"Lets rock" normal talk
"LETS ROCK" shout or english words
"lets rock " thoudhts
"LETS ROCK" SUMMONS/MOVES/BIJUU/JUSTU
Ok since one of you guys said to do a voting system on the pairing I am gonna do it so here are the rules first I will put a harem or singles pairing, if the single pairing is chosen then the girl with the most votes will be it but if the harem wins then it will be the top two girls from each show because my harem is max four, five if there is a tie among them and if not it will be a 3 to 1 harem. The time limit is two weeks after this chapter is posted. now here it is ( note these girls are final, I will not add anymore )
Single pairings: 0
Harem: 0
Naruto girls
Shizuka:0
Kurenai:0
Anko:0
Temari:0
Karin:0 ( since some are recommending it )
Samui:0
Hana:0
Tayuya:0
Fem Haku:0
Kurotsuchi:0
Tenten:0
Sengoku basara
Kasuga:0
Nohime:0
Oichi:0
Magoichi:0
Kyogoku Maria:0
Naotora:0
And thats it see you in two weeks. Now on with the story
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After a long trip, they managed to reach Tazuna's house. When they went in, they were greeted by Tsunami; Tanzuna's daughter as she invited them into the house. After Tanzuna told his story, she thanked them to which Kakashi said they were doing their job and didn't need to say thanks.
She then prepared dinner which they enjoy until the sound of a door opening cause their heads to turn and there they saw a boy a few years younger than the quadruplets walking in. "Oh Inari, welcome back. these are the people that your grandfather hired to protect us from."
But the kid just stare at them for a while before going up to his room, "what's his problem?" ask Kenzo. Tanzuna then told them how he lost his father to Gato and how it affected him. Kakashi then told them that they will train tomorrow to prepare for Zabuza and his accomplice to which they nodded and went to bed for the night.
( Morning a nearby forest )
After breakfast, the Team find themselves in the forest nearby Tanzuna's house as Kakashi started explaining their task for the day.
"All right, today we are going to do some training just in case Zabuza decides to attack but that won't be for a while so lets get started, Naruko and Narumi will go train with Kushina in your kenjustu while Kenzo I am gonna train you in some elemental attack. Naruto you are gonna start climbing trees to work on your chakra control." said Kakashi to which Naruto look at him with a deadpan face.
"Wow, for a so called former ANBU captain, your observation skills suck but then again reading those books could make any VIRGIN man dumb and blind cause they are to busy to find a REAL woman. Where did I and Zabuza fight on cause I was pretty sure it wasn't dry land."
They girls were giggling at him while Kushina was laughing her ass of, hell even Kenzo smirked a little at his expense, Kakshi's eye twitch a little before he thought back to the fight and his eyes widen in surprise which Naruto saw and gave him a smirk, then he said "That's right I was walking on water you idiot, hell I was skating on top of Zabuza's water dragon when we were fighting, WATER SKATING you hear!"
Kakashi hung his head down because of that deceleration but then Naruto continued "so just leave me alone to train by myself and we'll be all good since you guys can't teach me much anyway." With that Naruto just walked away to train by himself leaving the team by themselves but one of them was glaring at him.
After that they train like this for a few days until one day Narumi went to confront Naruto after Kushina finished her training for the day and went to train Naruko, she found him practicing some taijustu katas on top of the lake while she saw some clones reading some scrolls, he notice her and ask "what are you doing here?"
"I came here to see if you were goofing off but now maybe you might have some brain in that head of yours." said Narumi
"Seriously, you and Kenzo need to keep your ego in check before it comes and bite you back in the ass." said Naruto with a deadpan face.
"What do you know, from what I can tell you are still that attention seeking brat from all those years ago. I can't believed that mom and dad still chose to keep you because from what I can tell, you are still a disgrace to the family so why don't you just go ahead and get out of our lives already. After all that name you chose is probably for some no name loser like you!"
As soon as finished that sentence she was flown back by a punch from Naruto and boy was he pissed at how his own sister was talking to him like this but this was the last straw and now he decided to give his beloved sister an overdue spanking she deserves. Narumi got up and then lunged at him drawing her sword at him which all he did was sidestep and gave her a trip which she stumbled a little but managed to get her footing straight, she turned around only to see a fist that connected to her face as she flew back a few feet before coming to a stop.
She readied her sword for another strike only for Naruto to disappear and then gave her a roundhouse kick to the head to which she rolled over to lessen the damage. She quickly flashed some handsigns and called out WATER STYLE: WATER DRILL BULLET which she shot water like projectiles at him, Naruto dodge those projectiles easily as he flashed his own handsigns and then calling out WATER STYLE: DANCE OF THE HYDRA, with that eight serpents came out of the water and lunged themselves at Narumi. She managed to dodge some of it but she got hit by five of the serpents causing her to fly back breaking some trees in the process.
Naruto walked towards the damage area only to find himself being chain up, he look to the side to see Narumi barely standing as she was panting hard. Naruto saw this at told her in a cold tone "if you think your precious chains can hold me then you've got another thing coming." after that he just ripped the chains that binded him with pure brute strength which shocked Narumi before she was given another wicked right hook that sent her flying once more to the ground.
Now Narumi was scared as she had never seen her brother angry before and now here he was, ready to beat her to an inch of her life without a care in the world but just before anything could happen, Kakashi and Kushina came out of nowhere and stood in front of her readying themselves at Naruto.
"Naruto what the hell do you think you are doing to your sister." Said Kakashi
"Sister? Don't make me laugh Kakashi, I only have one family and that's for me to know and you to fuck off."
"What family, you only have us as your family." said Kushina
"Hah now that's a good joke. Since when have I ever been part of your stupid family you red hair bitch."
"That's enough Naruto now apologize to your mother right now." said an angry Kakashi.
"I do as I damn please you useless fanboy, tell me this then do you even know what my favorite food is." Naruto ask, Kakashi and Kushina wondered about the question before answering.
"Is ramen isn't it?" said Kakashi as everyone in the family loved ramen but that proved to be a mistake.
"HAHAHAHAHAHA, oh now this is too good to be true, I NEVER LIKE THAT SHIT! SURE ONCE IN A WHILE MAYBE BUT ALL THE TIME, I AM ACTUALLY SURPRISE THAT RED HAIR WOMEN COULD GROW EATING THAT SHIT ALL THE TIME AND NOW JUST PROVED MY POINT, YOU GUYS DON'T GIVE A MONKEYS NUT SACK AT WHAT I DO. SURE I PLAYED PRANKS AROUND THE VILLAGE TO GET IN TROUBLE BUT DO YOU KNOW WHY? ITS BECAUSE SHIT HEADS LIKE YOU DIDN'T EVEN BOTHER TO LOOK AT ME AND WHEN I DID THE PRANKS, YOU JUST PUNISHED ME AND THROW YOURSELVES AT THE SIBLINGS AND LOOK AT THEM NOW, KENZO IS LIKE THAT DUCK BUTT EMO FAGGOT AND NARUMI HERSELF IS GETTING ARROGANT BY THE MINUTE BECAUSE SHE COULDN'T FIGURE OUT THE MOST IMPORTANT PART OF A SHINOBI AND THAT IS DECEPTION. THE ONLY DECENT ONE IS NARUKO BECAUSE AT LEAST SHE CARED ABOUT ME A LITTLE, WHY DID YOU THINK THAT I SENT A SHADOW CLONE TO ASK FOR HER HELP ONLY YOU DENSE IDIOTS. AND FURTHER MORE DO YOU GUYS EVEN BOTHER WHY I NEVER WALKED WITH YOU PEOPLE, THAT'S BECAUSE I DIDN'T WANT TO BE SEEN BY A BUNCH OF PEOPLE THAT WOULD GIVE EVERYTHING TO SOMEONE WHILE THEY FORGOT THE OTHER AND HERE I THOUGHT UZUMAKI'S NEVER ABANDON ONE ANOTHER BUT FROM WHAT I'VE SEEN KUSHINA-SAMA, YOU ARE A DISGRACE TO THAT NAME SO I SUGGEST YOU GUYS USE THAT PEE WEE SIZE THING YOU CALL A BRAIN AND THINK BEFORE YOU FLAPPED YOU LIPS LIKE FISH ON DRY LAND."
Ranted Naruto as he released some of the anger he had bottled up for all these years and with each rant, Kushina started sobbing uncontrollably until she dropped down crying, Kakashi saw this and tried to comfort her while Naruto just look at them impassively, he walked away a little before turning his head a little and told them
"I won't be back for a while so don't bother finding me and Narumi, I suggest you actually learn what happens around you because this world is never black and white so wake up and smell the roses cause I ain't gonna be there if you fall."
And with that he left for the day
( I did this cause some might want a fem Haku and since Inari's rant has been use too much so I thought I could try this out to set the mood a little for when Naruto meets Haku )
( The morning after Naruto left )
Morning came as a figure walked through the forest with a basket in hand picking herbs on the forest floor, as the figure walked deeper into the woods it saw what appear to be slash marks on the trees. Curious, the figure followed the slash marks until she reached a clearing but this clearing was man-made as the area was surrounded by craters, fallen trees, destroyed rocks etc and in that clearing the figure saw a boy no older than she was lying on the forest floor in the middle of the carnage.
The figure then recognized the boy as the one who beat Zabuza some time ago, it then got closer to him contemplating whether to kill him or wake him until he spoke.
"If you're gonna try and kill someone, make sure that they are not a really asleep."
The figure got spook a little but then calmly told him "I was just curious because I thought you were one of Gato's thugs."
"Don't worry I am not." said Naruto as he looked at the figure in front of him and he couldn't help but whistle because in front of him was a beautiful girl with silky long black hair, fair maiden like skin and wearing a pink kimono.
"But then begs the question, what are you doing out here miss." asked Naruto
"Oh, I'm out here to pick some herbs for my friend, he is really sick and I don't have enough money for a doctor."
"I see, well name's Naruto Date what's yours Missy"
"My name's Haku and I'm a guy Naruto." said Haku as he thought that he would react the same way as others did in the past when they made a pass at her but was shocked when she heard him say
"And another piece of advice, don't bother tricking people like me because I can tell the difference, so want me to help you with it."
"ok I guess." And with that they spent the whole day picking herbs. As they were about to part ways Naruto told her this "tell Zabuza I said hi and to get ready for an ass kicking for a lifetime." he smirked when he saw her shocked face and he then disappear in a flash, Haku stared at the spot a little before grabbing the herbs and headed back to Zabuza.
Naruto flashed outside of Tanzuna's house and then headed in, he saw his team eating dinner but he saw some emotions ranging from fear and realization by Narumi to sadness and longing by Kushina while Kakashi had a hint of both anger and sadness on his face.
Naruko came up and said "hey onii-chan where did you go?" Naruto then answer that he was blowing off some steam and left it at that, surprisingly Kenzo didn't say anything which was weird to him but shrugged as he went to bed. "I really need to control my emotions better cause that took more than I normally use, but then again I do feel a little bit relieved like a weight on my chest was take off me. oh well time for bed." He thought as he slowly closed his eyes and fell asleep.
The next day Naruto slowly opened his eyes as light shone into his room, "crap, how long was I asleep" but he was brought out of his thoughts when a scream was heard and he quickly grabbed his stuff and headed for the noise.
( outside )
Tsunami was in trouble as two guys who worked for Gato barged into her house and dragged her out so that she can be use as a hostage, Inari tried to save her but was back handed by one of the thugs and now they were planning on raping her "please someone, anyone help me" she prayed as she waited for the inevitable but before anything could happen she heard someone shouted MAGNUM STEP and then a scream followed afterwards. She open her eyes and saw Naruto standing there as he walked towards her and untie the ropes, she hugged him while saying thank you over and over again.
After a while, she calm down and Naruto asked her where are the rest. She told him they were at the bridge but they didn't want to wake him up so they went ahead first, Naruto nodded at her answer and headed for the bridge but not before telling Inari for a job well done and that his father would be proud of him, he then quickly took off to the bridge.
( Bridge )
A thick fog was laced at the bridge as Tanzuna was sweating because he couldn't tell what was happening only that he was nervous for some reason. Inside the mist however was a dome made of ice and inside it was Naruko and Narumi, Kenzo stayed near Tanzuna as a precaution while another side was Kakashi and Kushina fighting Zabuza. The fight was heating up as Zabuza tried to cut Kakashi but he managed to block it with a kunai to which Kushina tried to capitalized by coming to Zabuza's side and giving it a downward slash, it connected only for it to become a puddle of water. Zabuza was about to go for another clash before a shockwave of KI cause him to back off a little. "What the hell is this, is it Kakashi or Kushina. no it's more sinister than that." Zabuza wondered but those weren't the thoughts of the two sensei's
"Is this the Kyuubi's chakra coming out, if so who is the one using it." was Kakashi's thoughts
"No it can't be, I need to hurry and finished him off and try to control it before it gets out off hand." Kushina thought as she hastily charged at Zabuza hoping to end it
Inside the dome was Narumi holding onto a lifeless Naruko as she draw out the powers of the Kyuubi "YOU KILLED HER YOU BITCH NOW I AM GONNA MAKE YOU PAY" said Narumi while she kept drawing onto the Kyuubi's chakra before she charged at the masked hunter nin who was inside a mirror made of ice, she thought that the Ice would protect her but the the punch connected and she was forced out of the mirror. She was shocked at what happen but then another punch connected to her face as Narumi saw red because the person in front of her killed her sister.
She was charging up a RASENGAN and when she was done, she charged at the nin and was about to connect by all of a sudden somebody grabbed her hand before the RASENGAN hit her, she turned to see Naruto grabbing her arm and looking at her with an impassive face before she shouted "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING, THIS IS THE PERSON WHO KILLED NARUKO SO LET ME GO BECAUSE I AM GONNA KILL HER."
Naruto then look and Narumi and shake his head a little before asking "did you even bother to see where the senbon needles hit Naruko before going all Kyuubi on her cause from what I saw, she is still much alive isn't that right Haku." As he turn to see Haku's mask falling apart showing her face that was in shocked at his observation but then she answer "Yes, I never liked killing in the first place so I placed her in a sleep like state."
As soon as she heard this Narumi calmed down till the Kyuubi cloak disappear and then she was panting a little because of using the Kyuubi chakra but she was relieved as soon as she heard that Naruko was still alive but before they did anything else, a loud chirping noise was heard and Naruto and Narumi recognized it then they heard Haku said this "I am sorry Naruto but I have still have a job to do for Zabuza as she SHUNSHIN towards Zabuza's position.
Kakashi was about to kill Zabuza with his CHIDORI but then he saw the hunter nin coming out of nowhere, he tried to stop but he couldn't and before anyone knew it Naruto came out of nowhere and grabbed Kakashi's hand to deflect the CHIDORI while his other hand grabbed Haku as he turned while giving a kick to Zabuza's chest to get him out of the way.
After registering what happen Kakashi was about to ask Naruto something but a clapping sound was heard and everyone turned to see a short man being led by a couple dozen thugs. "Well well, turns out the demon of the mist was nothing more than a weakling because you can't kill a simple bridge builder."
"Gato, what are you doing here." growled Zabuza
"What do you think, you nins are so expensive so I hired these thugs to cut you out of the deal since they only cost less than you do. Now go and kill them all except for the girls since they will make a nice edition for the brothels." said Gato
The group was tired after the fight but they have no choice because it was do or die, Kakashi was about to throw a tri-progned kunai before a sinister laughter caused them to see Naruto grinning like a mad man as he walked towards the thugs. Kushina called out to him but to no avail as he continue walking towards them
( Play JAP by Abingdon school boys)
( Instrumental )
"Look at this boys, the kid thinks he can take us on."
"Lets show him a dose of reality."
"YEAH!"
The thugs charged straight towards Naruto who was still walking slowly with that grin still on his face because through his eyes time slowed down for him and when the thugs got close. he strike
( WHOO WHOO )
JET-X Naruto called out as he cross slashes forward with his six swords and then followed up with PHANTOM DIVE as the shockwaves from it cause the thugs to be sliced in half because Naruto pumped more chakra in it. Those moves alone killed 9 men in one go which cause a shock on their faces when they saw this but they steeled their nerves and attack him once more in sheer numbers. Naruto grinned as he saw this and he said "COME ON, THIS DRAGON IS JUST GETTING STARTED." as he went to meet their charged.
Inside Out butta kire bonnou tatsu Trigger
Naruto sliced one thugs arm off and gave him a kick which knocked him into another while he stabbed a guy behind him with his sword in a reverse grip before slicing from the waist down
shou mo my Pride nante gomi no hi ni sutete HEY HEY!
Naruto followed the momentum to block a strike, then he saw a thug coming from his left so he use his free left hand to draw his sword on his right side as he turned in a circle which slashed another two thugs plus the one he block earlier with in half.
issaigassai karu samurai It Crazy
He then gave another thug a round house kick to the chest before giving a double slash to another who tried to sneak up on him.
nainen no kikan ga unari o ageru nda
The thug drop to show Naruto with his swords facing downwards to his left.
Life It goes on tadareta sekai datte
Naruto slowly stood with one of his sword on his shoulder while another was still facing the ground, both dripping in blood
nageiteru sono mae ni
The thugs look at him wearily before they look at each other thinking on what to do next because this kid just took out a dozen men in a few seconds .
kaze yo izanae michi naru hou e
Naruto just pointed at one of them with his sword and gave a come here taunt with it, the thug charged then the others soon follow. Naruto saw this and smirked as he sheathed one of the swords only to bring out two more in his other hand and thrust it using his speed shouting out
Untamed~
wakiagaru netsu to kusuburu tamashii ga mune o shimetsukeru
MAGNUM STEP PIERCER, this move is just like the normal MAGNUM STEP but Naruto pumped chakra in it so it created an extended sword made of lightning which killed 8 thugs with it before giving his claws a swipe to rip out the men that were skewered by his swords. This momentum allowed him to follow up with his other move as he gave an upwards slash to his enemies as he called out DEATH FANG, following that he gave a triple slash on another thug on the bottom.
Some way~
moeru hi no you ni There, I'll find my place
Under the rader I'm reaching for the sky
( instrumental )
Once he landed, he quickly throw the swords on his hand in one swing which killed three more thugs coming towards him. Naruto then jumped backed flip to prevent him from getting slash from the legs as he use his left hand and one swing, he beheaded another two men. The mens head dropped as the thugs realized that they were outmatched, some of them wanted to run away Gato saw this and shouted out about tripling their price. Suddenly the thugs got their second wind and charge at him throwing reason aside.
Deep Inside buppanase honnou sasu Frequence
Naruto grin even more as he appear in front of them and slash horizontally from right to left killing three of them in that swing then using the body as a weapon, he round house kick them which sent them flying towards their comrades as he jump to give a downward slash to the one behind him.
Beat Rhyme Flow dangan o mashingan e souten HEY HEY!
Turning his sword into a reverse grip, he stabbed a guy behind him without looking and then he use his sheath to shoot one of his two remaining swords like a crossbow with the hilt facing forward hit a thug in the face which broke his nose if the blood was any indication.
ittou ryoudan kyokutou Winds To Blow Down
The sword fell with the tip stabbing the ground as Naruto flashed a one handed sign calling out WIND STYLE: GREAT WIND BREAKTHROUGH, with it a gust of wind blew some the thugs away
michi naki michi e to migaite susumu nda
Time then stood still for Naruto as the thugs were slowly getting up to regain their footing as he still has his sword stuck in the guy behind him
As time goes by oto no yaiba de motte
The thugs saw this predicament as now he was in a circle surrounded by them, all of a sudden they grin at this.
kirihiraku sono saki ni
ware o michibike hikari no hou e
"Charge" one of them shouted as everyone charge onto his position leaving him no escape. Once they were close enough, Naruto spin his body as the sword got out of the body via forcefully slash out as Naruto called out.
Untamed~
hakidasu itami ni shibireru karada ga mata uzukidasu
LIGHTNING STORM VORTEX, this move killed threw the thugs into the air either killing or stunning them along with the dead bodies nearby because this move combines both wind and lightning chakra to create a mini tornado to launch enemies into the air.
Some way~
tozashita hitomi ni Now I face the change
Illuminate the glow I have inside
Blaze your mind~
Naruto stopped spinning as he regain back his footing and then he turned to see the remaining thugs and Gato looking at him with fear. He then slowly walked towards them.
YEAH
DO NOT be dominated DO NOT let'em take you away ( FIGHT FIGHT )
dohatsu ten tsuku raimei todoroke bakuon Ride On
DO WHAT you believe is right DO WHAT you can do at a time ( FIGHT FIGHT )
dosuru kami no shoutei kurawaserya ii nda
Gato and his thugs were peeing in their pants right now as this monster in front of them just wiped out 3/4 of their members and now he is walking towards them as bodies literary started falling from the sky. They saw his clothes and his hair being painted red from the blood which was falling like rain drops as he still has a grin on his face as he was looking at them like a sadistic man. One of them couldn't take it any more and started running away but then Naruto saw this and then charged as he grabbed his fallen swords along the way.
( Instrumental )
He appear in between the running man and his comrades, they widen their eyes as he called out CRAZY STORM. Screams were heard as Naruto cut and rip apart anything he sees with his swords and no man was safe from him, an archer tried his luck as he fired an arrow at him but he blocked it and charged at him, he tried to run but he was to slow as Naruto quickly cut his head off. He then saw a few more running away while some tried to jump off the bridge but Naruto was having none of that so he channeled lightning chakra towards his body and then in a flash, he disappear.
Untamed~
wakiagaru netsu to kusuburu tamashii ga mune o shimetsukeru
The thugs that ran away were shocked by Naruto's pressence as he called out TESTAMENT, when he did he did a horizontal slash which created a blue sword like aura that cut through them and those that weren't killed was knocked back by the force.
Some way~
moeru hi no you ni There, I'll find my place
Under the radar I'm reaching for the sky
Naruto use chakra strings to connect onto his swords and then he swung it in a horizontal arc which killed those that tried to jumped over the railings. Naruto control the blades as he threw it upwards before recalling them in his hands and then sheathing them.
hagane no kiba o tate umeki to koe o age
Naruto walked towards Gato was shivering in fear, he tried to bribe him but then
I'm gonna live out my life untamed~ ( FIGHT FIGHT )
Naruto charged at him quickly unsheathing his sword and in one swing he cut his head off. The head flew as Naruto slowly sheathed his sword and then the head hit the ground with a thud.
( End song )
Everyone had a different reaction as Naruto walked towards one of the thugs who was alive. Narumi was shocked at the sight as she was putting Naruko down on the railings, Kenzo was starting to go green at it while Tanzuna thought about swearing off drinking sake forever. Kakashi and Kushina wondered how did he get those justu to kill all those men and wondered if he was okay after killing them. Zabuza and Haku watched with an impassive expression because both of them had seen people die before but Zabuza was impress by his skills.
The thug that was alive was scared shitless as Naruto walked towards him, he was then grabbed by Naruto who lock his gaze at him. Naruto told him in a cold and dangerously low tone "THE REASON I AM LETTING YOU LEAVE IS SO THAT YOU CAN PASSED THIS ON TO THIS ON TO EVERYBODY."
Naruto threw him down before shouting towards the sky "GO AND TELL EVERYONE THAT NARUTO DATE, THE ONE EYE DRAGON OF KONOHA IS HERE AND ANYONE WHO DARES CHALLENGE ME WILL FALL BEFORE MY BLADE AND THEIR SOUL WILL BE SENT STRAIGHT TO THE DEEPEST PART OF HELL, SO RUN AND SPREAD MY MESSAGE TO ALL, NOW GO AND GET OUT OF MY SIGHT."
The thug started to run away in fear when Naruto finished his sentence as lightning flashed behind him adding the dramatic effect to it. Once the thug was out of sight, Naruto turned to see the rest of his team and Tanzuna staring at him before he started to thought to himself "this is gonna be a long week." as he carried Naruko on his back and motion them to head back to the house to regroup.
( somewhere in the border of iwa )
The thug ran towards a shop barging in ignoring the rest of the people as he headed straight for the counter, the man saw his state and ask what happen.
He shouted "I need you to add someone to the bingo book now!"
"OK, no need to shout. So what's his name that got you so riled up." said the shopkeeper as he took out a pen and book.
"His name is Naruto Date, and his moniker is the one eye dragon of konoha." said the man in fear.
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And that's a wrapped, this is my first in doing a song with a fight so don't flame to hard and to those who wanted Zabuza and Naruto to duke it out don't worry, I've already prepare for it in the next chapter. Before I end this I would like to return a comment given to me by a guest who wrote it after Alucard the crimson fucker.
I've got two things to say to you, read another story or WRITE YOUR GODDAMN OWN, YOU SAY THAT YOU HATE NARUTO NEGLECT STORIES SO WHY BOTHER READING THEM IN THE FIRST PLACE, I MAY BE A NEW GUY IN WRITING BUT I DON'T GIVE COMMENT'S LIKE THIS TO PEOPLE SINCE EVERYONE HAS THEIR OWN KIND OF STORY IN MIND, YOU COMMENT ON MY WRITING SKILLS OR HOW I MAKE A SENTENCE IS FINE WITH ME BUT IF YOU COMMENT STUFF LIKE SAYING I AM AN IDIOT FOR WRITING THIS KIND OF STORY EVENTHOUGH YOU ORIGINALLY HATE THIS KIND OF STORY IN THE FIRST PLACE REALLY TAKES THE CAKE SO I SUGGEST AGAIN THAT YOU READ A STORY YOU ACTUALLY LIKE OR WRITE YOUR GODDAMN OWN AND THEN YOU CAN SEE IT AS MANY TIMES AS YOU LIKE JACKASS
Ok ranting done, sorry about that but most of what I said is kinda true so rate and review JA NE