's intentions Daya's tear strained face glowed up.
Abhijeet calmly: hum me se kisi ko bhi nehi pata yaar, kal kya hoga. Lekin hume itna zaroor pata hain, jab tak hum dono ek-dusre ke sath hain…. duniya ki koi bhi takat hume alag nehi kar sakta. Toh aaj ke baad tum kabhi yeh phizool ki baten mere samne nehi karoge.
Daya jerked instantly …. Abhiiiii….!
Abhijeet smiled and pushed Daya back in comfortable position…. Tumhare dimag me aise ajib sa khayal kahan se aaya….!
Daya started to make a suitable explanation…. Boss, tum itna kiun der kar di aane me? Mujhe kab se tumhara intezaar tha…. mujhe kuch achha nehi lag raha tha…
Abhijeet completed…. Isi liye main dara-dhamka ke Shambhu ko ankhen dikha ke bahar bhaga diya aur apne Boss ka gussa khud pe nikal liya, haina?
Daya embarrassed… kya yaar!
This time Abhijeet raised his voice…. kya yaar kya, haan? Bachha ho tum… humesha manmani karte rehte ho? Tumhe pata tha nah, confidential meeting tha… aur tumhe yeh bhi pakka pata tha, main kayse bhi kar ke tumhare birthday tak wapas aa hi jaunga. Toh thora intezaar nehi kar saka? Subha subha…. Showing Daya's bandaged shoulder…. ise aur jakhmi karne ka kya zaroorat aa gaya tumhe?
Daya lowered his head…. Tum ek bhi phone nehi kiye kiun mujhe? He questioned stubbornly.
Hey Bhagwan…. Abhijeet sighed. Tumne iss dafar ka dimag me thora sa brain kiun nehi dale! Sirf emotional banake bhej diye mere paas!
While keenly observing Daya's lowered face, Abhijeet initiated softly…. Main aaj subha subha hi laut raha hoon mere bhai. Kal raat meeting khatam hone ke baad jab hum phone use kar sake itne dino baad, main tumhe hi call karne jaa raha tha sabse pahele. Lekin ACP sir ka call aa gaya achanak se aur mujhe tumhare bare me pata chala. Main bhaga bhaga emergency ticket karwake kayse bhi kar ke subha sadhe panch baje Mumbai pahaucha hoon. Mujhe pata tha…. tum bahat gusse me hoge. Toh kuch special plan ki main.
Lekin Boss, aise! Daya muttered slowly sitting in same position.
Abhijeet patted Daya's arm…. Woh kya hain nah… mera joh dost hain, wo bahat jada special hain. Party toh hum har saal rakhte hain aur surprise party bhi. Isme naya kya! Toh maine socha kiun na iss baar kuch anokha kiya jaye!
A boyish grin appeared on Daya's face.
Abhijeet: tumhare liye team ke taraf se khas hospital party ka planning suna. Lekin ek toh tumhara dard ke waqt main tha nehi… upar se hospital me tum apna birthday bitaoge, yeh sab soch ke maine yeh plan thora change kar li aur arrangement bhi kar li fatafat.
Daya didn't buzz.
Abhijeet carefully: yaar, tumhe achha nehi laga? He bend a l'll meeting Daya's gaze.
Daya inhaled deep aur wrapped his elder bro tightly…. Boss, aage se phir kabhi aisa na puchna… tum mere liye kuch karoge aur mujhe achha nehi lagega. Abhijeet, aisa kabhi ho sakta hain bhala? Aur mere liye itne pyar se kuch karne tumhare alawa aur hain hi kaun mera…. His voice lowered gradually with each of the words of his last sentence.
Abhijeet felt a lump in his throat listening that. But kept aside the hidden pain in Daya's voice he took the charge of his younger brother's breakfast…. And started feeding him spoon by spoon.
Daya while enjoying one of his favorite foods: Boss, yeh nasta…. Tum…. kab….
Abhijeet smiled: ghar jaa ke banake bhej diya tha Vivek ke hathon. Aur tum jab khud se fresh hone ka stunt kar rahe the…. tab Shambhu ko maine phone kiya.
Daya cut him…. Boss, Sachin?
Abhijeet looked at his caring buddy…. Sachin kya?
Daya chuckled: aare Boss, Sachin ka bhi toh aaj janamdin hain. Tum mere liye itna khas intezaam kiye…. Ek National News Channel pe yeh dikhaya gaya… use toh bura lagega nah….
Abhijeet nodded disappointedly…. Dayaaa….. sach me tumhara dimag ghas khane hi jata hain kabhi kabhi. Hum usse Video Call kar ke wish kar chuke hain. Aur use pahele se hi pata tha humare planning ke bare me.
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Doctor entered into Daya's cabin to do his routine checkup at nearly half past nine that morning…. & surprised to see Abhijeet present there.
Both the doctor & the dashing cop greeted each-other…. & doctor got busy in his work.
After finishing the examination, looking his tensed face, Abhijeet asked worriedly if there was any complication in Daya's present situation.
Doctor in worried tone: sorry to say sir, sayad kuch jada pressure padh gaya Daya sir ke kandhe pe. Kal raat bhi toh sab thik tha. Lekin aaj achanak…
The doctor turned at Shambhu…. Tum kahan the…. barabari se Daya sir ka khayal kiun nehi rakhe? Unke shoulder pe pressure kayse aane diya tum? Tumse yeh laparwahi ummid nehi tha bilkul…
Shambhu was loss of words. He stood there with down head.
Daya looked at first Abhijeet's silent stormy face then Doctor's angry gesture…. Doctor main hi phishal gaya tha washroom ke bahar. Shambhu toh mujhe pakadhne ki koshish bhi ki, lekin mera body weight sambhala nehi paya. Uska galati nehi hain kuch.
Abhijeet also came forward this time to handle the situation… made safe the word boy from Doctor's further quarry. He well knew about his silly emotional brother who obviously showing his anger of Abhijeet's absence, desperately by doing all the works by himself. He asked Doctor if he could shift Daya to home…. Which obviously turned his buddy shell shock!
Doctor astonished very much… officer, aap jante hain inhe (signaling Daya) kitna care ki zaroorat hain? Ek hafta tak right hand movement bilkul restricted hain aab inka. Ek goli toh kandhe ke aar-parh ho gaya tha…. iss haal me sahi se care na liye jane se inke affected tissues aur bhi damage ho sakta hain. Aur aap is waqt discharge ki baat kar rahe hain!
Abhijeet tried to make him understand: yah doctor, I agree with you. But I can assure you, there will be no mistake from our side relating Daya's health.
Doctor seemed not satisfied… lekin ACP sir bhi…
Abhijeet cut him…. ACP sir ko pata hain. Balki yeh unka hi request hain, Daya ko please ghar le jane ki permission de dijiye. Hum pura khayal rakhenge aur uska hathon ka movement bhi restricted hi rahega.
Doctor lastly nodded in positive and without looking at confused Daya, Abhijeet followed the doctor outside happily.
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